A Dream Girl

Carl Sandburg (1878–1967) · 1916

free verse · 16 lines · from Chicago Poems

You will come one day in a waver of love,Tender as dew, impetuous as rain,The tan of the sun will be on your skin,The purr of the breeze in your murmuring speech,You will pose with a hill-flower grace.

You will come, with your slim, expressive arms,A poise of the head no sculptor has caughtAnd nuances spoken with shoulder and neck,Your face in a pass-and-repass of moodsAs many as skies in delicate changeOf cloud and blue and flimmering sun.

Yet,You may not come, O girl of a dream,We may but pass as the world goes byAnd take from a look of eyes into eyes,A film of hope and a memoried day.

Words in this poem

waver v. i.
To play or move to and fro; to move one way and the other; hence, to totter; to reel; to swing; to flutter. [OE. waveren, from AS. wæfre wavering, restless. See Wave, v. i.]
purr v. i.
To murmur as a cat. See Pur.
sculptor n.
One who sculptures; one whose occupation is to carve statues, or works of sculpture. [L. sculptor, fr. sculpere, sculptum, to carve; cf. scalpere to cut, carve, scratch, and Gr. sculpteur.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

A Dream Girl is in the public domain. This text is taken from Chicago Poems, Wikisource; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Carl Sandburg, A Dream Girl, in Chicago Poems (1916), text of Wikisource, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/sandburg-chicago-poems/a-dream-girl.html, id L28979.

Form and metre

A Dream Girl is 16 lines in 3 stanzas.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
You will come one day in a waver of love,11·······/˘··
Tender as dew, impetuous as rain,9/˘··˘/˘··
The tan of the sun will be on your skin,10··········
The purr of the breeze in your murmuring speech,11·······/˘˘·
You will pose with a hill-flower grace.9······/˘·
You will come, with your slim, expressive arms,10······˘/˘·
A poise of the head no sculptor has caught10······/˘··
And nuances spoken with shoulder and neck,11·/˘˘/˘·/˘··
Your face in a pass-and-repass of moods10······˘/··
As many as skies in delicate change10·/˘···/˘˘·
Of cloud and blue and flimmering sun.9·········
Yet,1·
You may not come, O girl of a dream,9·········
We may but pass as the world goes by9·········
And take from a look of eyes into eyes,10··········
A film of hope and a memoried day.9·········

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