Chapter VII: Story of Persons you may Backbite

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 12 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

Three persons, I've heard, you may justly backbite;When these you've exceeded, the fourth is not right.The first is a king, to oppression inclined,Through whom you see ruin on ev'ry one's mind;It is lawful to mention the news ev'rywhere,That respecting him, people may exercise care.Next; a veil on a wretch, void of shame, do not weave !For with his own fingers his screen he will reave !In reviling him, brother, you sin not one whit!For headlong he tumbles, down into a pit !Third; the teller of falsehoods who deals in false weight ;Whatever you know of his wrong doings, state !

Words in this poem

backbite v. i.
To wound by clandestine detraction; to censure meanly or spitefully (as absent person); to slander or speak evil of (one absent). [2nd back, n., + bite]
reave v. t.
To take away by violence or by stealth; to snatch away; to rob; to despoil; to bereave. . [AS. reáfian, from reáf spoil, plunder, clothing, reófan to break (cf. bireófan to deprive of); akin to G. rauben to rob, Icel. raufa to rob, rjufa to break, vio]
reviling n.
Reproach; abuse; vilification.
whit n.
The smallest part or particle imaginable; a bit; a jot; an iota; -- generally used in an adverbial phrase in a negative sentence. [OE. wight, wiht, AS. wiht a creature, a thing. See Wight, and cf. Aught, Naught.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter VII: Story of Persons you may Backbite is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter VII: Story of Persons you may Backbite, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/7-21.html, id L29704.

Form and metre

Chapter VII: Story of Persons you may Backbite is 12 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFF backbiteA · rightA · inclinedB · mindB · ev'rywhereC · careC · weaveD · reaveD · whitE · pitE · weightF · stateF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Three persons, I've heard, you may justly backbite;11·/˘····/˘/·
When these you've exceeded, the fourth is not right.11···˘/˘·····
The first is a king, to oppression inclined,11······˘/˘˘/
Through whom you see ruin on ev'ry one's mind;11····/˘·····
It is lawful to mention the news ev'rywhere,12··/˘·/˘·····
That respecting him, people may exercise care.12·˘/˘·/˘·/˘··
Next; a veil on a wretch, void of shame, do not weave !12············
For with his own fingers his screen he will reave !11····/˘·····
In reviling him, brother, you sin not one whit!12·˘/˘·/˘·····
For headlong he tumbles, down into a pit !11·/··/˘·····
Third; the teller of falsehoods who deals in false weight ;12··/˘·/······
Whatever you know of his wrong doings, state !11·/˘·····/˘·

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