An Ode to Antares

Alan Seeger (1888–1916) · 1916

iambic pentameter · 100 lines · from Poems

At dusk, when lowlands where dark waters glideRobe in gray mist, and through the greening hillsThe hoot-owl calls his mate, and whippoorwillsClamor from every copse and orchard-side,I watched the red star rising in the East,And while his fellows of the flaming signFrom prisoning daylight more and more released,Lift their pale lamps, and, climbing higher, higher,Out of their locks the waters of the LineShaking in clouds of phosphorescent fire,Rose in the splendor of their curving flight,Their dolphin leap across the austral night,From windows southward opening on the seaWhat eyes, I wondered, might be watching, too,Orbed in some blossom-laden balcony.Where, from the garden to the rail above,As though a lover's greeting to his loveShould borrow body and form and hueAnd tower in torrents of floral flame,The crimson bougainvillea grew,What starlit brow uplifted to the sameMajestic regress of the summering sky,What ultimate thing--hushed, holy, throned as highAbove the currents that tarnish and profaneAs silver summits are whose pure reposeNo curious eyes discloseNor any footfalls stain,But round their beauty on azure eveningsOnly the oreads go on gauzy wings,Only the oreads troop with dance and songAnd airy beings in rainbow mists who throngOut of those wonderful worlds that lie afarBetwixt the outmost cloud and the nearest star.

Like the moon, sanguine in the orient nightShines the red flower in her beautiful hair.Her breasts are distant islands of delightUpon a sea where all is soft and fair.Those robes that make a silken sheathFor each lithe attitude that flows beneath,Shrouding in scented folds sweet warmths and tumid flowers,Call them far clouds that half emergeBeyond a sunset ocean's utmost verge,Hiding in purple shade and downpour of soft showersEnchanted isles by mortal foot untrod,And there in humid dells resplendent orchids nod;There always from serene horizons blowSoul-easing gales and there all spice-trees growThat Phoenix robbed to line his fragrant nestEach hundred years in Araby the Blest.

Star of the South that now through orient mistAt nightfall off Tampico or BelizeGreetest the sailor rising from those seasWhere first in me, a fond romanticist,The tropic sunset's bloom on cloudy pilesCast out industrious cares with dreams of fabulous isles --Thou lamp of the swart lover to his tryst,O'er planted acres at the jungle's rimReeking with orange-flower and tuberose,Dear to his eyes thy ruddy splendor glowsAmong the palms where beauty waits for him;Bliss too thou bringst to our greening North,Red scintillant through cherry-blossom rifts,Herald of summer-heat, and all the giftsAnd all the joys a summer can bring forth ----

Be thou my star, for I have made my aimTo follow loveliness till autumn-strownSunder the sinews of this flower-like frameAs rose-leaves sunder when the bud is blown.Ay, sooner spirit and sense disintegrateThan reconcilement to a common fateStrip the enchantment from a world so dressedIn hues of high romance. I cannot restWhile aught of beauty in any path untrodSwells into bloom and spreads sweet charms abroadUnworshipped of my love. I cannot seeIn Life's profusion and passionate brevityHow hearts enamored of life can strain too muchIn one long tension to hear, to see, to touch.Now on each rustling night-wind from the SouthFar music calls; beyond the harbor mouthEach outbound argosy with sail unfurledMay point the path through this fortuitous worldThat holds the heart from its desire. Away!Where tinted coast-towns gleam at close of day,Where squares are sweet with bells, or shores thick setWith bloom and bower, with mosque and minaret.Blue peaks loom up beyond the coast-plains here,White roads wind up the dales and disappear,By silvery waters in the plains afarGlimmers the inland city like a star,With gilded gates and sunny spires ablazeAnd burnished domes half-seen through luminous haze,Lo, with what opportunity Earth teems!How like a fair its ample beauty seems!Fluttering with flags its proud pavilions rise:What bright bazaars, what marvelous merchandise,Down seething alleys what melodious din,What clamor importuning from every booth!At Earth's great market where Joy is trafficked inBuy while thy purse yet swells with golden Youth!

Words in this poem 30
greening n.
A greenish apple, of several varieties, among which the Rhode Island greening is the best known for its fine-grained acid flesh and its excellent keeping quality.
copse n.
A wood of small growth; a thicket of brushwood. See Coppice. [Contr. from coppice.]
daylight n.
The light of day as opposed to the darkness of night; the light of the sun, as opposed to that of the moon or to artificial light.
wondered a.
Having performed wonders; able to perform wonderful things.
orbed a.
Having the form of an orb; round.
borrow v. t.
To receive from another as a loan, with the implied or expressed intention of returning the identical article or its equivalent in kind; -- the opposite of lend. [OE. borwen, AS. borgian, fr. borg, borh, pledge; akin to D. borg, G. borg; prob. fr. root of AS. beorgan to protect. Borough.]
starlit a.
Lighted by the stars; starlight.
regress n.
The act of passing back; passage back; return; retrogression. [L. regressus, fr. regredi, regressus. See Regrede.]
curious a.
Difficult to please or satisfy; solicitous to be correct; careful; scrupulous; nice; exact. [OF. curios, curius, F. curieux, L. curiosus careful, inquisitive, fr. cura care. See Cure.]
gauzy a.
Pertaining to, or resembling, gauze; thin and slight as gauze.
afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
betwixt prep.
In the space which separates; between. [OE. betwix, bitwix, rarely bitwixt, AS. betweox, betweohs, betweoh, betwih; pref. be- by + a form fr. AS. twa two. See Between.]
outmost a.
Farthest from the middle or interior; farthest outward; outermost. [OE. outemest, utmest, AS. , a superl. fr. out. See Out, Utmost, and cf. Outermost.]
lithe v. i.
To listen or listen to; to hearken to. P. Plowman. [Icel Listen.]
shrouding n.
The shrouds. See Shroud, n., 7.
downpour n.
A pouring or streaming downwards; esp., a heavy or continuous shower.
enchanted a.
Under the power of enchantment; possessed or exercised by enchanters; as, an enchanted castle.
araby n.
The country of Arabia.
nightfall n.
The close of the day.
romanticist n.
One who advocates romanticism in modern literature. J. R.
industrious a.
Given to industry; characterized by diligence; constantly, regularly, or habitually occupied; busy; assiduous; not slothful or idle; -- commonly implying devotion to lawful and useful labor. [L. industrius, industriosus: cf. F. industrieux. See Industry.]
tryst v. i.
To mutually agree to meet at a certain place.
tuberose n.
A plant (Polianthes tuberosa) with a tuberous root and a liliaceous flower. It is much cultivated for its beautiful and fragrant white blossoms. [Cf. G. tuberose, F. tubéreuse, NL. Polianthes tuberosa. See Tuberous.]
scintillant a.
Emitting sparks, or fine igneous particles; sparkling. M. [L. scintillans, p.pr. of scintillare to sparkle. See Scintillate.]
loveliness n.
The state or quality of being lovely. [From Lovely.]
aught n.
Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]
argosy n.
A large ship, esp. a merchant vessel of the largest size. [Earlier ragusy, fr. ragusa meaning orig. a vessel of Ragusa.]
minaret n.
A slender, lofty tower attached to a mosque and surrounded by one or more projecting balconies, from which the summon to prayer is cried by the muezzin. [Sp. minarete, Ar. manarat lamp, lantern, lighthouse, turret, fr. nar to shine.]
sunny a.
Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
ablaze adv.
On fire; in a blaze, gleaming. Milman. [Pref. a- + blaze.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

An Ode to Antares is 100 lines in 4 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 38 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 45% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBACDCEDEFF-G-HHGIGIJJKLLKMMNNOO glideA · hillsB · whippoorwillsB · sideA · eastC · signD · releasedC · higherE · lineD · fireE · flightF · nightF · sea · tooG · balcony · aboveH · loveH · hueG · flameI · grewG · sameI · skyJ · highJ · profaneK · reposeL · discloseL · stainK · eveningsM · wingsM · songN · throngN · afarO · starO
  2. 2 ABABCCDEEDFFGGHH nightA · hairB · delightA · fairB · sheathC · beneathC · flowersD · emergeE · vergeE · showersD · untrodF · nodF · blowG · growG · nestH · blestH
  3. 3 ABBACCAD--DEFFE mistA · belizeB · seasB · romanticistA · pilesC · islesC · trystA · rimD · tuberose · glows · himD · northE · riftsF · giftsF · forthE
  4. 4 ABABCCDD----EEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOPOP aimA · strownB · frameA · blownB · disintegrateC · fateC · dressedD · restD · untrod · abroad · see · brevity · muchE · touchE · southF · mouthF · unfurledG · worldG · awayH · dayH · setI · minaretI · hereJ · disappearJ · afarK · starK · ablazeL · hazeL · teemsM · seemsM · riseN · merchandiseN · dinO · boothP · inO · youthP
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
At dusk, when lowlands where dark waters glide10···/···/˘·
Robe in gray mist, and through the greening hills10·······/˘·
The hoot-owl calls his mate, and whippoorwills10·······/˘·
Clamor from every copse and orchard-side,10/˘·/˘··/˘·
I watched the red star rising in the East,10·····/˘···
And while his fellows of the flaming sign10···/˘··/˘·
From prisoning daylight more and more released,10·/˘/····˘/
Lift their pale lamps, and, climbing higher, higher,11·····/˘/˘/˘
Out of their locks the waters of the Line10·····/˘···
Shaking in clouds of phosphorescent fire,11/˘·······/˘
Rose in the splendor of their curving flight,10···/˘··/˘·
Their dolphin leap across the austral night,10·/˘·˘/·/˘·
From windows southward opening on the sea10·/˘//˘˘···
What eyes, I wondered, might be watching, too,10···/˘··/˘·
Orbed in some blossom-laden balcony.10···/˘/˘/˘˘
Where, from the garden to the rail above,10···/˘·····
As though a lover's greeting to his love10···/˘/˘···
Should borrow body and form and hue9·/·/˘····
And tower in torrents of floral flame,10·/˘·/˘·/˘·
The crimson bougainvillea grew,9·/˘··/˘˘·
What starlit brow uplifted to the same10·/˘·/˘˘···
Majestic regress of the summering sky,10˘/˘/˘··/˘·
What ultimate thing--hushed, holy, throned as high10·/˘··/˘···
Above the currents that tarnish and profane11···/˘·/˘·˘/
As silver summits are whose pure repose10·/˘/˘···˘/
No curious eyes disclose7·/˘˘·˘/
Nor any footfalls stain,6·/˘/··
But round their beauty on azure evenings10···/˘·/˘/˘
Only the oreads go on gauzy wings,10/˘·····/˘·
Only the oreads troop with dance and song10/˘········
And airy beings in rainbow mists who throng11·/˘/˘·/····
Out of those wonderful worlds that lie afar10···/˘···˘/
Betwixt the outmost cloud and the nearest star.11˘/·/˘···/˘·
Like the moon, sanguine in the orient night11···/˘··/˘··
Shines the red flower in her beautiful hair.10···/··/˘˘·
Her breasts are distant islands of delight10···/˘/˘·˘/
Upon a sea where all is soft and fair.10··········
Those robes that make a silken sheath8·····/˘·
For each lithe attitude that flows beneath,10···/˘·····
Shrouding in scented folds sweet warmths and tumid flowers,12/˘·/˘····/˘/
Call them far clouds that half emerge8······˘/
Beyond a sunset ocean's utmost verge,10···/·/˘/··
Hiding in purple shade and downpour of soft showers12/˘·/˘··/˘··/
Enchanted isles by mortal foot untrod,10˘/˘··/˘···
And there in humid dells resplendent orchids nod;12···/˘·˘/˘/˘·
There always from serene horizons blow10·/··˘/˘/˘·
Soul-easing gales and there all spice-trees grow10·/˘·······
That Phoenix robbed to line his fragrant nest10·/˘····/˘·
Each hundred years in Araby the Blest.10·/˘··/˘˘··
Star of the South that now through orient mist11·······/˘··
At nightfall off Tampico or Belize10·/······˘/
Greetest the sailor rising from those seas10/˘·/˘/˘···
Where first in me, a fond romanticist,10······˘/˘˘
The tropic sunset's bloom on cloudy piles10·/˘/···/˘·
Cast out industrious cares with dreams of fabulous isles --12··˘/˘····/˘·
Thou lamp of the swart lover to his tryst,10·····/˘···
O'er planted acres at the jungle's rim10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Reeking with orange-flower and tuberose,10/˘·/˘/˘·/˘
Dear to his eyes thy ruddy splendor glows10·····/˘/˘·
Among the palms where beauty waits for him;10·····/˘···
Bliss too thou bringst to our greening North,10·····/˘/˘·
Red scintillant through cherry-blossom rifts,10·/˘˘·/˘/˘·
Herald of summer-heat, and all the gifts10/˘·/˘·····
And all the joys a summer can bring forth ----10·····/˘···
Be thou my star, for I have made my aim10··········
To follow loveliness till autumn-strown10·/˘/˘˘·/˘·
Sunder the sinews of this flower-like frame10/˘·····/··
As rose-leaves sunder when the bud is blown.10···/˘·····
Ay, sooner spirit and sense disintegrate10·/˘/··˘/˘·
Than reconcilement to a common fate9·/˘˘··/˘·
Strip the enchantment from a world so dressed10··˘/˘·····
In hues of high romance. I cannot rest10····˘/·/˘·
While aught of beauty in any path untrod11···/˘·/˘···
Swells into bloom and spreads sweet charms abroad10········˘/
Unworshipped of my love. I cannot see10·······/˘·
In Life's profusion and passionate brevity11··˘/˘·/˘/˘˘
How hearts enamored of life can strain too much11··˘/˘······
In one long tension to hear, to see, to touch.11···/˘······
Now on each rustling night-wind from the South10···/˘·····
Far music calls; beyond the harbor mouth10·/˘····/˘·
Each outbound argosy with sail unfurled10·/·/˘˘··˘/
May point the path through this fortuitous world10······˘/˘·
That holds the heart from its desire. Away!10······˘/˘/
Where tinted coast-towns gleam at close of day,10·/˘·······
Where squares are sweet with bells, or shores thick set10··········
With bloom and bower, with mosque and minaret.10···/····˘/
Blue peaks loom up beyond the coast-plains here,10··········
White roads wind up the dales and disappear,10········˘/
By silvery waters in the plains afar10·/˘/˘···˘/
Glimmers the inland city like a star,10/˘·/·/˘···
With gilded gates and sunny spires ablaze10·/˘··/˘·˘/
And burnished domes half-seen through luminous haze,10·/˘····/˘·
Lo, with what opportunity Earth teems!10····˘/˘˘··
How like a fair its ample beauty seems!10·····/˘/˘·
Fluttering with flags its proud pavilions rise:10/˘····˘/˘·
What bright bazaars, what marvelous merchandise,10··˘/·/˘/˘·
Down seething alleys what melodious din,10·/˘/˘·˘/˘·
What clamor importuning from every booth!11·/˘·····/˘·
At Earth's great market where Joy is trafficked in11···/˘······
Buy while thy purse yet swells with golden Youth!10·······/˘·

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