In Memory of John William Inchbold
Farewell: how should not such as thou fare well,Though we fare ill that love thee, and that live,And know, whate'er the days wherein we dwellMay give us, thee again they will not give?
Peace, rest, and sleep are all we know of death,And all we dream of comfort: yet for thee,Whose breath of life was bright and strenuous breath,We think the change is other than we see.
The seal of sleep set on thine eyes to-daySurely can seal not up the keen swift lightThat lit them once for ever. Night can slayNone save the children of the womb of night.
The fire that burns up dawn to bring forth noonWas father of thy spirit: how shouldst thouDie as they die for whom the sun and moonAre silent? Thee the darkness holds not now:
Them, while they looked upon the light, and deemedThat life was theirs for living in the sun,The darkness held in bondage: and they dreamed,Who knew not that such life as theirs was none.
To thee the sun spake, and the morning sangNotes deep and clear as life or heaven: the seaThat sounds for them but wild waste music rangNotes that were lost not when they rang for thee.
The mountains clothed with light and night and change,The lakes alive with wind and cloud and sun,Made answer, by constraint sublime and strange,To the ardent hand that bade thy will be done.
We may not bid the mountains mourn, the seaThat lived and lightened from thine hand againMoan, as of old would men that mourned as weA man beloved, a man elect of men,
A man that loved them. Vain, divine and vain,The dream that touched with thoughts or tears of oursThe spirit of sense that lives in sun and rain,Sings out in birds, and breathes and fades in flowers.
Not for our joy they live, and for our griefThey die not. Though thine eye be closed, thine handPowerless as mine to paint them, not a leafIn English woods or glades of Switzerland
Falls earlier now, fades faster. All our loveMoves not our mother's changeless heart, who givesA little light to eyes and stars above,A little life to each man's heart that lives.
A little life to heaven and earth and sea,To stars and souls revealed of night and day,And change, the one thing changeless: yet shall sheCease too, perchance, and perish. Who shall say?
Our mother Nature, dark and sweet as sleep,And strange as life and strong as death, holds fast,Even as she holds our hearts alive, the deepDumb secret of her first-born births and last.
But this, we know, shall cease not till the strifeOf nights and days and fears and hopes find end;This, through the brief eternities of life,Endures, and calls from death a living friend;
The love made strong with knowledge, whence confirmedThe whole soul takes assurance, and the past(So by time's measure, not by memory's, termed)Lives present life, and mingles first with last.
I, now long since thy guest of many days,Who found thy hearth a brother's, and with theeTracked in and out the lines of rolling baysAnd banks and gulfs and reaches of the sea--
Deep dens wherein the wrestling water sobsAnd pants with restless pain of refluent breathTill all the sunless hollow sounds and throbsWith ebb and flow of eddies dark as death--
I know not what more glorious world, what wavesMore bright with life,--if brighter aught may liveThan those that filled and fled their tidal caves--May now give back the love thou hast to give.
Tintagel, and the long Trebarwith sand,Lone Camelford, and Boscastle divineWith dower of southern blossom, bright and blandAbove the roar of granite-baffled brine,
Shall hear no more by joyous night or dayFrom downs or causeways good to rove and rideOr feet of ours or horse-hoofs urge their wayThat sped us here and there by tower and tide.
The headlands and the hollows and the waves,For all our love, forget us: where I amThou art not: deeper sleeps the shadow on gravesThan in the sunless gulf that once we swam.
Thou hast swum too soon the sea of death: for usToo soon, but if truth bless love's blind beliefFaith, born of hope and memory, says not thus:And joy for thee for me should mean not grief.
And joy for thee, if ever soul of manFound joy in change and life of ampler birthThan here pens in the spirit for a span,Must be the life that doubt calls death on earth.
For if, beyond the shadow and the sleep,A place there be for souls without a stain,Where peace is perfect, and delight more deepThan seas or skies that change and shine again,
There none of all unsullied souls that liveMay hold a surer station: none may lendMore light to hope's or memory's lamp, nor giveMore joy than thine to those that called thee friend.
Yea, joy from sorrow's barren womb is bornWhen faith begets on grief the godlike child:As midnight yearns with starry sense of mornIn Arctic summers, though the sea wax wild,
So love, whose name is memory, thrills at heart,Remembering and rejoicing in thee, nowAlive where love may dream not what thou artBut knows that higher than hope or love art thou.
"Whatever heaven, if heaven at all may be,Await the sacred souls of good men dead,There, now we mourn who loved him here, is he,"So, sweet and stern of speech, the Roman said,
Erect in grief, in trust erect, and gaveHis deathless dead a deathless life even hereWhere day bears down on day as wave on waveAnd not man's smile fades faster than his tear.
Albeit this gift be given not me to give,Nor power be mine to break time's silent spell,Not less shall love that dies not while I liveBid thee, beloved in life and death, farewell.
Words in this poem 19
- dwell v. i.
- To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
- strenuous a.
- Eagerly pressing or urgent; zealous; ardent; earnest; bold; valiant; intrepid; as, a strenuous advocate for national rights; a strenuous reformer; a strenuous defender of his country.
- womb n.
- The belly; the abdomen. [OE. wombe, wambe, AS. wamb, womb; akin to D. wam belly, OS. & OHG. wamba, G. wamme, wampe, Icel. vömb, Sw. v&mb, Dan. vom, Goth. wamba.]
- bade
- A form of the pat tense of Bid.
- changeless a.
- That can not be changed; constant; as, a changeless purpose.
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- strife n.
- The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]
- refluent a.
- Flowing back; returning; ebbing. [L. refluens, p. pr. of refluere to flow back; pref. re- re- + fluere to flow. See Flurent.]
- sunless a.
- Destitute or deprived of the sun or its rays; shaded; shadowed.
- glorious a.
- Exhibiting attributes, qualities, or acts that are worthy of or receive glory; noble; praiseworthy; excellent; splendid; illustrious; inspiring admiration; as, glorious deeds. [OF. glorios, glorious, F. glorieux, fr. L. gloriosus. See Glory, n.]
- aught n.
- Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]
- tidal a.
- Of or pertaining to tides; caused by tides; having tides; periodically rising and falling, or following and ebbing; as, tidal waters.
- hast
- , 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
- lone n.
- A lane. See Loanin.
- starry a.
- Abounding with stars; adorned with stars.
- morn n.
- The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
- await v. t.
- To watch for; to look out for. [OF. awaitier, agaitier; (L. ad) + waitier, gaitier to watch, F. guetter. See Wait.]
- deathless a.
- Not subject to death, destruction, or extinction; immortal; undying; imperishable; as, deathless beings; deathless fame.
- albeit conj.
- Even though; although; notwithstanding. [OE. al be although it be, where al is our all. Cf. Although.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
In Memory of John William Inchbold is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems and Ballads (Third Series) Taken from The Collected Poetical Works of Algernon Charles Swinburne—Vol. III, Project Gutenberg ebook #18726; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
In Memory of John William Inchbold is 120 lines in 30 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 47% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABAB wellA · liveB · dwellA · giveB
- 2 ABAB deathA · theeB · breathA · seeB
- 3 ABAB dayA · lightB · slayA · nightB
- 4 ABAB noonA · thouB · moonA · nowB
- 5 ABAB deemedA · sunB · dreamedA · noneB
- 6 ABAB sangA · seaB · rangA · theeB
- 7 ABAB changeA · sunB · strangeA · doneB
- 8 ABAB seaA · againB · weA · menB
- 9 ABAB vainA · oursB · rainA · flowersB
- 10 ABAB griefA · handB · leafA · switzerlandB
- 11 ABAB loveA · givesB · aboveA · livesB
- 12 ABAB seaA · dayB · sheA · sayB
- 13 ABAB sleepA · fastB · deepA · lastB
- 14 ABAB strifeA · endB · lifeA · friendB
- 15 ABAB confirmedA · pastB · termedA · lastB
- 16 ABAB daysA · theeB · baysA · seaB
- 17 ABAB sobsA · breathB · throbsA · deathB
- 18 ABAB wavesA · liveB · cavesA · giveB
- 19 ABAB sandA · divineB · blandA · brineB
- 20 ABAB dayA · rideB · wayA · tideB
- 21 ABAB wavesA · amB · gravesA · swamB
- 22 ABAB usA · beliefB · thusA · griefB
- 23 ABAB manA · birthB · spanA · earthB
- 24 ABAB sleepA · stainB · deepA · againB
- 25 ABAB liveA · lendB · giveA · friendB
- 26 ABAB bornA · childB · mornA · wildB
- 27 ABAB heartA · nowB · artA · thouB
- 28 ABAB beA · deadB · heA · saidB
- 29 ABAB gaveA · hereB · waveA · tearB
- 30 ABAB giveA · spellB · liveA · farewellB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Farewell: how should not such as thou fare well, | 10 | ·/········ |
| Though we fare ill that love thee, and that live, | 10 | ·········· |
| And know, whate'er the days wherein we dwell | 11 | ··˘˘/······ |
| May give us, thee again they will not give? | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| Peace, rest, and sleep are all we know of death, | 10 | ·········· |
| And all we dream of comfort: yet for thee, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Whose breath of life was bright and strenuous breath, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| We think the change is other than we see. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| The seal of sleep set on thine eyes to-day | 10 | ·········· |
| Surely can seal not up the keen swift light | 10 | /˘········ |
| That lit them once for ever. Night can slay | 9 | ·····/··· |
| None save the children of the womb of night. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| The fire that burns up dawn to bring forth noon | 10 | ·/········ |
| Was father of thy spirit: how shouldst thou | 9 | ·/˘··/··· |
| Die as they die for whom the sun and moon | 10 | ·········· |
| Are silent? Thee the darkness holds not now: | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| Them, while they looked upon the light, and deemed | 10 | ·········· |
| That life was theirs for living in the sun, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| The darkness held in bondage: and they dreamed, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| Who knew not that such life as theirs was none. | 10 | ·········· |
| To thee the sun spake, and the morning sang | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Notes deep and clear as life or heaven: the sea | 10 | ·······/·· |
| That sounds for them but wild waste music rang | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Notes that were lost not when they rang for thee. | 10 | ·········· |
| The mountains clothed with light and night and change, | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| The lakes alive with wind and cloud and sun, | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| Made answer, by constraint sublime and strange, | 10 | ·/˘·˘/˘/·· |
| To the ardent hand that bade thy will be done. | 11 | ··/˘······· |
| We may not bid the mountains mourn, the sea | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| That lived and lightened from thine hand again | 10 | ···/˘···˘/ |
| Moan, as of old would men that mourned as we | 10 | ·········· |
| A man beloved, a man elect of men, | 10 | ··˘/··˘/·· |
| A man that loved them. Vain, divine and vain, | 10 | ······˘/·· |
| The dream that touched with thoughts or tears of ours | 10 | ·········/ |
| The spirit of sense that lives in sun and rain, | 10 | ·/········ |
| Sings out in birds, and breathes and fades in flowers. | 10 | ·········/ |
| Not for our joy they live, and for our grief | 10 | ··/·····/· |
| They die not. Though thine eye be closed, thine hand | 10 | ·········· |
| Powerless as mine to paint them, not a leaf | 10 | /˘········ |
| In English woods or glades of Switzerland | 9 | ·/˘····/˘ |
| Falls earlier now, fades faster. All our love | 10 | ·/˘··/˘·/· |
| Moves not our mother's changeless heart, who gives | 10 | ··//˘/˘··· |
| A little light to eyes and stars above, | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| A little life to each man's heart that lives. | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| A little life to heaven and earth and sea, | 10 | ·/˘··/···· |
| To stars and souls revealed of night and day, | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| And change, the one thing changeless: yet shall she | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Cease too, perchance, and perish. Who shall say? | 10 | ··˘/·/˘··· |
| Our mother Nature, dark and sweet as sleep, | 10 | //˘/˘····· |
| And strange as life and strong as death, holds fast, | 10 | ·········· |
| Even as she holds our hearts alive, the deep | 10 | /···/·˘/·· |
| Dumb secret of her first-born births and last. | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| But this, we know, shall cease not till the strife | 10 | ·········· |
| Of nights and days and fears and hopes find end; | 10 | ·········· |
| This, through the brief eternities of life, | 9 | ····˘/˘·· |
| Endures, and calls from death a living friend; | 10 | ˘/·····/˘· |
| The love made strong with knowledge, whence confirmed | 10 | ·····/˘·˘/ |
| The whole soul takes assurance, and the past | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| (So by time's measure, not by memory's, termed) | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Lives present life, and mingles first with last. | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| I, now long since thy guest of many days, | 9 | ·······/· |
| Who found thy hearth a brother's, and with thee | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Tracked in and out the lines of rolling bays | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| And banks and gulfs and reaches of the sea-- | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Deep dens wherein the wrestling water sobs | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| And pants with restless pain of refluent breath | 11 | ···/˘··/˘˘· |
| Till all the sunless hollow sounds and throbs | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| With ebb and flow of eddies dark as death-- | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| I know not what more glorious world, what waves | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| More bright with life,--if brighter aught may live | 9 | ·····/··· |
| Than those that filled and fled their tidal caves-- | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| May now give back the love thou hast to give. | 10 | ·········· |
| Tintagel, and the long Trebarwith sand, | 10 | ·········· |
| Lone Camelford, and Boscastle divine | 10 | ········˘/ |
| With dower of southern blossom, bright and bland | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Above the roar of granite-baffled brine, | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| Shall hear no more by joyous night or day | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| From downs or causeways good to rove and ride | 10 | ···/······ |
| Or feet of ours or horse-hoofs urge their way | 10 | ···/······ |
| That sped us here and there by tower and tide. | 10 | ·······/·· |
| The headlands and the hollows and the waves, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| For all our love, forget us: where I am | 10 | ··/·˘/···· |
| Thou art not: deeper sleeps the shadow on graves | 11 | ···/˘··/··· |
| Than in the sunless gulf that once we swam. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Thou hast swum too soon the sea of death: for us | 11 | ··········· |
| Too soon, but if truth bless love's blind belief | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Faith, born of hope and memory, says not thus: | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| And joy for thee for me should mean not grief. | 10 | ·········· |
| And joy for thee, if ever soul of man | 9 | ·····/··· |
| Found joy in change and life of ampler birth | 10 | ·········· |
| Than here pens in the spirit for a span, | 9 | ·····/··· |
| Must be the life that doubt calls death on earth. | 10 | ·········· |
| For if, beyond the shadow and the sleep, | 10 | ·····/···· |
| A place there be for souls without a stain, | 10 | ·········· |
| Where peace is perfect, and delight more deep | 10 | ···/··˘/·· |
| Than seas or skies that change and shine again, | 10 | ········˘/ |
| There none of all unsullied souls that live | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| May hold a surer station: none may lend | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| More light to hope's or memory's lamp, nor give | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| More joy than thine to those that called thee friend. | 10 | ·········· |
| Yea, joy from sorrow's barren womb is born | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| When faith begets on grief the godlike child: | 10 | ··˘/···/˘· |
| As midnight yearns with starry sense of morn | 10 | ·/···/˘··· |
| In Arctic summers, though the sea wax wild, | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| So love, whose name is memory, thrills at heart, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Remembering and rejoicing in thee, now | 10 | ˘/˘·˘/˘··· |
| Alive where love may dream not what thou art | 10 | ˘/········ |
| But knows that higher than hope or love art thou. | 10 | ···/······ |
| "Whatever heaven, if heaven at all may be, | 10 | ·/˘/·/···· |
| Await the sacred souls of good men dead, | 10 | ˘/·/˘····· |
| There, now we mourn who loved him here, is he," | 10 | ·········· |
| So, sweet and stern of speech, the Roman said, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Erect in grief, in trust erect, and gave | 10 | ˘/····˘/·· |
| His deathless dead a deathless life even here | 10 | ·/˘··/˘·/· |
| Where day bears down on day as wave on wave | 10 | ·········· |
| And not man's smile fades faster than his tear. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Albeit this gift be given not me to give, | 11 | ˘/˘···/···· |
| Nor power be mine to break time's silent spell, | 10 | ·/·····/˘· |
| Not less shall love that dies not while I live | 10 | ·········· |
| Bid thee, beloved in life and death, farewell. | 10 | ··˘/·····/ |
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