Kyrenaikos

Alan Seeger (1888–1916) · 1916

iambic pentameter · ABABCDCDEFGEFG · 14 lines · from Poems

Lay me where soft Cyrene rambles downIn grove and garden to the sapphire sea;Twine yellow roses for the drinker's crown;Let music reach and fair heads circle me,Watching blue ocean where the white sails steerFruit-laden forth or with the wares and newsOf merchant cities seek our harbors here,Careless how Corinth fares, how Syracuse;But here, with love and sleep in her caress,Warm night shall sink and utterly persuadeThe gentle doctrine Aristippus bare, --Night-winds, and one whose white youth's loveliness,In a flowered balcony beside me laid,Dreams, with the starlight on her fragrant hair.

Words in this poem

syracuse n.
A red wine of Italy.
caress n.
An act of endearment; any act or expression of affection; an embracing, or touching, with tenderness. [F. caresse, It. carezza, LL. caritia dearness, fr. L. carus dear. See Charity.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
loveliness n.
The state or quality of being lovely. [From Lovely.]
starlight n.
The light given by the stars.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Kyrenaikos is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #617; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Alan Seeger, Kyrenaikos, in Poems (1916), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #617, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/seeger-poems/kyrenaikos.html, id L12950.

Form and metre

Kyrenaikos is 14 lines in a single stanza. It rhymes ABABCDCDEFGEFG. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%). 87% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.9 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 29% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCDEFGEFG downA · seaB · crownA · meB · steerC · newsD · hereC · syracuseD · caressE · persuadeF · bareG · lovelinessE · laidF · hairG
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Lay me where soft Cyrene rambles down9······/˘·
In grove and garden to the sapphire sea;10···/˘··/˘·
Twine yellow roses for the drinker's crown;10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Let music reach and fair heads circle me,10·/˘····/˘·
Watching blue ocean where the white sails steer10/˘·/˘·····
Fruit-laden forth or with the wares and news10·/˘·······
Of merchant cities seek our harbors here,10·/˘/˘·//˘·
Careless how Corinth fares, how Syracuse;10/˘·/˘··/˘·
But here, with love and sleep in her caress,10········˘/
Warm night shall sink and utterly persuade10·····/˘˘˘/
The gentle doctrine Aristippus bare, --10·/˘/˘·····
Night-winds, and one whose white youth's loveliness,10·······/˘˘
In a flowered balcony beside me laid,10··//˘˘˘/··
Dreams, with the starlight on her fragrant hair.10···/···/˘·

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