Chapter VII: On the Advantage of Screening

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 34 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

A certain one sat before David of Tai,Saying, "So and so Sufi I saw tipsy lie ;His turban and shirt stained with vomited food,A number of dogs in a ring round him stood."When the good-natured man heard this tale to a close,On his face angry frowns at the speaker arose.He was wroth for a little and said, "Oh my friend!To-day a kind comrade will prove a Godsend.Go! and bring him away from that horrible place!For by law it's forbid; to our sect, it's disgrace !On your back, man-like, bring him, for drunkards they say,Do not hold in their fingers the reins of the way !"These words made the hearer look wretchedly blank;Like an ass in the mire, in reflection he sank.He could not evade the injunction he got ;And he loathed to convey on his shoulders a sot.He writhed for a time but no remedy saw,Nor means from the order his head to withdraw.He got ready and carried him off, without choice,On his shoulders ; the city roughs making a noise.One cursing them shouted, "These Dervishes heed !How good are their piety, chasteness and creed!""See the wine-drinking Sufis !" another one cried,"Who have pawned their patched garments for wine, fortified!"People pointed their fingers as onwards they slunk,Saying, "This one's top-heavy and that one half drunk !"A sword on the neck, struck by tyrannous foe,Is more just than town jeers and the rage of the "low."Misfortune he bore ; passed a troublesome day ;Without choice, he conveyed him to where his home lay.From reflection and shame, he was sleepless that night;Next morning Tai smiling remarked, at his plight :"In the street, you should never a brother defame !For Time, in the city will treat you the same !"

Words in this poem

sufi n.
A title or surname of the king of Persia. [From the name of a dynasty of Persian kings, Safi, Safavi; said to come from name Safi-ud-din of an ancestor of the family, confused with s pious.]
angry a.
Troublesome; vexatious; rigorous. [See Anger.]
wroth a.
Full of wrath; angry; incensed; much exasperated; wrathful. [OE. wroth, wrap, AS. wraedh wroth, crooked, bad; akin to wriedhan to writhe, and to OS. wreedhangry, D. wreed cruel, OHG. reid twisted, Icel. reiedhr angry, Dan]
godsend n.
Something sent by God; an unexpected acquisiton or piece of good fortune.
wretchedly adv.
In a wretched manner; miserably; despicable.
chasteness n.
Chastity; purity.
tyrannous a.
Tyrannical; arbitrary; unjustly severe; despotic. Sir P.
sleepless a.
Having no sleep; wakeful.
plight v. t.
To weave; to braid; to fold; to plait. [OE. pliten; probably through Old French, fr. LL. plectare, L. plectere. See Plait, Ply.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter VII: On the Advantage of Screening is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter VII: On the Advantage of Screening, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/7-10.html, id L29693.

Form and metre

Chapter VII: On the Advantage of Screening is 34 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%).

See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in anapaestic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOOPPQQ taiA · lieA · foodB · stoodB · closeC · aroseC · friendD · godsendD · placeE · disgraceE · sayF · wayF · blankG · sankG · gotH · sotH · sawI · withdrawI · choiceJ · noiseJ · heedK · creedK · criedL · fortifiedL · slunkM · drunkM · foeN · lowN · dayO · layO · nightP · plightP · defameQ · sameQ
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A certain one sat before David of Tai,11·/˘····/˘··
Saying, "So and so Sufi I saw tipsy lie ;12/˘···/˘··/˘·
His turban and shirt stained with vomited food,12·/˘···˘·/˘˘·
A number of dogs in a ring round him stood."11·/˘········
When the good-natured man heard this tale to a close,12···/˘·······
On his face angry frowns at the speaker arose.12···/˘···/˘˘/
He was wroth for a little and said, "Oh my friend!12·····/˘·····
To-day a kind comrade will prove a Godsend.11····/····/·
Go! and bring him away from that horrible place!12····˘/··/˘˘·
For by law it's forbid; to our sect, it's disgrace !12····˘/·/··˘/
On your back, man-like, bring him, for drunkards they say,12········/˘··
Do not hold in their fingers the reins of the way !"12·····/˘·····
These words made the hearer look wretchedly blank;11····/˘·/˘˘·
Like an ass in the mire, in reflection he sank.12·······˘/˘··
He could not evade the injunction he got ;11···˘/·˘/˘··
And he loathed to convey on his shoulders a sot.12····˘/··/˘··
He writhed for a time but no remedy saw,12··˘·····/˘˘·
Nor means from the order his head to withdraw.11····/˘···˘/
He got ready and carried him off, without choice,12··/˘·/˘·····
On his shoulders ; the city roughs making a noise.12··/˘·/˘·/˘··
One cursing them shouted, "These Dervishes heed !11·/˘·/˘·/˘˘·
How good are their piety, chasteness and creed!"11····/˘˘/˘··
"See the wine-drinking Sufis !" another one cried,12···/˘··˘/˘··
"Who have pawned their patched garments for wine, fortified!"12·····/˘··/˘·
People pointed their fingers as onwards they slunk,12/˘/˘·/˘·/˘··
Saying, "This one's top-heavy and that one half drunk !"12/˘···/˘·····
A sword on the neck, struck by tyrannous foe,11·······/˘˘·
Is more just than town jeers and the rage of the "low."12············
Misfortune he bore ; passed a troublesome day ;12˘/˘···˘·/˘˘·
Without choice, he conveyed him to where his home lay.12····˘/······
From reflection and shame, he was sleepless that night;12·˘/˘····/˘··
Next morning Tai smiling remarked, at his plight :12·/˘·/˘˘/˘···
"In the street, you should never a brother defame !12·····/˘·/˘˘/
For Time, in the city will treat you the same !"11····/˘·····

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