Sonnet II

Alan Seeger (1888–1916) · 1916

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from Poems

Her courts are by the flux of flaming ways,Between the rivers and the illumined skyWhose fervid depths reverberate from on highFierce lustres mingled in a fiery haze.They mark it inland; blithe and fair of faceHer suitors follow, guessing by the glareBeyond the hilltops in the evening airHow bright the cressets at her portals blaze.On the pure fronts Defeat ere many a dayFalls like the soot and dirt on city-snow;There hopes deferred lie sunk in piteous seams.Her paths are disillusion and decay,With ruins piled and unapparent woe,The graves of Beauty and the wreck of dreams.

Words in this poem

fervid a.
Very hot; burning; boiling. [L. fervidus, fr. fervere. See Fervent.]
blithe a.
Gay; merry; sprightly; joyous; glad; cheerful; as, a blithe spirit. [AS. bli blithe, kind; akin to Goth. blei kind, Icel. bli mild, gentle, Dan. & Sw. blid gentle, D. blijd blithe, OHG. blidi kind, blithe.]
glare v. i.
To shine with a bright, dazzling light. [OE. glaren, gloren; cf. AS. glær amber, LG. glaren to glow or burn like coals, D. gloren to glimmer; prob. akin to E. glass.]
defeat v. t.
To undo; to disfigure; to destroy. [From F. défait, OF. desfait, p. p. ofe défaire, OF. desfaire, to undo; L. dis- + facere to do. See Feat, Fact, and cf. Disfashion.]
disillusion n.
The act or process of freeing from an illusion, or the state of being freed therefrom. Lowell.
piled a.
Having a pile or point; pointed. [From 2d Pile.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Sonnet II is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #617; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Sonnet II is 14 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 43% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBA-CCADEFDEF waysA · skyB · highB · hazeA · face · glareC · airC · blazeA · dayD · snowE · seamsF · decayD · woeE · dreamsF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Her courts are by the flux of flaming ways,10·······/˘·
Between the rivers and the illumined sky11···/˘··˘/˘·
Whose fervid depths reverberate from on high10·/˘·˘/˘···
Fierce lustres mingled in a fiery haze.10·/˘/˘··/˘·
They mark it inland; blithe and fair of face10···/······
Her suitors follow, guessing by the glare10·/˘/˘/˘···
Beyond the hilltops in the evening air10···/···/˘·
How bright the cressets at her portals blaze.10·······/˘·
On the pure fronts Defeat ere many a day10····˘/·/··
Falls like the soot and dirt on city-snow;10·······/˘·
There hopes deferred lie sunk in piteous seams.11··˘/···/˘˘·
Her paths are disillusion and decay,10····˘/˘·˘/
With ruins piled and unapparent woe,10·/˘·······
The graves of Beauty and the wreck of dreams.10···/˘·····

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