Chapter III: Story of the Patient and the Doctor

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 12 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

A doctor, sweet-faced, had in Merv his abode;Within the heart's garden, he cypress-like showed.For the grief of hearts wounded by him, not a care;Of the hopes of those ailing through him, unaware.A sufferer tells a good tale of his case:—"With the doctor my head was much pleased, for a space ;To recover my health I had little desire,For the Doctor would, then, from attending, retire."Many pow'rful in wisdom and valiant in hand,By the passion of love are brought under command.When Passion gives Wisdom a box on the ear,Understanding can never again its head rear.

Words in this poem

abode n.
Act of waiting; delay. [OE. abad, abood, fr. abiden to abide. See Abide. For the change of vowel, cf. abode, imp. of abide.]
unaware a.
Not aware; not noticing; giving no heed; thoughtless; inattentive.
sufferer n.
One who suffers; one who endures or undergoes suffering; one who sustains inconvenience or loss; as, sufferers by poverty or sickness; men are sufferers by fire or by losses at sea.
valiant a.
Vigorous in body; strong; powerful; as, a valiant fencer. [OE. valiant, F. vaillant, OF. vaillant, valant, originally p. pr. of OF. & F. valoir to be worth, L. valere to be strong. See Wield, and cf. Avail, Convalesce, ]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter III: Story of the Patient and the Doctor is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter III: Story of the Patient and the Doctor, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/3-13.html, id L29605.

Form and metre

Chapter III: Story of the Patient and the Doctor is 12 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 96%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFF abodeA · showedA · careB · unawareB · caseC · spaceC · desireD · retireD · handE · commandE · earF · rearF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A doctor, sweet-faced, had in Merv his abode;12·/˘··˘····˘/
Within the heart's garden, he cypress-like showed.12····/˘·/˘··˘
For the grief of hearts wounded by him, not a care;12·····/˘·····
Of the hopes of those ailing through him, unaware.12·····/˘···˘/
A sufferer tells a good tale of his case:—11·/˘˘·······
"With the doctor my head was much pleased, for a space ;12··/˘········
To recover my health I had little desire,13·˘/˘····/˘˘/˘
For the Doctor would, then, from attending, retire."12··/˘···˘/˘˘/
Many pow'rful in wisdom and valiant in hand,12/˘···/˘·/˘··
By the passion of love are brought under command.12··/˘······˘/
When Passion gives Wisdom a box on the ear,11·/˘·/˘·····
Understanding can never again its head rear.12·˘/˘·/˘˘/···

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