Under-Song

Lola Ridge (1873–1941) · 1918

iambic trimeter · 32 lines · from The Ghetto, and Other Poems

There is music in the strongDeep-throated bush,Whisperings of songHeard in the leaves' hush--Ballads of the treesIn tongues unknown--A reminiscent toneOn minor keys...

Boughs swaying to and froThough no winds pass...Faint odors in the grassWhere no flowers grow,And flutterings of wingsAnd faint first notes,Once babbled on the boughsOf faded springs.

Is it music from the gravesOf all things fairTrembling on the stavesOf spacious air--Fluted by the windsSongs with no words--Sonatas from the throatsOf master birds?

One peering through the huskOf darkness thrownMay hear it in the dusk--That ancient tone,Silvery as the lightOf long dead starsYet falling through the nightIn trembling bars.

Words in this poem

reminiscent a.
Recalling to mind, or capable of recalling to mind; having remembrance; reminding one of something. [L. reminiscens, -entis, p. pr. of reminisci to recall to mind, to recollect; pref.re- re + a word akin to mens mind, memini I remember. See Mind.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Under-Song is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Ghetto, and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #4332; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Lola Ridge, Under-Song, in The Ghetto, and Other Poems (1918), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #4332, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/ridge-ghetto/under-song.html, id L20913.

Form and metre

Under-Song is 32 lines in 4 stanzas of 8 lines each. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

See other poems in iambic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A-A-BCCB strongA · bush · songA · hush · treesB · unknownC · toneC · keysB
  2. 2 ABBAC--C froA · passB · grassB · growA · wingsC · notes · boughs · springsC
  3. 3 ABAB-C-C gravesA · fairB · stavesA · airB · winds · wordsC · throats · birdsC
  4. 4 ABABCDCD huskA · thrownB · duskA · toneB · lightC · starsD · nightC · barsD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
There is music in the strong7··/˘···
Deep-throated bush,4·/˘·
Whisperings of song5/˘˘··
Heard in the leaves' hush--5·····
Ballads of the trees5/˘···
In tongues unknown--4··˘/
A reminiscent tone6··˘/˘·
On minor keys...4·/˘·
Boughs swaying to and fro6·/˘···
Though no winds pass...4····
Faint odors in the grass6·/˘···
Where no flowers grow,5··/˘·
And flutterings of wings6·/˘˘··
And faint first notes,4····
Once babbled on the boughs6·/˘···
Of faded springs.4·/˘·
Is it music from the graves7··/˘···
Of all things fair4····
Trembling on the staves6/˘˘···
Of spacious air--4·/˘·
Fluted by the winds5/˘···
Songs with no words--4····
Sonatas from the throats6·/˘···
Of master birds?4·/˘·
One peering through the husk6·/˘···
Of darkness thrown4·/˘·
May hear it in the dusk--6······
That ancient tone,4·/˘·
Silvery as the light6/˘˘···
Of long dead stars4····
Yet falling through the night6·/˘···
In trembling bars.5·/˘˘·

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