Chapter IV: Story of Bahlul and the Grumbler

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 6 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

How well spoke Bahlul, ever happy in mood,When he passed by a grumbler who thought himself good :"If this claimant had known aught concerning the ' Friend,He would not have dared with the foe to contend.If regarding the presence of God he knew aught,He'd have reckoned the whole of the creatures as naught.

Words in this poem

spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
grumbler n.
One who grumbles.
claimant n.
One who claims; one who asserts a right or title; a claimer. [Cf. OF. clamant, p. pr. of clamer. Cf.Clamant.]
aught n.
Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter IV: Story of Bahlul and the Grumbler is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter IV: Story of Bahlul and the Grumbler, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/4-22.html, id L29643.

Form and metre

Chapter IV: Story of Bahlul and the Grumbler is 6 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 67% of the lines. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 --AABB mood · good · friendA · contendA · aughtB · naughtB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
How well spoke Bahlul, ever happy in mood,11·····/˘/˘··
When he passed by a grumbler who thought himself good :12·····/˘··˘/·
"If this claimant had known aught concerning the ' Friend,12··/˘···˘/˘··
He would not have dared with the foe to contend.11·········˘/
If regarding the presence of God he knew aught,12·˘/˘·/˘·····
He'd have reckoned the whole of the creatures as naught.12··/˘····/˘··

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