Chapter III: Conversation between the Candle and the Moth

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 30 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

I remembered one night lying sleepless in bed,That I heard what the moth to the fair candle said :"A lover am I, if I burn it is well!Why you should be weeping and burning, do tell.""Oh my poor humble lover !" the candle replied,"My friend, the sweet honey, away from me hied.When sweetness away from my body departs,A fire like Farhad's to my summit then starts."Thus she spoke and, each moment, a torrent of painAdown her pale cheeks trickled freely, like rain."Oh suitor ! with love you have nothing to do,Since nor patience nor power of standing have you.Oh crude one ! a flame makes you hasten away ;But I, till completely consumed, have to stay.If the burning of love makes your wings feel the heat,See how I am consumed, from the head to the feet !"But a very small portion had passed of the night,When a fairy-faced maiden extinguished her light.She was saying, while smoke from her head curled above,"Thus ends, oh my boy, the existence of love!"If the love-making science you wish to acquire,You're more happy extinguished than being on fire.Do not weep o'er the grave of the slain for the Friend !Be glad! for to him He will mercy extend.If a lover, don't wash the complaint from your head !Like Sadi, wash selfishness from you, instead !From his object, a faithful one will not refrain,Although on his head stones and arrows they rain !I have told you : don't enter this ocean at all !If you do; yield your life to the hurricane squall!

Words in this poem

sleepless a.
Having no sleep; wakeful.
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
adown adv.
From a higher to a lower situation; downward; down, to or on the ground. [OE. adun, adoun, adune. AS. of dune off the hill. See Down.]
suitor n.
One who sues, petitions, or entreats; a petitioner; an applicant.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter III: Conversation between the Candle and the Moth is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter III: Conversation between the Candle and the Moth, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/3-29.html, id L29621.

Form and metre

Chapter III: Conversation between the Candle and the Moth is 30 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 94%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLAAEEMM bedA · saidA · wellB · tellB · repliedC · hiedC · departsD · startsD · painE · rainE · doF · youF · awayG · stayG · heatH · feetH · nightI · lightI · aboveJ · loveJ · acquireK · fireK · friendL · extendL · headA · insteadA · refrainE · rainE · allM · squallM
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I remembered one night lying sleepless in bed,12·˘/˘··/˘/˘··
That I heard what the moth to the fair candle said :12·········/˘·
"A lover am I, if I burn it is well!11·/˘········
Why you should be weeping and burning, do tell."11····/˘·/˘··
"Oh my poor humble lover !" the candle replied,12···/˘/˘·/˘˘/
"My friend, the sweet honey, away from me hied.11····/˘˘/···
When sweetness away from my body departs,11·/˘˘/··/˘˘/
A fire like Farhad's to my summit then starts."12·/˘·····/˘··
Thus she spoke and, each moment, a torrent of pain12·····/˘·/˘··
Adown her pale cheeks trickled freely, like rain.12˘/···/˘˘/˘··
"Oh suitor ! with love you have nothing to do,11·/˘····/˘··
Since nor patience nor power of standing have you.12··/˘·/˘·/˘··
Oh crude one ! a flame makes you hasten away ;11·······/˘˘/
But I, till completely consumed, have to stay.12···˘/˘˘/˘···
If the burning of love makes your wings feel the heat,12··/˘········
See how I am consumed, from the head to the feet !"12····˘/······
But a very small portion had passed of the night,12··/˘·/˘·····
When a fairy-faced maiden extinguished her light.12··/˘·/˘˘/˘··
She was saying, while smoke from her head curled above,12··/˘········
"Thus ends, oh my boy, the existence of love!"11······˘/˘··
If the love-making science you wish to acquire,13···/˘/˘···˘/˘
You're more happy extinguished than being on fire.13··/˘˘/˘·/˘·/˘
Do not weep o'er the grave of the slain for the Friend !12············
Be glad! for to him He will mercy extend.11·······/˘˘/
If a lover, don't wash the complaint from your head !12··/˘···˘/···
Like Sadi, wash selfishness from you, instead !11····/˘˘··˘/
From his object, a faithful one will not refrain,12··˘/·/˘···˘/
Although on his head stones and arrows they rain !11·······/˘··
I have told you : don't enter this ocean at all !12·····/˘·/˘··
If you do; yield your life to the hurricane squall!12········/˘··

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