The Old Lowe House, Staten Island

Alan Seeger (1888–1916) · 1916

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from Poems

Another prospect pleased the builder's eye,And Fashion tenanted (where Fashion wanes)Here in the sorrowful suburban lanesWhen first these gables rose against the sky.Relic of a romantic taste gone by,This stately monument alone remains,Vacant, with lichened walls and window-panesBlank as the windows of a skull. But I,On evenings when autumnal winds have stirredIn the porch-vines, to this gray oracleHave laid a wondering ear and oft-times heard,As from the hollow of a stranded shell,Old voices echoing (or my fancy erred)Things indistinct, but not insensible.

Words in this poem

suburban a.
Of or pertaining to suburbs; inhabiting, or being in, the suburbs of a city. [L. suburbanus.]
lichened a.
Belonging to, or covered with, lichens.
oracle v. i.
To utter oracles.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

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Form and metre

The Old Lowe House, Staten Island is 14 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 87% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 29% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBAABBACDCD-D eyeA · wanesB · lanesB · skyA · byA · remainsB · panesB · iA · stirredC · oracleD · heardC · shellD · erred · insensibleD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Another prospect pleased the builder's eye,10˘/˘/˘··/˘·
And Fashion tenanted (where Fashion wanes)10·/˘/˘˘·/˘·
Here in the sorrowful suburban lanes10···/˘˘˘/˘·
When first these gables rose against the sky.10···/˘·····
Relic of a romantic taste gone by,10/˘··˘/˘···
This stately monument alone remains,10·/˘/˘˘˘/˘/
Vacant, with lichened walls and window-panes10/˘·/˘··/˘·
Blank as the windows of a skull. But I,10···/˘·····
On evenings when autumnal winds have stirred10·/˘·˘/˘···
In the porch-vines, to this gray oracle10·······/˘˘
Have laid a wondering ear and oft-times heard,10···/˘·····
As from the hollow of a stranded shell,10···/˘··/˘·
Old voices echoing (or my fancy erred)10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Things indistinct, but not insensible.10·˘˘/··˘/˘˘

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