A Jacobite's Exile

Algernon Charles Swinburne (1837–1909) · 1866

common measure · 84 lines · from Poems and Ballads

The weary day rins down and dies,The weary night wears through:And never an hour is fair wi' flower,And never a flower wi' dew.

I would the day were night for me,I would the night were day:For then would I stand in my ain fair land,As now in dreams I may.

O lordly flow the Loire and Seine,And loud the dark Durance:But bonnier shine the braes of TyneThan a' the fields of France;And the waves of Till that speak sae stillGleam goodlier where they glance.

O weel were they that fell fightingOn dark Drumossie's day:They keep their hame ayont the faem,And we die far away.

O sound they sleep, and saft, and deep,But night and day wake we;And ever between the sea-banks greenSounds loud the sundering sea.

And ill we sleep, sae sair we weep,But sweet and fast sleep they;And the mool that haps them roun' and laps themIs e'en their country's clay;But the land we tread that are not deadIs strange as night by day.

Strange as night in a strange man's sight,Though fair as dawn it be:For what is here that a stranger's cheerShould yet wax blithe to see?

The hills stand steep, the dells lie deep,The fields are green and gold:The hill-streams sing, and the hill-sides ring,As ours at home of old.

But hills and flowers are nane of ours,And ours are oversea:And the kind strange land whereon we stand,It wotsna what were weOr ever we came, wi' scathe and shame,To try what end might be.

Scathe, and shame, and a waefu' name,And a weary time and strange,Have they that seeing a weird for dreeingCan die, and cannot change.

Shame and scorn may we thole that mourn,Though sair be they to dree:But ill may we bide the thoughts we hide,Mair keen than wind and sea.

Ill may we thole the night's watches,And ill the weary day:And the dreams that keep the gates of sleep,A waefu' gift gie they;For the sangs they sing us, the sights they bring us,The morn blaws all away.

On Aikenshaw the sun blinks braw,The burn rins blithe and fain:There's nought wi' me I wadna gieTo look thereon again.

On Keilder-side the wind blaws wide;There sounds nae hunting-hornThat rings sae sweet as the winds that beatRound banks where Tyne is born.

The Wansbeck sings with all her springs,The bents and braes give ear;But the wood that rings wi' the sang she singsI may not see nor hear;For far and far thae blithe burns are,And strange is a' thing near.

The light there lightens, the day there brightens,The loud wind there lives free:Nae light comes nigh me or wind blaws by meThat I wad hear or see.

But O gin I were there again,Afar ayont the faem,Cauld and dead in the sweet saft bedThat haps my sires at hame!

We'll see nae mair the sea-banks fair,And the sweet grey gleaming sky,And the lordly strand of Northumberland,And the goodly towers thereby:And none shall know but the winds that blowThe graves wherein we lie.

Words in this poem 16
durance n.
Continuance; duration. See Endurance. [OF. durance duration, fr. L. durans, -antis, p. pr. durare to endure, last. See Dure, and cf. Durant.]
weel
A kind of trap or snare for fish, made of twigs. Carew. [Prov. E. weel, weal, a wicker basket to catch eels; prob. akin to willow, and so called as made of willow twigs.]
blithe a.
Gay; merry; sprightly; joyous; glad; cheerful; as, a blithe spirit. [AS. bli blithe, kind; akin to Goth. blei kind, Icel. bli mild, gentle, Dan. & Sw. blid gentle, D. blijd blithe, OHG. blidi kind, blithe.]
oversea a.
Beyond the sea; foreign.
whereon adv.
On which; -- used relatively; as, the earth whereon we live.
scathe v. t.
To do harm to; to injure; to damage; to waste; to destroy. [Icel. skatha; akin to AS. sceathan, sceth\'eban, Dan. skade, Sw. skada, D. & G. schaden, OHG. scadon, Goth. skaÞjan.]
thole v. t.
To bear; to endure; to undergo. Gower. [OE. þolen, þolien, AS. þolian; akin to OS. tholon, OHG. dolen, G. geduld patience, dulden to endure, Icel. þola, Sw. tåla, Dan. taale, Goth. þulan, L. tolerate,]
dree v. i.
To be able to do or endure.
bide v. i.
To dwell; to inhabit; to abide; to stay. [OE. biden, AS. bidan; akin to OHG. bitan, Goth. beidan, Icel. bi; perh. orig., to wait with trust, and akin to bid. See Bid, v. t., and cf. Abide.]
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
braw a.
Well-dressed; handsome; smart; brave; -- used of persons or their clothing, etc.; as, a braw lad.
fain v. t.
To be glad ; to wish or desire.
thereon adv.
On that or this. [AS. . See There, and On.]
afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
goodly a.
Pleasant; agreeable; desirable. [OE. godlich, AS. g. See Good, and Like.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

A Jacobite's Exile is 84 lines in 18 stanzas. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 83%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.4 syllables. 7 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 19% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A dies · throughA · flower · dewA
  2. 2 -A-A me · dayA · land · mayA
  3. 3 -A-A-A seine · duranceA · tyne · franceA · still · glanceA
  4. 4 -A-A fighting · dayA · faem · awayA
  5. 5 -A-A deep · weA · green · seaA
  6. 6 -A-A-A weep · theyA · them · clayA · dead · dayA
  7. 7 -A-A sight · beA · cheer · seeA
  8. 8 -A-A deep · goldA · ring · oldA
  9. 9 -A-A-A ours · overseaA · stand · weA · shame · beA
  10. 10 -A-A name · strangeA · dreeing · changeA
  11. 11 -A-A mourn · dreeA · hide · seaA
  12. 12 -A-A-A watches · dayA · sleep · theyA · us · awayA
  13. 13 -A-A braw · fainA · gie · againA
  14. 14 -A-A wide · hornA · beat · bornA
  15. 15 ABAB-B springsA · earB · singsA · hearB · are · nearB
  16. 16 -AAA brightens · freeA · meA · seeA
  17. 18 -A-A-A fair · skyA · northumberland · therebyA · blow · lieA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The weary day rins down and dies,8·/˘·····
The weary night wears through:6·/˘···
And never an hour is fair wi' flower,9·/·/···/˘
And never a flower wi' dew.8·/˘·/˘··
I would the day were night for me,8········
I would the night were day:6······
For then would I stand in my ain fair land,10··········
As now in dreams I may.6······
O lordly flow the Loire and Seine,9·/˘····/˘
And loud the dark Durance:6····/˘
But bonnier shine the braes of Tyne8········
Than a' the fields of France;6······
And the waves of Till that speak sae still9·········
Gleam goodlier where they glance.6······
O weel were they that fell fighting8······/˘
On dark Drumossie's day:5·····
They keep their hame ayont the faem,8····˘/··
And we die far away.6····˘/
O sound they sleep, and saft, and deep,8········
But night and day wake we;6······
And ever between the sea-banks green8·/······
Sounds loud the sundering sea.7···/˘˘·
And ill we sleep, sae sair we weep,8········
But sweet and fast sleep they;6······
And the mool that haps them roun' and laps them10··········
Is e'en their country's clay;6···/˘·
But the land we tread that are not dead9·········
Is strange as night by day.6······
Strange as night in a strange man's sight,8········
Though fair as dawn it be:6······
For what is here that a stranger's cheer9······/˘·
Should yet wax blithe to see?6······
The hills stand steep, the dells lie deep,8········
The fields are green and gold:6······
The hill-streams sing, and the hill-sides ring,9·········
As ours at home of old.7·/˘····
But hills and flowers are nane of ours,9···/···/˘
And ours are oversea:7·/˘··˘/
And the kind strange land whereon we stand,9·····˘/··
It wotsna what were we6······
Or ever we came, wi' scathe and shame,8·/······
To try what end might be.6······
Scathe, and shame, and a waefu' name,8········
And a weary time and strange,7··/˘···
Have they that seeing a weird for dreeing8···/····
Can die, and cannot change.6···/˘·
Shame and scorn may we thole that mourn,8········
Though sair be they to dree:6······
But ill may we bide the thoughts we hide,9·········
Mair keen than wind and sea.6······
Ill may we thole the night's watches,8······/˘
And ill the weary day:6···/˘·
And the dreams that keep the gates of sleep,9·········
A waefu' gift gie they;6······
For the sangs they sing us, the sights they bring us,11···········
The morn blaws all away.6····˘/
On Aikenshaw the sun blinks braw,8········
The burn rins blithe and fain:6······
There's nought wi' me I wadna gie8········
To look thereon again.6··˘/˘/
On Keilder-side the wind blaws wide;8········
There sounds nae hunting-horn6···/˘·
That rings sae sweet as the winds that beat9·········
Round banks where Tyne is born.6······
The Wansbeck sings with all her springs,8········
The bents and braes give ear;6······
But the wood that rings wi' the sang she sings10··········
I may not see nor hear;6······
For far and far thae blithe burns are,8········
And strange is a' thing near.6······
The light there lightens, the day there brightens,10···/˘···/˘
The loud wind there lives free:6······
Nae light comes nigh me or wind blaws by me10··········
That I wad hear or see.6······
But O gin I were there again,8······˘/
Afar ayont the faem,6˘/˘/··
Cauld and dead in the sweet saft bed8········
That haps my sires at hame!6······
We'll see nae mair the sea-banks fair,8········
And the sweet grey gleaming sky,7····/˘·
And the lordly strand of Northumberland,10··/˘······
And the goodly towers thereby:8··/˘/˘··
And none shall know but the winds that blow9·········
The graves wherein we lie.6······

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