Chapter VIII: Story of a Saint Mistaken for a Jew

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 12 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

A man passed a person possessing God's grace,And thought him a Jew, by the cut of his face.On the back of his neck, he inflicted a whack ;The holy man gave him the shirt from his back !Ashamed, he exclaimed, " What I've done is amiss!Forgive me ! what time for a favour is this?""I brood not on evil," he, thankfully, said,"But I am not the man who came into your head."A nature refined and a form free from pride,Surpass a good name and a wicked inside.The prowling night-robber seems better to me,Than the profligate wretch you in pious garb see.

Words in this poem

whack v. t.
To strike; to beat; to give a heavy or resounding blow to; to thrash; to make with whacks. [Cf. Thwack.]
favour n.
Kind regard; propitious aspect; countenance; friendly disposition; kindness; good will. [Written also favour.]
prowling a.
Accustomed to prowl, or engaged in roving stealthily, as for prey.
garb n.
External appearance, as expressive of the feelings or character; looks; fashion or manner, as of speech. [OF. garbe looks, countenance, grace, ornament, fr. OHG. garawi, garwi, ornament, dress. akin to E. gear. See Gear, n.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter VIII: Story of a Saint Mistaken for a Jew is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter VIII: Story of a Saint Mistaken for a Jew, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/8-11.html, id L29729.

Form and metre

Chapter VIII: Story of a Saint Mistaken for a Jew is 12 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 95%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFF graceA · faceA · whackB · backB · amissC · thisC · saidD · headD · prideE · insideE · meF · seeF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A man passed a person possessing God's grace,11····/˘˘/˘··
And thought him a Jew, by the cut of his face.11···········
On the back of his neck, he inflicted a whack ;12·······˘/˘··
The holy man gave him the shirt from his back !11·/˘········
Ashamed, he exclaimed, " What I've done is amiss!11˘/·˘/····˘/
Forgive me ! what time for a favour is this?"11˘/·····/˘··
"I brood not on evil," he, thankfully, said,11····/˘·/˘˘·
"But I am not the man who came into your head."12············
A nature refined and a form free from pride,11·/˘˘/······
Surpass a good name and a wicked inside.11˘/·····/˘/·
The prowling night-robber seems better to me,11·/˘·/˘·/˘··
Than the profligate wretch you in pious garb see.11··/˘····/··

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