Chapter III: On the Frailty of Creatures and the Grandeur of God

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 20 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

The pathway to wisdom is twist upon twist ;For the holy, the Maker alone can exist.You can tell this to people who truths recognize ;But people of theory will criticize;Saying, "What is the sky and the earth, do you say?Who are men? what are game and the wild beasts of prey?"Oh intelligent man ! Your inquiry is well;If the answer is pleasing to you, I will tell.The desert and ocean, the hills and the sky;The fairies, mankind, fiends, and angels on high ;All things that exist, for this reason are less,That only through Him they existence possess.The sea in a storm is sublime in your eye;And lofty's the vault.of the rotating sky.But when will mere surface observers obtainA glimpse of where spiritual persons remain ?For if it's the sun, not a speck they descry;If the whole seven seas, not a drop can they spy.When the Sultan of Glory His flag has unfurl'd,Into Nullity's collar collapses the world!

Words in this poem

pathway n.
A footpath; a beaten track; any path or course. Also used figuratively.
descry
, Discovery or view, as of an army seen at a distance.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter III: On the Frailty of Creatures and the Grandeur of God is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter III: On the Frailty of Creatures and the Grandeur of God, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/3-20.html, id L29612.

Form and metre

Chapter III: On the Frailty of Creatures and the Grandeur of God is 20 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%).

See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in anapaestic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFEEGGEEHH twistA · existA · recognizeB · criticizeB · sayC · preyC · wellD · tellD · skyE · highE · lessF · possessF · eyeE · skyE · obtainG · remainG · descryE · spyE · unfurl'dH · worldH
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The pathway to wisdom is twist upon twist ;11·/··/˘·····
For the holy, the Maker alone can exist.12··/˘·/˘˘/·˘/
You can tell this to people who truths recognize ;12·····/˘··/˘·
But people of theory will criticize;10·/˘·/˘·/˘·
Saying, "What is the sky and the earth, do you say?12/˘··········
Who are men? what are game and the wild beasts of prey?"12············
Oh intelligent man ! Your inquiry is well;12·˘/˘˘··˘/˘··
If the answer is pleasing to you, I will tell.12··/˘·/˘·····
The desert and ocean, the hills and the sky;11·˘/·/˘·····
The fairies, mankind, fiends, and angels on high ;11·/˘//··/˘··
All things that exist, for this reason are less,11···˘/··/˘··
That only through Him they existence possess.11·/˘···˘/˘˘/
The sea in a storm is sublime in your eye;11······˘/···
And lofty's the vault.of the rotating sky.11·/˘····/·˘·
But when will mere surface observers obtain11····/˘˘/˘˘/
A glimpse of where spiritual persons remain ?12····/˘˘˘/˘˘/
For if it's the sun, not a speck they descry;11·········˘/
If the whole seven seas, not a drop can they spy.12···/˘·······
When the Sultan of Glory His flag has unfurl'd,12··/˘·/˘···˘/
Into Nullity's collar collapses the world!12·····/˘˘/˘··

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