Chapter II: Remarks on Generosity

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 12 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

Show kindness, oh son ! since all human in name,By kindness can ev'ry wild animal tame!Round your enemy's neck, fasten favours profuse—With the sabre, he cannot divide such a noose.When a foe's ees abundance and favour and grace,Not again will his wickedness dare to show face.Do not sin, though a comrade should wickedness show!Good fruit from a seed that is bad will not grow.When you deal with a friend in a miserly way,He desires not to witness you prosp'rous and gay.If a ruler, to foes, a kind manner extends,In a very short time, all the foes become friends.

Words in this poem

sabre n.
A sword with a broad and heavy blade, thick at the back, and usually more or less curved like a scimiter; a cavalry sword. Saber fish, or Sabre fish (Zoöl.), the cutlass fish.
favour n.
Kind regard; propitious aspect; countenance; friendly disposition; kindness; good will. [Written also favour.]
miserly a.
Like a miser; very covetous; sordid; niggardly. [From Miser.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter II: Remarks on Generosity is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter II: Remarks on Generosity, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/2-17.html, id L29574.

Form and metre

Chapter II: Remarks on Generosity is 12 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFF nameA · tameA · profuseB · nooseB · graceC · faceC · showD · growD · wayE · gayE · extendsF · friendsF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Show kindness, oh son ! since all human in name,11·/˘····/˘··
By kindness can ev'ry wild animal tame!11·/˘····/˘˘·
Round your enemy's neck, fasten favours profuse—12··/˘˘·/˘/˘˘/
With the sabre, he cannot divide such a noose.12··/˘·˘/˘/···
When a foe's ees abundance and favour and grace,12····˘/˘·/˘··
Not again will his wickedness dare to show face.12·˘/··/˘˘····
Do not sin, though a comrade should wickedness show!12·····/··/˘˘·
Good fruit from a seed that is bad will not grow.11···········
When you deal with a friend in a miserly way,12········/˘˘·
He desires not to witness you prosp'rous and gay.12·˘/··/˘·····
If a ruler, to foes, a kind manner extends,12··/˘····/˘˘/
In a very short time, all the foes become friends.12··/˘·····˘/·

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