Chapter III: Story of the Wise Man and Atabak-Sad

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 16 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

A person gave Sad, son of Zangi, great praise.(On his tomb be abundance of mercy always.)He gave direms, a robe, and respect to him showed,And becoming his merit position bestowed.When " God is enough," in gold lines, met his view,He raved, and the robe from his bosom he threw.From the heat, such a flame in his conscience began,Up he jumped and away to the wilderness ran.A desert companion said, " Kindly relateWhat sight you have seen that has altered your state!The ground, to begin with, three times you did kiss;It did not become you to change after this!"He smiled, saying, " Firstly, from hope and from dread,Through my body a willow-like shivering spread;Thereafter, ' the Glory of God will suffice,Removed ev'ry person and thing from my eyes."

Words in this poem

conscience n.
Knowledge of one's own thoughts or actions; consciousness. [F. conscience, fr. L. conscientia, fr. consciens, p.pr. of conscire to know, to be conscious; con- + scire to know. See Science.]
firstly adv.
In the first place; before anything else; -- sometimes improperly used for first.
thereafter adv.
After that; afterward. [AS. th\'d6ræfter after that. See There, and After.]
suffice v. i.
To be enough, or sufficient; to meet the need (of anything); to be equal to the end proposed; to be adequate. [OE. suffisen, OF. soufire, F. suffire (cf. suffisant, p.pr.), L. sufficere to put under, to substitute, to avail for, to suffice; sub under + facere to make. Se]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter III: Story of the Wise Man and Atabak-Sad is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter III: Story of the Wise Man and Atabak-Sad, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/3-23.html, id L29615.

Form and metre

Chapter III: Story of the Wise Man and Atabak-Sad is 16 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 96%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH praiseA · alwaysA · showedB · bestowedB · viewC · threwC · beganD · ranD · relateE · stateE · kissF · thisF · dreadG · spreadG · sufficeH · eyesH
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A person gave Sad, son of Zangi, great praise.11·/˘········
(On his tomb be abundance of mercy always.)12····˘/˘·/˘/˘
He gave direms, a robe, and respect to him showed,12·······˘/···
And becoming his merit position bestowed.12·˘/˘·/˘˘/˘˘/
When " God is enough," in gold lines, met his view,11···˘/······
He raved, and the robe from his bosom he threw.11·······/˘··
From the heat, such a flame in his conscience began,12········/˘˘/
Up he jumped and away to the wilderness ran.11····˘/··/˘·
A desert companion said, " Kindly relate11·˘/˘/˘·/˘˘/
What sight you have seen that has altered your state!11·······/˘··
The ground, to begin with, three times you did kiss;11···˘/······
It did not become you to change after this!"11···˘/······
He smiled, saying, " Firstly, from hope and from dread,11··/˘/˘·····
Through my body a willow-like shivering spread;11··/˘·/··/˘·
Thereafter, ' the Glory of God will suffice,11˘/˘·/˘···˘/
Removed ev'ry person and thing from my eyes."11˘/··/˘·····

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