Under

Carl Sandburg (1878–1967) · 1916

trochaic trimeter · 18 lines · from Chicago Poems

I am the undertowWashing tides of powerBattering the pillarsUnder your things of high law.

I am a sleeplessSlowfaring eater,Maker of rust and rotIn your bastioned fastenings,Caissons deep.

I am the LawOlder than youAnd your builders proud.

I am deafIn all daysWhether youSay "Yes" or "No".

I am the crumbler:To-morrow.

Words in this poem

undertow n.
The current that sets seaward near the bottom when waves are breaking upon the shore.
sleepless a.
Having no sleep; wakeful.
bastioned a.
Furnished with a bastion; having bastions.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Under is in the public domain. This text is taken from Chicago Poems, Wikisource; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Carl Sandburg, Under, in Chicago Poems (1916), text of Wikisource, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/sandburg-chicago-poems/under.html, id L28934.

Form and metre

Under is 18 lines in 5 stanzas. The metre is trochaic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%).

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Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I am the undertow6···/˘·
Washing tides of power6/˘··/˘
Battering the pillars6/˘˘·/˘
Under your things of high law.7·······
I am a sleepless5···/˘
Slowfaring eater,5···/˘
Maker of rust and rot6/˘····
In your bastioned fastenings,7··/˘/˘˘
Caissons deep.3/˘·
I am the Law4····
Older than you4/˘··
And your builders proud.5··/˘·
I am deaf3···
In all days3···
Whether you3···
Say "Yes" or "No".4····
I am the crumbler:5·····
To-morrow.3·/˘

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