Chapter VIII: Story on Making a Good Use of the Tongue

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 10 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

A man rubbed the ears of a boy very hard,Saying, "Frivolous talker ! with fortune ill-starred !I gave you an axe to cut firewood up fine;I said not, ' The wall of the mosque undermine!'"The tongue to give thanks and to praise with you got;For to backbite, the grateful man uses it not.The Koran and advice have their way through the ear ;False accusing and falsehood, take care not to hear!Two eyes, for beholding God's wonders, are well,Not on faults of a friend or a brother to dwell.

Words in this poem

backbite v. i.
To wound by clandestine detraction; to censure meanly or spitefully (as absent person); to slander or speak evil of (one absent). [2nd back, n., + bite]
beholding a.
Obliged; beholden.
dwell v. i.
To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter VIII: Story on Making a Good Use of the Tongue is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter VIII: Story on Making a Good Use of the Tongue, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/8-6.html, id L29724.

Form and metre

Chapter VIII: Story on Making a Good Use of the Tongue is 10 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEE hardA · starredA · fineB · undermineB · gotC · notC · earD · hearD · wellE · dwellE
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A man rubbed the ears of a boy very hard,12···˘·····/˘·
Saying, "Frivolous talker ! with fortune ill-starred !12/˘/˘˘/˘·/˘··
I gave you an axe to cut firewood up fine;12·······/˘···
I said not, ' The wall of the mosque undermine!'"11········/˘·
The tongue to give thanks and to praise with you got;11···········
For to backbite, the grateful man uses it not.12··/··/˘·/˘··
The Koran and advice have their way through the ear ;12·˘/·˘/······
False accusing and falsehood, take care not to hear!12·˘/˘·/······
Two eyes, for beholding God's wonders, are well,11···˘/˘·/˘··
Not on faults of a friend or a brother to dwell.12········/˘··

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