Chapter I: Story about Jamshed

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 10 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

I have heard that Jamshed, whose good nature was known,On the head of a fountain inscribed with a stone:—"At this fountain great numbers, like us, have drawn breath,Who, within an eye's twinkle, have tasted of death.I have conquered a world by my manhood and strength ;And yet, to the grave cannot bear it at length."When over a foe you can pow'r exercise,Do not gall him! the sorrow for him should suffice.A living foe near you, whose mind is a wreck,Is better by far, than his blood on your neck.

Words in this poem

twinkle v. i.
To open and shut the eye rapidly; to blink; to wink. [OE. twinklen, AS. twinclian; akin to OE. twinken to blink, wink, G. zwinken, zwinkern, and perhaps to E. twitch.]
suffice v. i.
To be enough, or sufficient; to meet the need (of anything); to be equal to the end proposed; to be adequate. [OE. suffisen, OF. soufire, F. suffire (cf. suffisant, p.pr.), L. sufficere to put under, to substitute, to avail for, to suffice; sub under + facere to make. Se]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter I: Story about Jamshed is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter I: Story about Jamshed, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/1-11.html, id L29516.

Form and metre

Chapter I: Story about Jamshed is 10 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEE knownA · stoneA · breathB · deathB · strengthC · lengthC · exerciseD · sufficeD · wreckE · neckE
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I have heard that Jamshed, whose good nature was known,11·······/˘··
On the head of a fountain inscribed with a stone:—12·····/˘˘/···
"At this fountain great numbers, like us, have drawn breath,12··/˘·/˘·····
Who, within an eye's twinkle, have tasted of death.12·····/˘·/˘··
I have conquered a world by my manhood and strength ;12··/˘····/···
And yet, to the grave cannot bear it at length."11·····/˘····
When over a foe you can pow'r exercise,11········/˘·
Do not gall him! the sorrow for him should suffice.12·····/˘···˘/
A living foe near you, whose mind is a wreck,11·/˘········
Is better by far, than his blood on your neck.11·/˘········

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