Two Neighbors

Carl Sandburg (1878–1967) · 1916

free verse · 13 lines · from Chicago Poems

Faces of two eternities keep looking at me.One is Omar Khayam and the red stuffwherein men forget yesterday and to-morrowand remember only the voices and songs,the stories, newspapers and fights of today.One is Louis Cornaro and a slim trickof slow, short meals across slow, short years,letting Death open the door only in slow, short inches.I have a neighbor who swears by Omar.I have a neighbor who swears by Cornaro.Both are happy.Faces of two eternities keep looking at me.Let them look.

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Two Neighbors is in the public domain. This text is taken from Chicago Poems, Wikisource; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Carl Sandburg, Two Neighbors, in Chicago Poems (1916), text of Wikisource, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/sandburg-chicago-poems/two-neighbors.html, id L28893.

Form and metre

Two Neighbors is 13 lines in a single stanza.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A-B------B-A- meA · stuff · morrowB · songs · today · trick · years · inches · omar · cornaroB · happy · meA · look
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Faces of two eternities keep looking at me.13/˘··˘/˘˘·/˘··
One is Omar Khayam and the red stuff9··/˘·····
wherein men forget yesterday and to-morrow12···˘//˘···/˘
and remember only the voices and songs,11·˘/˘/˘·/˘··
the stories, newspapers and fights of today.11·/˘/·˘···˘/
One is Louis Cornaro and a slim trick11··/˘·······
of slow, short meals across slow, short years,9····˘/···
letting Death open the door only in slow, short inches.14/˘·/˘··/˘···/˘
I have a neighbor who swears by Omar.10···/˘···/˘
I have a neighbor who swears by Cornaro.11···/˘······
Both are happy.4··/˘
Faces of two eternities keep looking at me.13/˘··˘/˘˘·/˘··
Let them look.3···

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