Fragment: 'I Stood upon a Heaven-Cleaving Turret'

Percy Bysshe Shelley (1792–1822) · 1816–1819

iambic pentameter · 9 lines · from The Complete Poetical Works, Volume II

I stood upon a heaven-cleaving turretWhich overlooked a wide Metropolis--And in the temple of my heart my SpiritLay prostrate, and with parted lips did kissThe dust of Desolations [altar] hearth--And with a voice too faint to falterIt shook that trembling fane with its weak prayer'Twas noon,--the sleeping skies were blueThe city

Words in this poem

falter v. t.
To thrash in the chaff; also, to cleanse or sift, as barley.
shook v. t.
To pack, as staves, in a shook.
fane n.
A temple; a place consecrated to religion; a church. [L. fanum a place dedicated to some deity, a sanctuary, fr. fari to speak. See Fame.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Fragment: 'I Stood upon a Heaven-Cleaving Turret' is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Complete Poetical Works of Percy Bysshe Shelley — Volume 2, Project Gutenberg ebook #4798; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Fragment: 'I Stood upon a Heaven-Cleaving Turret' is 9 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.1 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 78% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A----- turret · metropolisA · spirit · kissA · hearth · falter · prayer · blue · city
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I stood upon a heaven-cleaving turret11·····/˘/˘/˘
Which overlooked a wide Metropolis--10·/˘···˘/˘˘
And in the temple of my heart my Spirit11···/˘····/˘
Lay prostrate, and with parted lips did kiss10·/˘··/˘···
The dust of Desolations [altar] hearth--10····˘/˘/˘·
And with a voice too faint to falter9·······/˘
It shook that trembling fane with its weak prayer10···/˘·····
'Twas noon,--the sleeping skies were blue8···/˘···
The city3·/˘

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