Chapter III: On the Ecstasy of Pious People, and its Truth and Folly

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 42 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

If a lover you are, keep yourself less in view ;If you're not; then, Futurity's pathway pursue!Lest love should reduce you to dust, do not fear !For should it destroy, you'll immortal appear.Green plants do not grow from the grains that are sound,Unless they are first covered up in the ground.With God such abundance of friendship you gain,That release from the hands of yourself you obtain.You've no road in yourself, while to self you are wed ;The enraptured alone are informed on this head.Not the minstrel alone, but the horse's hoof's soundIs music, if rapture within you is found.To the lover distracted a fly comes not nigh,For he beats at his head with his hands like a fly.Bass and treble are one to a crazed lover's ear ;At a bird's cheerful singing, laments the Fakir!The minstrel himself does not stop in his strain ;But he cannot, at all times, a hearing obtain.When rapturous men are adorers of wine,At a water-wheel's sound they to rapture incline.They circle and dance, like a watering wheel,And like water-wheels, weep on themselves a great deal.In submission, their heads 'neath their collars they bear ;When endurance remains not, their collars they tear.What the song is, oh brother ! to you I'll explain,If I know who the person is hearing the strain !If his flight be from spirituality's dome,To the height of his soaring no angel can roam.And if he be mirthful and playful and vain,His follies become more confirmed in his brain.What adorer of lust in pure songs will rejoice?Those asleep, not the drunk, rise to hear a fine voice!By the breeze of the morning expands the sweet rose—Not firewood, which only an axe can unclose.The Earth's full of melody, drunk'ness and cries;And yet, in a glass, what see men without eyes?Find not fault with a Dervish, bewildered and drunk ;He with hands and feet struggles because he has sunk.At the Arab's ha-da-ing the camel, you see,Goes dancing along in the greatest of glee.Since the rapture of mirth in a camel is shown,If 'tis not in a man, as an ass he is known.

Words in this poem

pathway n.
A footpath; a beaten track; any path or course. Also used figuratively.
informed a.
Unformed or ill-formed; deformed; shapeless.
fakir n.
An Oriental religious ascetic or begging monk. [Ar. faqir poor.]
adorer n.
One who adores; a worshiper; one who admires or loves greatly; an ardent admirer.
lust v. i.
To list; to like. [AS. lystan. See Lust, n., and cf. List to choose.]
dervish n.
A Turkish or Persian monk, especially one who professes extreme poverty and leads an austere life. [Per. derw, fr. OPer. derew to beg, ask alms: cf. F. derviche.]
glee n.
Music; minstrelsy; entertainment.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter III: On the Ecstasy of Pious People, and its Truth and Folly is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter III: On the Ecstasy of Pious People, and its Truth and Folly, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/3-26.html, id L29618.

Form and metre

Chapter III: On the Ecstasy of Pious People, and its Truth and Folly is 42 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 95%).

See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in anapaestic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOOPPQQRRSSTTUU viewA · pursueA · fearB · appearB · soundC · groundC · gainD · obtainD · wedE · headE · soundF · foundF · nighG · flyG · earH · fakirH · strainI · obtainI · wineJ · inclineJ · wheelK · dealK · bearL · tearL · explainM · strainM · domeN · roamN · vainO · brainO · rejoiceP · voiceP · roseQ · uncloseQ · criesR · eyesR · drunkS · sunkS · seeT · gleeT · shownU · knownU
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
If a lover you are, keep yourself less in view ;12··/˘···˘/···
If you're not; then, Futurity's pathway pursue!12········/·˘/
Lest love should reduce you to dust, do not fear !11···˘/······
For should it destroy, you'll immortal appear.11···˘/·˘/˘˘/
Green plants do not grow from the grains that are sound,11···········
Unless they are first covered up in the ground.12·····/˘˘····
With God such abundance of friendship you gain,11···˘/˘·/˘··
That release from the hands of yourself you obtain.12·˘/····˘/·˘/
You've no road in yourself, while to self you are wed ;12····˘/······
The enraptured alone are informed on this head.12·˘/˘˘/·˘/···
Not the minstrel alone, but the horse's hoof's sound12··/˘˘/··/˘··
Is music, if rapture within you is found.11·/˘·/˘·····
To the lover distracted a fly comes not nigh,12··/˘˘/˘·····
For he beats at his head with his hands like a fly.12············
Bass and treble are one to a crazed lover's ear ;12··/˘·····/˘·
At a bird's cheerful singing, laments the Fakir!12···/˘/˘˘/·/˘
The minstrel himself does not stop in his strain ;11·/˘˘/······
But he cannot, at all times, a hearing obtain.12··/˘····/˘˘/
When rapturous men are adorers of wine,11·/˘˘·······
At a water-wheel's sound they to rapture incline.12··/˘····/˘/˘
They circle and dance, like a watering wheel,11·/˘····/˘˘·
And like water-wheels, weep on themselves a great deal.12··/˘···˘/···
In submission, their heads 'neath their collars they bear ;12·˘/˘····/˘··
When endurance remains not, their collars they tear.12·/˘˘˘/··/˘··
What the song is, oh brother ! to you I'll explain,12·····/˘···˘/
If I know who the person is hearing the strain !12·····/˘·/˘··
If his flight be from spirituality's dome,12······˘˘/˘˘·
To the height of his soaring no angel can roam.12·····/˘·/˘··
And if he be mirthful and playful and vain,11····/˘·/˘··
His follies become more confirmed in his brain.12·/˘˘/·˘/˘···
What adorer of lust in pure songs will rejoice?12·˘/˘······˘/
Those asleep, not the drunk, rise to hear a fine voice!12·˘/·········
By the breeze of the morning expands the sweet rose—12·····/˘˘/···
Not firewood, which only an axe can unclose.12·/˘··/˘···˘/
The Earth's full of melody, drunk'ness and cries;11····/˘˘····
And yet, in a glass, what see men without eyes?11···········
Find not fault with a Dervish, bewildered and drunk ;12·····/˘˘/˘··
He with hands and feet struggles because he has sunk.12·····/˘·····
At the Arab's ha-da-ing the camel, you see,12··/˘····/˘··
Goes dancing along in the greatest of glee.11·/˘˘/··/˘··
Since the rapture of mirth in a camel is shown,12··/˘····/˘··
If 'tis not in a man, as an ass he is known.12············

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