Chapter IV: Story of a Honey-seller

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 24 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

A charmer was selling his honey one day,So that hearts by his sweetness were burning away ;An idol with loins like the sugar-cane bound;The buyers more num'rous than flies stood around.If he, for example, could poison command,They'd have eaten it, honey-like, out of his handAn envier cast a long look at his trade,And envied the prosperous market he made.Next day he went round the wide world at a pace,With honey on's head and a vinegar face.He wandered, lamenting before and behind,But not even a fly to his honey inclined.At night, when he found that no money he earned,He sat in a corner with face much concerned—Visage soured, like a culprit's awaiting his doom ;Like prisoners' eyebrows on Eed-day, all gloom.A wife to her husband remarked with a smile :"To a sour visage honey seems bitter as bile.""Tis unlawful for you to partake of one's bread,Who wrinkles his brows, like a table-cloth spread.Act not harshly, oh master, regarding your own !For a spiteful man's fortune becomes overthrown.Gold and silver, I grant, are as nothing to you ;But you have not, like Sadi, a pleasant tongue, too.

Words in this poem

charmer n.
One who charms, or has power to charm; one who uses the power of enchantment; a magician. Deut. xviii. 11.
idol n.
An image or representation of anything. [OE. idole, F. idole, L. idolum, fr. Gr. Wit, and cf. Eidolon.]
envier n.
One who envies; one who desires inordinately what another possesses.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
visage n.
The face, countenance, or look of a person or an animal; -- chiefly applied to the human face. [F. visage, from L. visus a seeing, a look, fr. videre, visum, to see. See Vision.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter IV: Story of a Honey-seller is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter IV: Story of a Honey-seller, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/4-9.html, id L29630.

Form and metre

Chapter IV: Story of a Honey-seller is 24 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 95%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLL dayA · awayA · boundB · aroundB · commandC · handC · tradeD · madeD · paceE · faceE · behindF · inclinedF · earnedG · concernedG · doomH · gloomH · smileI · bileI · breadJ · spreadJ · ownK · overthrownK · youL · tooL
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A charmer was selling his honey one day,11·/˘·/˘·/˘··
So that hearts by his sweetness were burning away ;12·····/˘·/˘˘/
An idol with loins like the sugar-cane bound;11·/˘····/˘··
The buyers more num'rous than flies stood around.11·/˘········
If he, for example, could poison command,11···˘/˘·/˘˘/
They'd have eaten it, honey-like, out of his hand12··/˘·/˘·····
An envier cast a long look at his trade,11·/˘˘·······
And envied the prosperous market he made.11·/˘·/˘˘/˘··
Next day he went round the wide world at a pace,11···········
With honey on's head and a vinegar face.11·/˘····/˘˘·
He wandered, lamenting before and behind,11·/˘˘/˘·····
But not even a fly to his honey inclined.11··/····/˘˘/
At night, when he found that no money he earned,11·······/˘··
He sat in a corner with face much concerned—11····/˘···˘/
Visage soured, like a culprit's awaiting his doom ;12/˘/··/˘˘/˘··
Like prisoners' eyebrows on Eed-day, all gloom.11·/˘˘/······
A wife to her husband remarked with a smile :11····/˘˘/···
"To a sour visage honey seems bitter as bile."12··//˘/˘·/˘··
"Tis unlawful for you to partake of one's bread,12·˘/˘···˘/···
Who wrinkles his brows, like a table-cloth spread.11·/˘····/˘··
Act not harshly, oh master, regarding your own !12··/˘·/˘˘/˘··
For a spiteful man's fortune becomes overthrown.12··/˘·/˘˘/·˘/
Gold and silver, I grant, are as nothing to you ;12··/˘····/˘··
But you have not, like Sadi, a pleasant tongue, too.12········/˘··

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