Messenger

Isaac Rosenberg (1890–1918) · 1922

iambic pentameter · unrhymed · 13 lines · from Poems

The royal paunch of Pharaoh dangled worriedly,Not knowing where the wrong: viands once giant-likeCame to him thin and thinner—what rats gnawed?Horror, the swarm of slaves! The satraps sworeTheir wives’ bones hurt them when they lay abed,That before were soft and plump: the people howledThey’d boil the slaves three days to get their fat,Ending the famine. A haggard council heldDecrees the two hind molars, those two staunchestBusy labourers in the belly’s service, to be drawnFrom out each slave’s greased mouth, which soonFrom incapacity will lose the habitOf eating.

Words in this poem

paunch n.
The belly and its contents; the abdomen; also, the first stomach, or rumen, of ruminants. See Rumen. [OF. panch, pance, F. panse, L. pantex, panticis.]
pharaoh n.
A title by which the sovereigns of ancient Egypt were designated. [Heb. paroh; of Egyptian origin: cf. L. pharao, Gr. Faro.]
abed adv.
In bed, or on the bed. [Pref. a- in, on + bed.]
famine n.
General scarcity of food; dearth; a want of provisions; destitution. [F. famine, fr. L. fames hunger; cf. Gr. hani loss, lack, ha to leave.]
haggard a.
Wild or intractable; disposed to break away from duty; untamed; as, a haggard or refractory hawk. Shak [F. hagard; of German origin, and prop. meaning, of the hegde or woods, wild, untamed. See Hedge, 1st Haw, and -ard.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Messenger is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems by Isaac Rosenberg, Project Gutenberg ebook #66889; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Isaac Rosenberg, Messenger, in Poems (1922), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #66889, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/rosenberg-poems/messenger.html, id L02482.

Form and metre

Messenger is 13 lines in a single verse paragraph. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.9 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 62% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The royal paunch of Pharaoh dangled worriedly,12·/˘··/˘/˘···
Not knowing where the wrong: viands once giant-like10·/·····/˘·
Came to him thin and thinner—what rats gnawed?10·····/˘···
Horror, the swarm of slaves! The satraps swore10/˘········
Their wives’ bones hurt them when they lay abed,10········˘/
That before were soft and plump: the people howled11········/˘·
They’d boil the slaves three days to get their fat,10··········
Ending the famine. A haggard council held11/˘·/˘·/˘/˘·
Decrees the two hind molars, those two staunchest11˘/·······/˘
Busy labourers in the belly’s service, to be drawn14/˘·····/˘/˘···
From out each slave’s greased mouth, which soon8········
From incapacity will lose the habit9·˘/˘···/˘
Of eating.3·/˘

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