Message

Sara Teasdale (1884–1933) · 1917

iambic trimeter · ABAB · 8 lines · from Love Songs

I heard a cry in the night,A thousand miles it came,Sharp as a flash of light,My name, my name!

It was your voice I heard,You waked and loved me so--I send you back this word,I know, I know!

About this text

Message is in the public domain. This text is taken from Love Songs, Project Gutenberg ebook #442; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Sara Teasdale, Message, in Love Songs (1917), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #442, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/teasdale-love-songs/message.html, id L08098.

Form and metre

Message is 8 lines in 2 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 5.9 syllables.

See other poems in iambic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB nightA · cameB · lightA · nameB
  2. 2 ABAB heardA · soB · wordA · knowB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I heard a cry in the night,7·······
A thousand miles it came,6·/˘···
Sharp as a flash of light,6······
My name, my name!4····
It was your voice I heard,6······
You waked and loved me so--6······
I send you back this word,6······
I know, I know!4····

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