Upon Aster's Death

Thomas Stanley (1625–1678) · 1651

iambic pentameter · 8 lines · from Original Lyrics

A Phosphor 'mongst the living late wert thou,But shin'st, among the dead, a Hesper now.

Old Hecuba, the Trojan matron's, yearsWere interwoven by the Fates with tears,But thee, with blooming hopes, my Dion! deck'd,Gods did a trophy of their power erect.Thy honour'd relics in thy country rest,Ah, Dion! whose love rages in my breast.

Words in this poem

hesper n.
The evening; Hesperus. [See Hesperian.]
trophy n.
A sign or memorial of a victory raised on the field of battle, or, in case of a naval victory, on the nearest land. Sometimes trophies were erected in the chief city of the conquered people. [F. trophée (cf. It. & Sp. trofeo), L. tropaeum, trophaeum, Gr. Trope.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Upon Aster's Death is in the public domain. This text is taken from Thomas Stanley: His Original Lyrics, Complete, In Their Collated Readings of 1647, 1651, 1657. With an Introduction, Textual Notes, a List of Editions, an Appendix of Translations, and a Portrait., Project Gutenberg ebook #32986; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Upon Aster's Death is 8 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.9 syllables. 12% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA thouA · nowA
  2. 2 AABBCC yearsA · tearsA · deck'dB · erectB · restC · breastC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A Phosphor 'mongst the living late wert thou,10·/···/˘···
But shin'st, among the dead, a Hesper now.10·······/˘·
Old Hecuba, the Trojan matron's, years9·/˘·/˘/˘·
Were interwoven by the Fates with tears,10··˘/˘·····
But thee, with blooming hopes, my Dion! deck'd,10···/˘··/˘·
Gods did a trophy of their power erect.10···/˘··/˘/
Thy honour'd relics in thy country rest,10···/˘··/˘·
Ah, Dion! whose love rages in my breast.10·/˘··/˘···

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