Chapter VII: On the Excellence of Silence and the Sweetness of Self-denial

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 30 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

If you draw in your feet 'neath your skirt, mountain-wise,Past the heavens in grandeur your head will arise.Oh man of great knowledge, have little to say !For the dumb will be saved on the Last Judgment Day!Those knowing the gems of God's mystery well,Do not open their mouths, but for pearls, like the shell.The garrulous man has so plugged up his ears,That excepting in silence no counsel he hears.When your wish is perpetual talking, of course,No relish you'll get from another's discourse.To make unconsidered remarks is not meet;It is wrong to reply till the speech is complete!Those reflecting on error and rectitude, riseSuperior to prattlers, with ready replies.Since speech is a perfect attainment in man,Do not make yourself faulty by talk ! if you can.Him ashamed you won't see who has little to say ;Better one grain of musk than a hillock of clay.Beware of the fool with the talk of ten men !Like a wise man speak once and effectively, then!You have shot five-score arrows and errant they flew ;Shoot one if you're wary and let it be true !Why mentions a man as a secret, the taleWhich if publicly uttered would make his cheeks pale?Do not slander too freely in front of a wall !For it may be that some one behind it hears all !Your mind's a town wall, all your secrets around,Take care that the door, opened wide, is not found!The sage sewed his mouth up because he assumed,That the candle by means of its tongue is consumed.

Words in this poem

garrulous a.
Talking much, especially about commonplace or trivial things; talkative; loquacious. [L. garrulus, fr. garrire to chatter, talk; cf. Gr. Call.]
unconsidered a.
Not considered or attended to; not regarded; inconsiderable; trifling.
beware v. t.
To avoid; to take care of; to have a care for.
effectively adv.
With effect; powerfully; completely; thoroughly.
errant n.
One who wanders about. Fuller.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter VII: On the Excellence of Silence and the Sweetness of Self-denial is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter VII: On the Excellence of Silence and the Sweetness of Self-denial, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/7-2.html, id L29685.

Form and metre

Chapter VII: On the Excellence of Silence and the Sweetness of Self-denial is 30 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFAAGGBBHHIIJJKKLLMM wiseA · ariseA · sayB · dayB · wellC · shellC · earsD · hearsD · courseE · discourseE · meetF · completeF · riseA · repliesA · manG · canG · sayB · clayB · menH · thenH · flewI · trueI · taleJ · paleJ · wallK · allK · aroundL · foundL · assumedM · consumedM
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
If you draw in your feet 'neath your skirt, mountain-wise,12·········/˘·
Past the heavens in grandeur your head will arise.12··/˘·˘/···˘/
Oh man of great knowledge, have little to say !11····/˘·/˘··
For the dumb will be saved on the Last Judgment Day!12·········/˘·
Those knowing the gems of God's mystery well,11·/˘····/˘˘·
Do not open their mouths, but for pearls, like the shell.12··/˘········
The garrulous man has so plugged up his ears,12·/˘˘····˘···
That excepting in silence no counsel he hears.12··/˘·/˘·/˘··
When your wish is perpetual talking, of course,12····˘/˘˘/˘··
No relish you'll get from another's discourse.11·/˘···˘/˘/˘
To make unconsidered remarks is not meet;12······˘˘/···
It is wrong to reply till the speech is complete!12····˘/····˘/
Those reflecting on error and rectitude, rise12·˘/˘·/˘·/˘··
Superior to prattlers, with ready replies.12˘/˘˘····/˘˘/
Since speech is a perfect attainment in man,11····˘/˘/˘··
Do not make yourself faulty by talk ! if you can.12···/˘/˘·····
Him ashamed you won't see who has little to say ;12·˘/·····/˘··
Better one grain of musk than a hillock of clay.12/˘······/˘··
Beware of the fool with the talk of ten men !11˘/·········
Like a wise man speak once and effectively, then!12·······˘/˘˘·
You have shot five-score arrows and errant they flew ;12·····/˘·/˘··
Shoot one if you're wary and let it be true !11····/˘·····
Why mentions a man as a secret, the tale11·/˘····/˘··
Which if publicly uttered would make his cheeks pale?12··/˘˘/˘·····
Do not slander too freely in front of a wall !12··/˘·/˘·····
For it may be that some one behind it hears all !12············
Your mind's a town wall, all your secrets around,11·······/˘··
Take care that the door, opened wide, is not found!12·····/˘˘····
The sage sewed his mouth up because he assumed,12···˘······˘/
That the candle by means of its tongue is consumed.12··/˘······˘/

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