A Jacobite's Exile
The weary day rins down and dies,The weary night wears through:And never an hour is fair wi' flower,And never a flower wi' dew.
I would the day were night for me,I would the night were day:For then would I stand in my ain fair land,As now in dreams I may.
O lordly flow the Loire and Seine,And loud the dark Durance:But bonnier shine the braes of TyneThan a' the fields of France;And the waves of Till that speak sae stillGleam goodlier where they glance.
O weel were they that fell fightingOn dark Drumossie's day:They keep their hame ayont the faem,And we die far away.
O sound they sleep, and saft, and deep,But night and day wake we;And ever between the sea-banks greenSounds loud the sundering sea.
And ill we sleep, sae sair we weep,But sweet and fast sleep they;And the mool that haps them roun' and laps themIs e'en their country's clay;But the land we tread that are not deadIs strange as night by day.
Strange as night in a strange man's sight,Though fair as dawn it be:For what is here that a stranger's cheerShould yet wax blithe to see?
The hills stand steep, the dells lie deep,The fields are green and gold:The hill-streams sing, and the hill-sides ring,As ours at home of old.
But hills and flowers are nane of ours,And ours are oversea:And the kind strange land whereon we stand,It wotsna what were weOr ever we came, wi' scathe and shame,To try what end might be.
Scathe, and shame, and a waefu' name,And a weary time and strange,Have they that seeing a weird for dreeingCan die, and cannot change.
Shame and scorn may we thole that mourn,Though sair be they to dree:But ill may we bide the thoughts we hide,Mair keen than wind and sea.
Ill may we thole the night's watches,And ill the weary day:And the dreams that keep the gates of sleep,A waefu' gift gie they;For the sangs they sing us, the sights they bring us,The morn blaws all away.
On Aikenshaw the sun blinks braw,The burn rins blithe and fain:There's nought wi' me I wadna gieTo look thereon again.
On Keilder-side the wind blaws wide;There sounds nae hunting-hornThat rings sae sweet as the winds that beatRound banks where Tyne is born.
The Wansbeck sings with all her springs,The bents and braes give ear;But the wood that rings wi' the sang she singsI may not see nor hear;For far and far thae blithe burns are,And strange is a' thing near.
The light there lightens, the day there brightens,The loud wind there lives free:Nae light comes nigh me or wind blaws by meThat I wad hear or see.
But O gin I were there again,Afar ayont the faem,Cauld and dead in the sweet saft bedThat haps my sires at hame!
We'll see nae mair the sea-banks fair,And the sweet grey gleaming sky,And the lordly strand of Northumberland,And the goodly towers thereby:And none shall know but the winds that blowThe graves wherein we lie.
Words in this poem 16
- durance n.
- Continuance; duration. See Endurance. [OF. durance duration, fr. L. durans, -antis, p. pr. durare to endure, last. See Dure, and cf. Durant.]
- weel
- A kind of trap or snare for fish, made of twigs. Carew. [Prov. E. weel, weal, a wicker basket to catch eels; prob. akin to willow, and so called as made of willow twigs.]
- blithe a.
- Gay; merry; sprightly; joyous; glad; cheerful; as, a blithe spirit. [AS. bli blithe, kind; akin to Goth. blei kind, Icel. bli mild, gentle, Dan. & Sw. blid gentle, D. blijd blithe, OHG. blidi kind, blithe.]
- oversea a.
- Beyond the sea; foreign.
- whereon adv.
- On which; -- used relatively; as, the earth whereon we live.
- scathe v. t.
- To do harm to; to injure; to damage; to waste; to destroy. [Icel. skatha; akin to AS. sceathan, sceth\'eban, Dan. skade, Sw. skada, D. & G. schaden, OHG. scadon, Goth. skaÞjan.]
- thole v. t.
- To bear; to endure; to undergo. Gower. [OE. þolen, þolien, AS. þolian; akin to OS. tholon, OHG. dolen, G. geduld patience, dulden to endure, Icel. þola, Sw. tåla, Dan. taale, Goth. þulan, L. tolerate,]
- dree v. i.
- To be able to do or endure.
- bide v. i.
- To dwell; to inhabit; to abide; to stay. [OE. biden, AS. bidan; akin to OHG. bitan, Goth. beidan, Icel. bi; perh. orig., to wait with trust, and akin to bid. See Bid, v. t., and cf. Abide.]
- morn n.
- The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
- braw a.
- Well-dressed; handsome; smart; brave; -- used of persons or their clothing, etc.; as, a braw lad.
- fain v. t.
- To be glad ; to wish or desire.
- thereon adv.
- On that or this. [AS. . See There, and On.]
- afar adv.
- At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
- goodly a.
- Pleasant; agreeable; desirable. [OE. godlich, AS. g. See Good, and Like.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
A Jacobite's Exile is 84 lines in 18 stanzas. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 83%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.4 syllables. 7 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 19% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 -A-A dies · throughA · flower · dewA
- 2 -A-A me · dayA · land · mayA
- 3 -A-A-A seine · duranceA · tyne · franceA · still · glanceA
- 4 -A-A fighting · dayA · faem · awayA
- 5 -A-A deep · weA · green · seaA
- 6 -A-A-A weep · theyA · them · clayA · dead · dayA
- 7 -A-A sight · beA · cheer · seeA
- 8 -A-A deep · goldA · ring · oldA
- 9 -A-A-A ours · overseaA · stand · weA · shame · beA
- 10 -A-A name · strangeA · dreeing · changeA
- 11 -A-A mourn · dreeA · hide · seaA
- 12 -A-A-A watches · dayA · sleep · theyA · us · awayA
- 13 -A-A braw · fainA · gie · againA
- 14 -A-A wide · hornA · beat · bornA
- 15 ABAB-B springsA · earB · singsA · hearB · are · nearB
- 16 -AAA brightens · freeA · meA · seeA
- 18 -A-A-A fair · skyA · northumberland · therebyA · blow · lieA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| The weary day rins down and dies, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| The weary night wears through: | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| And never an hour is fair wi' flower, | 9 | ·/·/···/˘ |
| And never a flower wi' dew. | 8 | ·/˘·/˘·· |
| I would the day were night for me, | 8 | ········ |
| I would the night were day: | 6 | ······ |
| For then would I stand in my ain fair land, | 10 | ·········· |
| As now in dreams I may. | 6 | ······ |
| O lordly flow the Loire and Seine, | 9 | ·/˘····/˘ |
| And loud the dark Durance: | 6 | ····/˘ |
| But bonnier shine the braes of Tyne | 8 | ········ |
| Than a' the fields of France; | 6 | ······ |
| And the waves of Till that speak sae still | 9 | ········· |
| Gleam goodlier where they glance. | 6 | ······ |
| O weel were they that fell fighting | 8 | ······/˘ |
| On dark Drumossie's day: | 5 | ····· |
| They keep their hame ayont the faem, | 8 | ····˘/·· |
| And we die far away. | 6 | ····˘/ |
| O sound they sleep, and saft, and deep, | 8 | ········ |
| But night and day wake we; | 6 | ······ |
| And ever between the sea-banks green | 8 | ·/······ |
| Sounds loud the sundering sea. | 7 | ···/˘˘· |
| And ill we sleep, sae sair we weep, | 8 | ········ |
| But sweet and fast sleep they; | 6 | ······ |
| And the mool that haps them roun' and laps them | 10 | ·········· |
| Is e'en their country's clay; | 6 | ···/˘· |
| But the land we tread that are not dead | 9 | ········· |
| Is strange as night by day. | 6 | ······ |
| Strange as night in a strange man's sight, | 8 | ········ |
| Though fair as dawn it be: | 6 | ······ |
| For what is here that a stranger's cheer | 9 | ······/˘· |
| Should yet wax blithe to see? | 6 | ······ |
| The hills stand steep, the dells lie deep, | 8 | ········ |
| The fields are green and gold: | 6 | ······ |
| The hill-streams sing, and the hill-sides ring, | 9 | ········· |
| As ours at home of old. | 7 | ·/˘···· |
| But hills and flowers are nane of ours, | 9 | ···/···/˘ |
| And ours are oversea: | 7 | ·/˘··˘/ |
| And the kind strange land whereon we stand, | 9 | ·····˘/·· |
| It wotsna what were we | 6 | ······ |
| Or ever we came, wi' scathe and shame, | 8 | ·/······ |
| To try what end might be. | 6 | ······ |
| Scathe, and shame, and a waefu' name, | 8 | ········ |
| And a weary time and strange, | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| Have they that seeing a weird for dreeing | 8 | ···/···· |
| Can die, and cannot change. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Shame and scorn may we thole that mourn, | 8 | ········ |
| Though sair be they to dree: | 6 | ······ |
| But ill may we bide the thoughts we hide, | 9 | ········· |
| Mair keen than wind and sea. | 6 | ······ |
| Ill may we thole the night's watches, | 8 | ······/˘ |
| And ill the weary day: | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And the dreams that keep the gates of sleep, | 9 | ········· |
| A waefu' gift gie they; | 6 | ······ |
| For the sangs they sing us, the sights they bring us, | 11 | ··········· |
| The morn blaws all away. | 6 | ····˘/ |
| On Aikenshaw the sun blinks braw, | 8 | ········ |
| The burn rins blithe and fain: | 6 | ······ |
| There's nought wi' me I wadna gie | 8 | ········ |
| To look thereon again. | 6 | ··˘/˘/ |
| On Keilder-side the wind blaws wide; | 8 | ········ |
| There sounds nae hunting-horn | 6 | ···/˘· |
| That rings sae sweet as the winds that beat | 9 | ········· |
| Round banks where Tyne is born. | 6 | ······ |
| The Wansbeck sings with all her springs, | 8 | ········ |
| The bents and braes give ear; | 6 | ······ |
| But the wood that rings wi' the sang she sings | 10 | ·········· |
| I may not see nor hear; | 6 | ······ |
| For far and far thae blithe burns are, | 8 | ········ |
| And strange is a' thing near. | 6 | ······ |
| The light there lightens, the day there brightens, | 10 | ···/˘···/˘ |
| The loud wind there lives free: | 6 | ······ |
| Nae light comes nigh me or wind blaws by me | 10 | ·········· |
| That I wad hear or see. | 6 | ······ |
| But O gin I were there again, | 8 | ······˘/ |
| Afar ayont the faem, | 6 | ˘/˘/·· |
| Cauld and dead in the sweet saft bed | 8 | ········ |
| That haps my sires at hame! | 6 | ······ |
| We'll see nae mair the sea-banks fair, | 8 | ········ |
| And the sweet grey gleaming sky, | 7 | ····/˘· |
| And the lordly strand of Northumberland, | 10 | ··/˘······ |
| And the goodly towers thereby: | 8 | ··/˘/˘·· |
| And none shall know but the winds that blow | 9 | ········· |
| The graves wherein we lie. | 6 | ······ |
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