Chapter VIII: On Praising God for the Creation of Mankind

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 34 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

To the number of joints in a finger, give thought !Which with Euclid's precision together He brought."Twould therefore be folly and madness in one,A finger to place on a work He has done.On the gait of a man, let your thoughts be profound!How together some bones He has jointed and bound !Without moving the ankle, the knee and the toe,A step from the spot one's unable to go !A man without trouble can make himself prone,For his back is not fashioned from one piece of bone.He has two hundred bones on each other so laid,That a tall, clayey structure, like you, He has made!The veins of your body, oh you, of sweet looks!Form a mead with three hundred and sixty rich brooks.In the head are established reflection and sight;There, too, are discretion and thinking aright.The body is dear, on account of the mind;And the mind, too, for knowledge most precious you find.The brutes, being mean, have a down-hanging face ;You're erect on your feet like an " Alif" in grace.He has placed their mouths downwards, to help them to feed ;The food to your mouth, you with dignity lead.It does not look well, when such pref'rence is shown,That you bow your head down save to worship alone.And yet with this form, that can pleasure inspire,Be not of dazzled ! a good disposition acquire !You require the straight road, not a stature that's straight;For the scoffer is like us in figure and gait.Do not seek to contend against Him, if you're wise,Who gave you your ears and your mouth and your eyes!I admit you don't batter your foe with a stone ;Do not fight with the Friend, out of rudeness alone!Those of wise disposition who gratitude know,Their wealth with the needle of thanksgiving sew.

Words in this poem

discretion n.
Disjunction; separation. Mede. [F. discrétion, L. discretio separation, difference, discernment, fr. discernere, discretum. See Discreet, Discern.]
aright adv.
Rightly; correctly; in a right way or form; without mistake or crime; as, to worship God aright. [Pref. a- + right.]
wealth n.
Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
thanksgiving n.
The act of rending thanks, or expressing gratitude for favors or mercies.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter VIII: On Praising God for the Creation of Mankind is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter VIII: On Praising God for the Creation of Mankind, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/8-3.html, id L29721.

Form and metre

Chapter VIII: On Praising God for the Creation of Mankind is 34 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 88% of the lines. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in anapaestic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJ--KK--LLMMNNOO thoughtA · broughtA · oneB · doneB · profoundC · boundC · toeD · goD · proneE · boneE · laidF · madeF · looksG · brooksG · sightH · arightH · mindI · findI · faceJ · graceJ · feed · lead · shownK · aloneK · inspire · acquire · straightL · gaitL · wiseM · eyesM · stoneN · aloneN · knowO · sewO
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
To the number of joints in a finger, give thought !12··/˘····/˘··
Which with Euclid's precision together He brought.12··/˘˘/˘˘/˘··
"Twould therefore be folly and madness in one,11····/˘·/˘··
A finger to place on a work He has done.11·/˘········
On the gait of a man, let your thoughts be profound!12··········˘/
How together some bones He has jointed and bound !12·˘/˘····/˘··
Without moving the ankle, the knee and the toe,12··/˘·/˘·····
A step from the spot one's unable to go !11······˘/˘··
A man without trouble can make himself prone,11····/˘··˘/·
For his back is not fashioned from one piece of bone.12·····/˘·····
He has two hundred bones on each other so laid,12···/˘···/˘··
That a tall, clayey structure, like you, He has made!12···/˘/˘·····
The veins of your body, oh you, of sweet looks!11····/˘·····
Form a mead with three hundred and sixty rich brooks.12·····/˘·/˘··
In the head are established reflection and sight;12····˘/˘˘/˘··
There, too, are discretion and thinking aright.11···˘/˘·/˘˘/
The body is dear, on account of the mind;11·/˘···˘/···
And the mind, too, for knowledge most precious you find.12·····/˘·/˘··
The brutes, being mean, have a down-hanging face ;11··/˘····/˘·
You're erect on your feet like an " Alif" in grace.12·˘/·········
He has placed their mouths downwards, to help them to feed ;12·····/˘·····
The food to your mouth, you with dignity lead.11·······/˘˘·
It does not look well, when such pref'rence is shown,11···········
That you bow your head down save to worship alone.12········/˘˘/
And yet with this form, that can pleasure inspire,11·······/˘˘/
Be not of dazzled ! a good disposition acquire !13···/˘···˘/˘˘/
You require the straight road, not a stature that's straight;12··/·····/˘··
For the scoffer is like us in figure and gait.12··/˘····/˘··
Do not seek to contend against Him, if you're wise,12····˘/······
Who gave you your ears and your mouth and your eyes!11···········
I admit you don't batter your foe with a stone ;12·˘/··/˘·····
Do not fight with the Friend, out of rudeness alone!12········/˘˘/
Those of wise disposition who gratitude know,12····˘/˘·/˘··
Their wealth with the needle of thanksgiving sew.11····/˘··/˘·

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