Chapter VI: Story of the Holy Man and the Sugar-cane

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 10 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

One had pieces of sugar-cane heaped on a plate,And went hither and thither, on buyers to wait.In the village he said to a God-fearing man :"Take a little and pay me the price when you can !"The sage of good origin gave, on his part,An answer that ought to be graved on the heart:"Perhaps you might fail to have patience with me ;But without sugar-cane I can very well be.The sugar in cane can no sweetness possess,When bitter exacting must after it press."

Words in this poem

went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
ought p. p.
Was or were under obligation to pay; owed. [Orig. the preterit of the verb to owe. OE. oughte, aughte, ahte, AS. ahte. sq. root110. See Owe.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter VI: Story of the Holy Man and the Sugar-cane is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter VI: Story of the Holy Man and the Sugar-cane, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/6-7.html, id L29674.

Form and metre

Chapter VI: Story of the Holy Man and the Sugar-cane is 10 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 94%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEE plateA · waitA · manB · canB · partC · heartC · meD · beD · possessE · pressE
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
One had pieces of sugar-cane heaped on a plate,12··/˘·/˘·····
And went hither and thither, on buyers to wait.12··/˘·/˘·/˘··
In the village he said to a God-fearing man :12··/˘·····/˘·
"Take a little and pay me the price when you can !"12··/˘········
The sage of good origin gave, on his part,11····/˘˘····
An answer that ought to be graved on the heart:12·/˘·····˘···
"Perhaps you might fail to have patience with me ;11˘/·····/˘··
But without sugar-cane I can very well be.12···/˘···/˘··
The sugar in cane can no sweetness possess,11·/˘····/˘˘/
When bitter exacting must after it press."11·/˘˘/˘·····

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