Chapter I: Story of the Two Royal Brothers

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 68 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

I have heard that in one of the states of the West,Two brothers once lived who one father possessed,—Army leading and proud and of elephant size,Good-looking and learned, clever swordsmen likewise.The father found both of them terrible boys;Fond of galloping horses and war's angry noise.Forthwith he divided the kingdom in twain—Gave a half to each son, over which he might reign—Lest one 'gainst the other should rise up to fight,And seize, to do battle, the sabre of spite.The father then summed up his years in his mind;To the Giver of Life his sweet life he resigned.The Fates, then, his tent-ropes of hope cut away,And death bound securely the hands of his sway.Two kings were appointed to rule in that State ;For the treasure and number of soldiers were great.Each, according to what appeared best, in his view,Made arrangements his own special course to pursue.One justice, to win a good name for himself;The other, oppression, to treasure up pelf.One made a good nature the guide of his reign;Gave gold and took care of the indigent swain ;Built hostels, gave bread, and to soldiers was kind,And for beggars, at night, a night refuge designed.To perfect his army his treasure he spent—Like holiday folks who on pleasure are bent.To the sky rose, like thunder, the shouts of applause;Like in Bu-Bakar-Sad's time, the town of Shiraz.A wise prince was he, with a nature serene ;May the branch of his hope ever fruitful be seen !Hear the story about the magnanimous lad :His footsteps were happy, his nature was glad.He promoted the comfort of high and of low;Praised the Maker at dawn and at evening's red glow.All over the country, Karun, fearless, went ;For the monarch was just and the poor were content.Not a harm at a heart, all the time he survived,From a thorn, not to mention a rose-leaf, arrived.By the aid of the Lord, hostile chiefs lost the day,And the leaders submitted themselves to his sway.The other desired to enrich throne and crown,And by raising the taxes ground villagers down.For the riches of merchants he avarice showed ;On the life of the helpless calamity strewed.I mean not to say he wished ill to the poor;But he treated himself like a foe, to be sure.He, hoping for increase, nor gave nor ate food.The sage is aware that his plans were not good ;For before he could gather that gold by foul play,His army, from weakness, had dwindled away.At the ears of the merchants the rumour arrives,That abuse in the land of this worthless one thrives.From that country all buying and selling they turned ;The fields became barren, the husbandmen burned.From his friendship when Fortune averted her face,His foes, of necessity, worked his disgrace.The warring of Heav'n his uprootal soon planned,And the hoof of the enemy's horse ploughed his land.In whom seeks he faith, since the treaty he tore?From whom asks he tax, since the peasant's no more ?What good can that sinful one covet to share,When, after him, curses resound through the air?Since his fortune was bad, from the day he was born,The advice of the worthy he treated with scorn.And what said the good to that "virtuous" man—"The fruit you can eat ! for no wrong-doer can."His thoughts were depraved and his plans came to nought,For in justice dwelt that, which in harshness he sought.

Words in this poem 17
galloping a.
Going at a gallop; progressing rapidly; as, a galloping horse.
angry a.
Troublesome; vexatious; rigorous. [See Anger.]
forthwith adv.
Immediately; without delay; directly.
twain a.
Two;- nearly obsolete in common discourse, but used in poetry and burlesque. [OE. twein, tweien, tweyne, AS. twegen, masc. See Two.]
sabre n.
A sword with a broad and heavy blade, thick at the back, and usually more or less curved like a scimiter; a cavalry sword. Saber fish, or Sabre fish (Zoöl.), the cutlass fish.
giver n.
One who gives; a donor; a bestower; a grantor; one who imparts or distributes.
resigned a.
Submissive; yielding; not disposed to resist or murmur.
pelf n.
Money; riches; lucre; gain; -- generally conveying the idea of something ill-gotten or worthless. It has no plural. [OE. pelfir booty, OF. pelfre, akin to pelfrer to plunder, and perh. to E. pillage. Cf. Pilfer.]
indigent a.
Wanting; void; free; destitute; -- used with of. [L. indigent, L. indigens, p. p. of indigere to stand in need of, fr. OL. indu (fr. in- in) + L. egere to be needy, to need.]
folks n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]
shiraz n.
A kind of Persian wine; -- so called from the place whence it is brought.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
avarice n.
An excessive or inordinate desire of gain; greediness after wealth; covetousness; cupidity. [F. avaritia, fr. avarus avaricious, prob. fr. av to covert, fr. a root av to satiate one's self: cf. Gr. av to satiate one's self, rejoice, protect.]
rumour n.
A flying or popular report; the common talk; hence, public fame; notoriety. [F. rumeur, L. rumor; cf. rumificare, rumitare to rumor, Skr. ru to cry.]
averted a.
Turned away, esp. as an expression of feeling; also, offended; unpropitious.
tore n.
The dead grass that remains on mowing land in winter and spring. Mortimer. [Probably from the root of tear; cf. W. tór a break, cut, tóri to break, cut.]
virtuous a.
Possessing or exhibiting virtue. Specifically: -- (a) Exhibiting manly courage and strength; valorous; valiant; brave. [OE. vertuous, OF. vertuos, vertuous, F. vertueux, fr. L. Virtuous. See Virtue, and cf. Virtuoso.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter I: Story of the Two Royal Brothers is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Chapter I: Story of the Two Royal Brothers is 68 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 91% of the lines. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMM--NNOOPPQQRRSSTT-UVVU-WWXXYYZZaabbccddeeff westA · possessedA · sizeB · likewiseB · boysC · noiseC · twainD · reignD · fightE · spiteE · mindF · resignedF · awayG · swayG · stateH · greatH · viewI · pursueI · himselfJ · pelfJ · reignK · swainK · kindL · designedL · spentM · bentM · applause · shiraz · sereneN · seenN · ladO · gladO · lowP · glowP · wentQ · contentQ · survivedR · arrivedR · dayS · swayS · crownT · downT · showed · strewedU · poorV · sureV · foodU · good · playW · awayW · arrivesX · thrivesX · turnedY · burnedY · faceZ · disgraceZ · planneda · landa · toreb · moreb · sharec · airc · bornd · scornd · mane · cane · noughtf · soughtf
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I have heard that in one of the states of the West,12············
Two brothers once lived who one father possessed,—12·/˘··˘··/˘˘/
Army leading and proud and of elephant size,12/˘/˘····/˘˘·
Good-looking and learned, clever swordsmen likewise.12·/˘··˘/˘··/·
The father found both of them terrible boys;11·/˘····/˘˘·
Fond of galloping horses and war's angry noise.12··/˘˘/˘··/˘·
Forthwith he divided the kingdom in twain—11//·˘/˘·/˘··
Gave a half to each son, over which he might reign—12············
Lest one 'gainst the other should rise up to fight,11····/˘·····
And seize, to do battle, the sabre of spite.11····/˘·/˘··
The father then summed up his years in his mind;12·/˘··˘······
To the Giver of Life his sweet life he resigned.12··/˘······˘/
The Fates, then, his tent-ropes of hope cut away,11·········˘/
And death bound securely the hands of his sway.11···˘/˘·····
Two kings were appointed to rule in that State ;11···˘/˘·····
For the treasure and number of soldiers were great.12··/˘·/˘·/˘··
Each, according to what appeared best, in his view,12·˘/˘··˘/····
Made arrangements his own special course to pursue.12·˘/˘··/˘··˘/
One justice, to win a good name for himself;11·/˘······˘/
The other, oppression, to treasure up pelf.11·/˘˘/˘·/˘··
One made a good nature the guide of his reign;11····/˘·····
Gave gold and took care of the indigent swain ;11·······/˘˘·
Built hostels, gave bread, and to soldiers was kind,11·/˘····/˘··
And for beggars, at night, a night refuge designed.12··/˘····/˘˘/
To perfect his army his treasure he spent—11·˘/·/˘·/˘··
Like holiday folks who on pleasure are bent.11·/˘····/˘··
To the sky rose, like thunder, the shouts of applause;12·····/˘···˘/
Like in Bu-Bakar-Sad's time, the town of Shiraz.12··········˘/
A wise prince was he, with a nature serene ;11·······/˘˘/
May the branch of his hope ever fruitful be seen !12······/˘/˘··
Hear the story about the magnanimous lad :12··/˘···˘/˘˘·
His footsteps were happy, his nature was glad.11·/··/˘·/˘··
He promoted the comfort of high and of low;12·˘/˘·/˘·····
Praised the Maker at dawn and at evening's red glow.12··/˘····/˘··
All over the country, Karun, fearless, went ;11····/˘˘//˘·
For the monarch was just and the poor were content.12··/·······/˘
Not a harm at a heart, all the time he survived,12··········˘/
From a thorn, not to mention a rose-leaf, arrived.12·····/˘···˘/
By the aid of the Lord, hostile chiefs lost the day,12······/˘····
And the leaders submitted themselves to his sway.12··/˘˘/˘˘/···
The other desired to enrich throne and crown,12·/˘˘/˘·˘/···
And by raising the taxes ground villagers down.12··/˘·/˘·/˘˘·
For the riches of merchants he avarice showed ;12··/˘·/˘·/˘˘·
On the life of the helpless calamity strewed.12·····/˘˘/˘˘·
I mean not to say he wished ill to the poor;12·······˘····
But he treated himself like a foe, to be sure.12··/˘˘/······
He, hoping for increase, nor gave nor ate food.11·/˘·˘/·····
The sage is aware that his plans were not good ;11···˘/······
For before he could gather that gold by foul play,12·····/˘·····
His army, from weakness, had dwindled away.12·/˘·/˘·/˘˘˘/
At the ears of the merchants the rumour arrives,12·····/˘··˘˘/
That abuse in the land of this worthless one thrives.12·˘/·····/˘··
From that country all buying and selling they turned ;12··/˘·/˘·/˘··
The fields became barren, the husbandmen burned.12··˘//˘·····˘
From his friendship when Fortune averted her face,12··/˘·/˘˘/˘··
His foes, of necessity, worked his disgrace.12···˘/˘˘·˘·˘/
The warring of Heav'n his uprootal soon planned,12·/˘········˘
And the hoof of the enemy's horse ploughed his land.12·····/˘˘····
In whom seeks he faith, since the treaty he tore?11·······/˘··
From whom asks he tax, since the peasant's no more ?11·······/˘··
What good can that sinful one covet to share,11····/˘·/˘··
When, after him, curses resound through the air?11····/˘·/···
Since his fortune was bad, from the day he was born,12··/˘········
The advice of the worthy he treated with scorn.12·˘/··/˘·/˘··
And what said the good to that "virtuous" man—11·······/˘˘·
"The fruit you can eat ! for no wrong-doer can."10··········
His thoughts were depraved and his plans came to nought,12···˘/·······
For in justice dwelt that, which in harshness he sought.12··/˘····/˘··

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