Old Timers

Carl Sandburg (1878–1967) · 1918

iambic pentameter · 15 lines · from Cornhuskers

I am an ancient reluctant conscript.

On the soup wagons of Xerxes I was a cleaner of pans.

On the march of Miltiades' phalanx I had a haft and head;I had a bristling gleaming spear-handle.

Red-headed Cæsar picked me for a teamster.He said, "Go to work, you Tuscan bastard,Rome calls for a man who can drive horses."

The units of conquest led by Charles the Twelfth,The whirling whimsical Napoleonic columns:They saw me one of the horseshoers.

I trimmed the feet of a white horse Bonaparte swept the night stars with.

Lincoln said, "Get into the game; your nation takes you."And I drove a wagon and team and I had my arm shot offAt Spottsylvania Court House.

I am an ancient reluctant conscript.

Words in this poem

conscript a.
Enrolled; written; registered. Conscript fathers (Rom. Antiq.), the senators of ancient Rome. When certain new senators were first enrolled with the [L. conscriptus, p.p. of conscribere to write together, to enroll; con- + scribere to write. See Scribe.]
cleaner n.
One who, or that which, cleans.
haft n.
A handle; that part of an instrument or vessel taken into the hand, and by which it is held and used; -- said chiefly of a knife, sword, or dagger; the hilt. [AS. hæft; akin to D. & G. heft, Icel. hepti, and to E. Heave, or have. Cf. Heft.]
teamster n.
One who drives a team.
napoleonic a.
Of or pertaining to Napoleon I., or his family; resembling, or having the qualities of, Napoleon I. Lowell.
drove n.
A collection of cattle driven, or cattle collected for driving; a number of animals, as oxen, sheep, or swine, driven in a body. [AS. draf, fr. drifan to drive. See Drive.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Old Timers is in the public domain. This text is taken from Cornhuskers, Wikisource; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Carl Sandburg, Old Timers, in Cornhuskers (1918), text of Wikisource, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/sandburg-cornhuskers/old-timers.html, id L29089.

Form and metre

Old Timers is 15 lines in 8 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 72%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I am an ancient reluctant conscript.10···/˘˘/˘/·
On the soup wagons of Xerxes I was a cleaner of pans.15···/˘·/˘···/˘··
On the march of Miltiades' phalanx I had a haft and head;14······/˘······
I had a bristling gleaming spear-handle.11···/˘˘/˘·/˘
Red-headed Cæsar picked me for a teamster.10·/˘·····/˘
He said, "Go to work, you Tuscan bastard,10······/˘/˘
Rome calls for a man who can drive horses."10········/˘
The units of conquest led by Charles the Twelfth,11·/˘·/˘·····
The whirling whimsical Napoleonic columns:13·/˘/˘˘˘·˘/˘/˘
They saw me one of the horseshoers.9·········
I trimmed the feet of a white horse Bonaparte swept the night stars with.16········/˘······
Lincoln said, "Get into the game; your nation takes you."13/˘·······/˘··
And I drove a wagon and team and I had my arm shot off15····/˘·········
At Spottsylvania Court House.7·······
I am an ancient reluctant conscript.10···/˘˘/˘/·

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