To Beachey—1912

Carl Sandburg (1878–1967) · 1916

trochaic trimeter · 16 lines · from Chicago Poems

Riding against the east,A veering, steady shadowPurrs the motor-callOf the man-birdReady with the death-laughterIn his throatAnd in his heart alwaysThe love of the big blue beyond.

Only a man,A far fleck of shadow on the eastSitting at easeWith his hands on a wheelAnd around him the large gray wings.Hold him, great soft wings,Keep and deal kindly, O wings,With the cool, calm shadow at the wheel.

Words in this poem

fleck n.
A flake; also, a lock, as of wool. J. Martin.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

To Beachey—1912 is in the public domain. This text is taken from Chicago Poems, Wikisource; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Carl Sandburg, To Beachey—1912, in Chicago Poems (1916), text of Wikisource, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/sandburg-chicago-poems/to-beachey-1912.html, id L28895.

Form and metre

To Beachey—1912 is 16 lines in 2 stanzas of 8 lines each. The metre is trochaic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 76%).

See other poems in trochaic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 2 ---ABBBA man · east · ease · wheelA · wingsB · wingsB · wingsB · wheelA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Riding against the east,6/˘····
A veering, steady shadow7·/˘/˘/·
Purrs the motor-call5··/˘·
Of the man-bird4····
Ready with the death-laughter7/˘···/˘
In his throat3···
And in his heart always6····/·
The love of the big blue beyond.8········
Only a man,4/˘··
A far fleck of shadow on the east9····/····
Sitting at ease4/˘··
With his hands on a wheel6······
And around him the large gray wings.8········
Hold him, great soft wings,5·····
Keep and deal kindly, O wings,7···/˘··
With the cool, calm shadow at the wheel.9····/····

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