Song 5

Philip Sidney (1554–1586) · 1591

iambic hexameter · AABCCB · 90 lines · from Astrophel and Stella

While favour fed my hope, delight with hope was brought,Thought waited on delight, and speach did follow thought,Then drew my tongue and pen records unto thy glorie;I thought all words were lost that were not spent of thee,I thought each place was darke but where thy lights would be,And all eares worse than deaffe, that heard not out thy storie.

I said thou wert most faire, and so indeede thou art;I said thou wert most sweete, sweete poyson to my hart;I said my soule was thine, ô would I then had lied;I said thy eyes were starres, thy breasts the milken way,Thy fingers Cupids shafts, thy voice the Angels lay:And all is said so well, that no man it denied.

But now that hope is lost, unkindnes kils delight,Yet thought and speach do live, thought metamorphisde quite,For rage now rules the reynes, which guided were by pleasure,I thinke now of thy faults, who late wrote of thy praise,That speech falls now to blame which did thy honour raise:The same key open can, which can locke up a treasure.

Then thou whom partiall heavens conspir’d in one to frameThe proofe of beauties worke, the inheritance of fame,The mansion state of blisse, and just excuse of lovers:See now those feathers pluckt wherewith thou flewest most hie,See what cloudes of reproach shall darke thy honours skie;Whom fault once casteth downe, hardly high state recovers.

And ô my Muse, though oft you luld her in your lap,And then a heavenly Childe gave her Ambrosian pap,And to that braine of hers your highest gifts infused:Since she disdaining me, doth you in me disdaine,Suffer not her to laugh, and both we suffer paine:Princes in subjects wrongd must deeme themselves abused.

Your client poore, my selfe, shall Stella handle so,Revenge, revenge, my Muse defiance trumpet blowe,Threat, threat, what may be done; yet do no more but threaten:Ah, my sute granted is, I feele my breast doth swell;Now Childe, a lesson new you shall begin to spell,Sweet babes must babies have, but shrewd girles must be beaten.

Thinke now no more to heare of warme fine shining snow,Nor blushing Lillyes, nor pearles Rubie hidden row,Nor of that golden sea, whose waves in curles are broken:But of thy soule fraught with such ungratefulnesse,As where thou soone mightst help, most there thou dost oppresse:Ungratefull who is cald, the worst of ills is spoken.

Yet worse than worse, I say thou art a Thiefe. A thiefe?Now God forbid: a thiefe, and of worst thieves a thiefe;Thieves steale for neede, & steale for goods, which paine recovers:But thou, rich in all joyes, dost rob my goods from mee,Which cannot be restorde by time nor industrie:Of foes the spoyle is evill, farre more of constant lovers.

Yet gentle English thieves doo rob, and will not slay;Thou English murdring thiefe, wilt have hearts for thy pray.The name of murdrer now on thy faire forhead sitteth,And even while I do speake my death wounds bleeding bee,Which I protest proceed from onely cruell thee.Who may and will not save, murther in trueth committeth.

But murthers private fault seemes but a toy to thee.I lay then to thy charge unjustice Tirannie,If rule by force without all claime, a Tyrant sheweth;For thou art my hearts Lord, who am not borne thy slave,And which is worse makes me most guiltles torments have.A rightfull Prince by unrightfull deeds a Tyrant groweth.

Loe you grow proud with this, for Tyrants makes folks bow:Of foule rebellion then I do appeach thee now,Rebels by Natures lawes rebell by way of reason:Thou sweetest subject wert borne in the Realme of Love,And yet against thy Prince, thy force dost daily prove.No vertue merits praise, once toucht with blot of Treason.

But valiant Rebels oft in fooles mouthes purchase fame,I now then staine thy white with blackest blot of shame,Both Rebel to the Sonne, and vagrant from the Mother,For wearing Venus badge, in every part of thee,Unto Dianaes traine thou runnaway didst flie:Who faileth one is false, though trustie to another.

What is not this enough, nay farre worse commeth here:A Witch I say thou art, though thou so faire appeare.For I protest, mine eyes never thy sight enjoyeth,But I in mee am chang’d, I am alive and dead.My feete are turn’d to rootes, my heart becommeth lead,No witchcraft is so ill, as which mans minde destroyeth.

Yet Witches may repent, thou art farre worse than they:Alas, that I am forst such evill of thee to say:I say thou art a Divel though cloathd in Angels shining:For thy face tempts my soule to leave the heavens for thee,And thy words of refuse doo powre even hell on mee:Who tempts, and tempting plagues are Divels in true defining.

You then ungrateful theefe, you murthering Tirant you,You Rebell runnaway, to Lord and Lady untrue,You Witch, you Divel (alas) you still in me beloved,You see what I can say: mend yet your froward minde,And such skill in my Muse you reconcil’d shall finde,That by these cruell words your praises shal be proved.

Words in this poem 30
favour n.
Kind regard; propitious aspect; countenance; friendly disposition; kindness; good will. [Written also favour.]
deaffe a.
Wanting the sense of hearing, either wholly or in part; unable to perceive sounds; hard of hearing; as, a deaf man. [OE. def, deaf, deef, AS. deáf; akin to D. doof, G. taub, Icel. daufr, Dan. döv, Sw. döf, Goth. daubs, and prob. to E. dumb (the original sense being, dull as ap]
lied n.
A lay; a German song. It differs from the French chanson, and the Italian canzone, all three being national. [G.]
milken a.
Consisting of milk.
wrote v. i.
To root with the snout. See 1st Root. [OE. wroten. See 1st Root.]
honour n.
Esteem due or paid to worth; high estimation; respect; consideration; reverence; veneration; manifestation of respect or reverence. [OE. honor, honour, onour, onur, OF. honor, onor, honur, onur, honour, onour, F. honneur, fr. L. honor, honos.]
partiall a.
Of, pertaining to, or affecting, a part only; not general or universal; not total or entire; as, a partial eclipse of the moon. [F., fr. LL. partials, fr. L. pars, gen. partis, a part; cf. (for sense 1) F. partiel. See Part, n.]
mansion n.
A dwelling place, -- whether a part or whole of a house or other shelter. [OF. mansion, F. maison, fr. L. mansio a staying, remaining, a dwelling, habitation, fr. manere, mansum, to stay, dwell; akin to Gr. Manse, Manor, Menagerie, Men]
wherewith adv.
With which; -- used relatively.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
childe n.
A cognomen formerly prefixed to his name by the oldest son, until he succeeded to his ancestral titles, or was knighted; as, Childe Roland.
ambrosian a.
Ambrosial. . Jonson.
shrewd a.
Inclining to shrew; disposing to curse or scold; hence, vicious; malicious; evil; wicked; mischievous; vexatious; rough; unfair; shrewish. [Originally the p. p. of shrew, v.t.]
fraught n.
A freight; a cargo. [OE.fraight, fraght; akin to Dan. fragt, Sw. frakt, D. vracht, G. fracht, cf. OHG. fr merit, reward; perh. from corresponding to E. for + The root of E. own. Cf.]
ungratefull a.
Not grateful; not thankful for favors; making no returns, or making ill return for kindness, attention, etc.; ingrateful. South.
farre n.
A young pig, or a litter of pigs. [See Farrow.]
cruell a.
Disposed to give pain to others; willing or pleased to hurt, torment, or afflict; destitute of sympathetic kindness and pity; savage; inhuman; hard-hearted; merciless. [F. cruel, fr. L. crudelis, fr. crudus. See Crude.]
murther n.
Murder, n. & v.
unjustice n.
Want of justice; injustice. Hales.
rightfull a.
Righteous; upright; just; good; -- said of persons.
folks n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]
appeach v. t.
To impeach; to accuse; to asperse; to inform against; to reproach. [OE. apechen, for empechen, OF. empeechier, F. empêcher, to hinder. See Impeach.]
rebell a.
Pertaining to rebels or rebellion; acting in revolt; rebellious; as, rebel troops. [F. rebelle, fr. L. rebellis. See Rebel, v. t.]
valiant a.
Vigorous in body; strong; powerful; as, a valiant fencer. [OE. valiant, F. vaillant, OF. vaillant, valant, originally p. pr. of OF. & F. valoir to be worth, L. valere to be strong. See Wield, and cf. Avail, Convalesce, ]
rebel a.
Pertaining to rebels or rebellion; acting in revolt; rebellious; as, rebel troops. [F. rebelle, fr. L. rebellis. See Rebel, v. t.]
sonne n.
A male child; the male issue, or offspring, of a parent, father or mother. [OE. sone, sune, AS. sunu; akin to D. zoon, OS., OFries., & OHG. sunu, G. sohn, Icel. sonr, Sw. son, Dan. sön, Goth. sunus, Lith. sunus, Russ. suin', Skr. sunu (]
didst
, the 2d pers. sing. imp. of Do.
repent a.
Prostrate and rooting; -- said of stems. Gray. [L. repens, -entis, creeping, p. pr. of repere to creep.]
divel v. t.
To rend apart. Sir T. Browne. [L. divellere; dit- = dis- + vellere to pluck.]
ungrateful a.
Not grateful; not thankful for favors; making no returns, or making ill return for kindness, attention, etc.; ingrateful. South.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Song 5 is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sir P.S.: His Astrophel and Stella Wherein the excellence of sweete poesie is concluded, Project Gutenberg ebook #56375; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Song 5 is 90 lines in 15 stanzas of 6 lines each. The rhyme scheme is AABCCB, complete in 9 of its 15 stanzas. The metre is iambic hexameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 12.4 syllables. 24 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA-BB- broughtA · thoughtA · glorie · theeB · beB · storie
  2. 2 AABCCB artA · hartA · liedB · wayC · layC · deniedB
  3. 3 AABCCB delightA · quiteA · pleasureB · praiseC · raiseC · treasureB
  4. 4 AABCCB frameA · fameA · loversB · hieC · skieC · recoversB
  5. 5 AABCCB lapA · papA · infusedB · disdaineC · paineC · abusedB
  6. 6 AA-BB- soA · bloweA · threaten · swellB · spellB · beaten
  7. 7 AABCCB snowA · rowA · brokenB · ungratefulnesseC · oppresseC · spokenB
  8. 8 AAB--B thiefeA · thiefeA · recoversB · mee · industrie · loversB
  9. 9 AABCCB slayA · prayA · sittethB · beeC · theeC · committethB
  10. 10 ---AA- thee · tirannie · sheweth · slaveA · haveA · groweth
  11. 11 AABCCB bowA · nowA · reasonB · loveC · proveC · treasonB
  12. 12 AAB--B fameA · shameA · motherB · thee · flie · anotherB
  13. 13 AABCCB hereA · appeareA · enjoyethB · deadC · leadC · destroyethB
  14. 14 AABCCB theyA · sayA · shiningB · theeC · meeC · definingB
  15. 15 AA-BB- youA · untrueA · beloved · mindeB · findeB · proved
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic hexameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
While favour fed my hope, delight with hope was brought,12·/˘···˘/····
Thought waited on delight, and speach did follow thought,12·/˘·˘/···/˘·
Then drew my tongue and pen records unto thy glorie;13······˘/·····
I thought all words were lost that were not spent of thee,12············
I thought each place was darke but where thy lights would be,12············
And all eares worse than deaffe, that heard not out thy storie.13···········/˘
I said thou wert most faire, and so indeede thou art;12············
I said thou wert most sweete, sweete poyson to my hart;12············
I said my soule was thine, ô would I then had lied;11···········
I said thy eyes were starres, thy breasts the milken way,12·········/˘·
Thy fingers Cupids shafts, thy voice the Angels lay:12·/˘/˘····/˘·
And all is said so well, that no man it denied.12··········˘/
But now that hope is lost, unkindnes kils delight,11·········˘/
Yet thought and speach do live, thought metamorphisde quite,12············
For rage now rules the reynes, which guided were by pleasure,13·······/˘··/˘
I thinke now of thy faults, who late wrote of thy praise,12············
That speech falls now to blame which did thy honour raise:12·········/˘·
The same key open can, which can locke up a treasure.13···/˘······/˘
Then thou whom partiall heavens conspir’d in one to frame13···/˘/˘˘/····
The proofe of beauties worke, the inheritance of fame,12···/˘··˘/˘··
The mansion state of blisse, and just excuse of lovers:13·/˘·····˘/·/˘
See now those feathers pluckt wherewith thou flewest most hie,13···/˘·˘/·/˘··
See what cloudes of reproach shall darke thy honours skie;12····˘/···/˘·
Whom fault once casteth downe, hardly high state recovers.13···/˘·/˘··˘/˘
And ô my Muse, though oft you luld her in your lap,11···········
And then a heavenly Childe gave her Ambrosian pap,12···/˘···˘/˘·
And to that braine of hers your highest gifts infused:12·······/˘·˘/
Since she disdaining me, doth you in me disdaine,12··˘/˘·······
Suffer not her to laugh, and both we suffer paine:12/˘·······/˘·
Princes in subjects wrongd must deeme themselves abused.12/˘·/˘···˘/˘/
Your client poore, my selfe, shall Stella handle so,12·/˘····/˘/˘·
Revenge, revenge, my Muse defiance trumpet blowe,12˘/˘/··˘/˘/˘·
Threat, threat, what may be done; yet do no more but threaten:13···········/˘
Ah, my sute granted is, I feele my breast doth swell;13···/˘········
Now Childe, a lesson new you shall begin to spell,12···/˘···˘/··
Sweet babes must babies have, but shrewd girles must be beaten.13···/˘······/˘
Thinke now no more to heare of warme fine shining snow,12·········/˘·
Nor blushing Lillyes, nor pearles Rubie hidden row,12·/˘/˘··/˘/˘·
Nor of that golden sea, whose waves in curles are broken:13···/˘······/˘
But of thy soule fraught with such ungratefulnesse,12············
As where thou soone mightst help, most there thou dost oppresse:12············
Ungratefull who is cald, the worst of ills is spoken.13˘/˘········/˘
Yet worse than worse, I say thou art a Thiefe. A thiefe?12············
Now God forbid: a thiefe, and of worst thieves a thiefe;12··˘/········
Thieves steale for neede, & steale for goods, which paine recovers:14···········˘/˘
But thou, rich in all joyes, dost rob my goods from mee,12············
Which cannot be restorde by time nor industrie:11·/˘······/˘
Of foes the spoyle is evill, farre more of constant lovers.15······/˘···/˘/˘
Yet gentle English thieves doo rob, and will not slay;12·/˘/˘·······
Thou English murdring thiefe, wilt have hearts for thy pray.12·/˘/˘·······
The name of murdrer now on thy faire forhead sitteth,13···········/˘
And even while I do speake my death wounds bleeding bee,12·/·······/˘·
Which I protest proceed from onely cruell thee.12··˘/˘/·/˘/˘·
Who may and will not save, murther in trueth committeth.13······/˘··˘/˘
But murthers private fault seemes but a toy to thee.12···/˘·······
I lay then to thy charge unjustice Tirannie,12······˘/˘···
If rule by force without all claime, a Tyrant sheweth;13·········/˘/˘
For thou art my hearts Lord, who am not borne thy slave,12············
And which is worse makes me most guiltles torments have.11········/··
A rightfull Prince by unrightfull deeds a Tyrant groweth.14·/˘·······/˘/˘
Loe you grow proud with this, for Tyrants makes folks bow:12·······/˘···
Of foule rebellion then I do appeach thee now,13·/˘˘/˘···˘/··
Rebels by Natures lawes rebell by way of reason:13˘/·/˘·˘/···/˘
Thou sweetest subject wert borne in the Realme of Love,12·/˘/˘·······
And yet against thy Prince, thy force dost daily prove.12·········/˘·
No vertue merits praise, once toucht with blot of Treason.13···/˘······/˘
But valiant Rebels oft in fooles mouthes purchase fame,12·/˘/˘····/˘·
I now then staine thy white with blackest blot of shame,12·······/˘···
Both Rebel to the Sonne, and vagrant from the Mother,13·/˘····/˘··/˘
For wearing Venus badge, in every part of thee,12·/˘/˘··/˘···
Unto Dianaes traine thou runnaway didst flie:12··˘/˘·······
Who faileth one is false, though trustie to another.13·/˘·······˘/˘
What is not this enough, nay farre worse commeth here:12····˘/···/˘·
A Witch I say thou art, though thou so faire appeare.12············
For I protest, mine eyes never thy sight enjoyeth,12··/···/··˘/˘
But I in mee am chang’d, I am alive and dead.12········˘/··
My feete are turn’d to rootes, my heart becommeth lead,12············
No witchcraft is so ill, as which mans minde destroyeth.13·/········˘/˘
Yet Witches may repent, thou art farre worse than they:12·/˘·˘/······
Alas, that I am forst such evill of thee to say:13˘/·····/˘····
I say thou art a Divel though cloathd in Angels shining:14·····˘/···/˘/˘
For thy face tempts my soule to leave the heavens for thee,13·········/˘··
And thy words of refuse doo powre even hell on mee:12····˘/·//···
Who tempts, and tempting plagues are Divels in true defining.14···/˘······˘/˘
You then ungrateful theefe, you murthering Tirant you,13··˘/˘········
You Rebell runnaway, to Lord and Lady untrue,13·/˘······/˘˘/
You Witch, you Divel (alas) you still in me beloved,13···˘/˘/····˘/
You see what I can say: mend yet your froward minde,12·········/˘·
And such skill in my Muse you reconcil’d shall finde,12·······/˘···
That by these cruell words your praises shal be proved.12···/˘··/˘···

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