Poem II
End fact. Try fiction, Let us say we seeEn Bertrans, a tower-room at Hautefort,Sunset, the ribbon-like road lies, in red cross-light,South toward Montaignac, and he bends at a tableScribbling, swearing between his teeth, by his left handLie little strips of parchment covered over,Scratched and erased with al and ochaisos.Testing his list of rhymes, a lean man? Bilious?With a red straggling beard?And the green cat’s-eye lifts toward Montaignac.
Or take his “magnet” singer setting out,Dodging his way past Aubeterre, singing at Chalais
In the vaulted hall,Or, by a lichened tree at RochechouartAimlessly watching a hawk above the valleys,Waiting his turn in the mid-summer evening,Thinking of Aelis, whom he loved heart and soul ...To find her half alone, Montfort away,And a brown, placid, hated woman visiting her,Spoiling his visit, with a year before the next one.Little enough?Or carry him forward. “Go through all the courts,My Magnet,” Bertrand had said.
We came to VentadourIn the mid love court, he sings out the canzon,No one hears save Arrimon Luc D’Esparo--No one hears aught save the gracious sound of compliments.Sir Arrimon counts on his fingers, Montfort,Rochechouart, Chalais, the rest, the tactic,Malemort, guesses beneath, sends word to Cœur de Lion:
The compact, de Born smoked out, trees felledAbout his castle, cattle driven out!Or no one sees it, and En Bertrans prospered?
And ten years after, or twenty, as you will,Arnaut and Richard lodge beneath Chalus:The dull round towers encroaching on the field,The tents tight drawn, horses at tetherFurther and out of reach, the purple night,The crackling of small fires, the bannerets,The lazy leopards on the largest banner,Stray gleams on hanging mail, an armourer’s torch-flareMelting on steel.
And in the quietest spaceThey probe old scandals, say de Born is dead;And we’ve the gossip (skipped six hundred years).Richard shall die to-morrow--leave him thereTalking of trobar clus with Daniel.And the “best craftsman” sings out his friend’s song,Envies its vigour ... and deplores the technique,Dispraises his own skill?--That’s as you will.And they discuss the dead man,Plantagenet puts the riddle: “Did he love her?”And Arnaut parries: “Did he love your sister?True, he has praised her, but in some opinionHe wrote that praise only to show he hadThe favour of your party, had been well received.”
“You knew the man.”“You knew the man.”“I am an artist, you have tried both métiers.”“You were born near him.”“Do we know our friends?”“Say that he saw the castles, say that he loved Maent!”“Say that he loved her, does it solve the riddle?”End the discussion, Richard goes out next dayAnd gets a quarrel-bolt shot through his vizard,Pardons the bowman, dies,
Ends our discussion. Arnaut ends“In sacred odour”--(that’s apocryphal!)And we can leave the talk till Dante writes:Surely I saw, and still before my eyesGoes on that headless trunk, that bears for lightIts own head swinging, gripped by the dead hair,And like a swinging lamp that says, “Ah me!I severed men, my head and heartYe see here severed, my life’s counterpart.”
Words in this poem 22
- scribbling n.
- The act or process of carding coarsely. Scribbing machine, the machine used for the first carding of wool or other fiber; -- called also scribbler. [See 1st Scribble.]
- bilious a.
- Of or pertaining to the bile. [L. biliosus, fr. bilis bile.]
- straggling a.
- from Straggle, v.
- lichened a.
- Belonging to, or covered with, lichens.
- placid a.
- Pleased; contented; unruffied; undisturbed; serene; peaceful; tranquil; quiet; gentle. [L. placidus, originally, pleasing, mild, from placere to please: cf. F. placide. See Please.]
- aught n.
- Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]
- tactic a.
- Of or pertaining to the art of military and naval tactics. [Gr. tactics.]
- arnaut n.
- An inhabitant of Albania and neighboring mountainous regions, specif. one serving as a soldier in the Turkish army.
- tether n.
- A long rope or chain by which an animal is fastened, as to a stake, so that it can range or feed only within certain limits. [Formerly tedder, OE. tedir; akin to LG. tider, tier, Icel. tjo, Dan. töir. *64.]
- flare v. i.
- To burn with an unsteady or waving flame; as, the candle flares. [Cf. Norw. flara to blaze, flame, adorn with tinsel, dial. Sw. flasa upp, and E. flash, or flacker.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- craftsman n.
- One skilled in some trade or manual occupation; an artificer; a mechanic.
- vigour v. t.
- To invigorate. Feltham.
- discuss v. t.
- To break to pieces; to shatter. Sir T. Browne. [L. discussus, p. p. of discutere to strike asunder (hence came the sense to separate mentally, distinguish); dis- + quatere to shake, strike. See Quash.]
- wrote v. i.
- To root with the snout. See 1st Root. [OE. wroten. See 1st Root.]
- favour n.
- Kind regard; propitious aspect; countenance; friendly disposition; kindness; good will. [Written also favour.]
- artist n.
- One who practices some mechanic art or craft; an artisan. [F. artiste, LL. artista, fr. L. ars. See Art, n., and cf. Artiste.]
- vizard n.
- A mask; a visor. [See Visor.]
- bowman n.
- A man who uses a bow; an archer.
- odour n.
- Any smell, whether fragrant or offensive; scent; perfume. [OE. odor, odour, OF. odor, odour, F. odeur, fr. L. odor; akin to olere to smell, Gr. Olfactory, Osmium, Ozone, Redolent.]
- apocryphal a.
- Pertaining to the Apocrypha.
- headless a.
- Having no head; beheaded; as, a headless body, neck, or carcass. [AS. heáfodleás.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Poem II is in the public domain. This text is taken from Lustra of Ezra Pound, Project Gutenberg ebook #55564; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
Poem II is 75 lines in 9 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 87% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.9 syllables. 17 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 24% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic pentameter, other poems in blank verse.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 7 ----A--AB--B-- space · dead · years · there · danielA · song · technique · willA · manB · her · sister · opinionB · had · received
- 8 AA-------- manA · manA · métiers · him · friends · maent · riddle · day · vizard · dies
- 9 -------AA ends · apocryphal · writes · eyes · light · hair · me · heartA · counterpartA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| End fact. Try fiction, Let us say we see | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| En Bertrans, a tower-room at Hautefort, | 11 | ·/˘·/˘····· |
| Sunset, the ribbon-like road lies, in red cross-light, | 12 | /··/˘······· |
| South toward Montaignac, and he bends at a table | 13 | ···········/˘ |
| Scribbling, swearing between his teeth, by his left hand | 13 | /˘˘/˘········ |
| Lie little strips of parchment covered over, | 11 | ·/˘··/˘/˘·· |
| Scratched and erased with al and ochaisos. | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| Testing his list of rhymes, a lean man? Bilious? | 12 | /˘·······/˘˘ |
| With a red straggling beard? | 7 | ···/˘˘· |
| And the green cat’s-eye lifts toward Montaignac. | 11 | ··········· |
| Or take his “magnet” singer setting out, | 10 | ···/˘/˘/˘· |
| Dodging his way past Aubeterre, singing at Chalais | 13 | /˘······/˘··· |
| In the vaulted hall, | 5 | ··/˘· |
| Or, by a lichened tree at Rochechouart | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Aimlessly watching a hawk above the valleys, | 12 | /˘˘/˘·····/˘ |
| Waiting his turn in the mid-summer evening, | 11 | /˘·····/˘/˘ |
| Thinking of Aelis, whom he loved heart and soul ... | 11 | /˘········· |
| To find her half alone, Montfort away, | 10 | ····˘//˘˘/ |
| And a brown, placid, hated woman visiting her, | 13 | ···/˘/˘/˘/˘˘· |
| Spoiling his visit, with a year before the next one. | 13 | /˘·/˘········ |
| Little enough? | 4 | /˘˘/ |
| Or carry him forward. “Go through all the courts, | 11 | ·/˘·/˘····· |
| My Magnet,” Bertrand had said. | 7 | ·/˘/˘·· |
| We came to Ventadour | 6 | ······ |
| In the mid love court, he sings out the canzon, | 11 | ··········· |
| No one hears save Arrimon Luc D’Esparo-- | 11 | ··········· |
| No one hears aught save the gracious sound of compliments. | 13 | ······/˘··/˘˘ |
| Sir Arrimon counts on his fingers, Montfort, | 11 | ·······/˘/˘ |
| Rochechouart, Chalais, the rest, the tactic, | 10 | ········/˘ |
| Malemort, guesses beneath, sends word to Cœur de Lion: | 14 | ···/˘·······/˘ |
| The compact, de Born smoked out, trees felled | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| About his castle, cattle driven out! | 10 | ···/˘/˘/˘· |
| Or no one sees it, and En Bertrans prospered? | 11 | ·······/˘/˘ |
| And ten years after, or twenty, as you will, | 11 | ······/˘··· |
| Arnaut and Richard lodge beneath Chalus: | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| The dull round towers encroaching on the field, | 11 | ···/˘˘/˘··· |
| The tents tight drawn, horses at tether | 9 | ····/˘·/˘ |
| Further and out of reach, the purple night, | 10 | /˘·····/˘· |
| The crackling of small fires, the bannerets, | 11 | ·/˘··/˘···· |
| The lazy leopards on the largest banner, | 11 | ·/˘/˘··/˘/˘ |
| Stray gleams on hanging mail, an armourer’s torch-flare | 12 | ···/˘······· |
| Melting on steel. | 4 | /˘·· |
| And in the quietest space | 7 | ···/˘˘· |
| They probe old scandals, say de Born is dead; | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| And we’ve the gossip (skipped six hundred years). | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Richard shall die to-morrow--leave him there | 10 | /˘···/˘··· |
| Talking of trobar clus with Daniel. | 9 | /˘·····/˘ |
| And the “best craftsman” sings out his friend’s song, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Envies its vigour ... and deplores the technique, | 11 | /˘·/˘·˘/·˘/ |
| Dispraises his own skill?--That’s as you will. | 10 | ·········· |
| And they discuss the dead man, | 7 | ··˘/··· |
| Plantagenet puts the riddle: “Did he love her?” | 12 | ······/˘···· |
| And Arnaut parries: “Did he love your sister? | 11 | ···/˘····/˘ |
| True, he has praised her, but in some opinion | 11 | ········˘/˘ |
| He wrote that praise only to show he had | 10 | ····/˘···· |
| The favour of your party, had been well received.” | 12 | ·/˘··/˘···˘/ |
| “You knew the man.” | 4 | ···· |
| “You knew the man.” | 4 | ···· |
| “I am an artist, you have tried both métiers.” | 11 | ···/˘······ |
| “You were born near him.” | 5 | ····· |
| “Do we know our friends?” | 6 | ···/˘· |
| “Say that he saw the castles, say that he loved Maent!” | 12 | ·····/˘····· |
| “Say that he loved her, does it solve the riddle?” | 11 | ·········/˘ |
| End the discussion, Richard goes out next day | 11 | ··˘/˘/˘···· |
| And gets a quarrel-bolt shot through his vizard, | 11 | ···/˘····/˘ |
| Pardons the bowman, dies, | 6 | /˘·/˘· |
| Ends our discussion. Arnaut ends | 9 | ·/˘˘/˘··· |
| “In sacred odour”--(that’s apocryphal!) | 10 | ·/˘/˘·˘/˘˘ |
| And we can leave the talk till Dante writes: | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Surely I saw, and still before my eyes | 10 | /˘········ |
| Goes on that headless trunk, that bears for light | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Its own head swinging, gripped by the dead hair, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| And like a swinging lamp that says, “Ah me! | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| I severed men, my head and heart | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Ye see here severed, my life’s counterpart.” | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
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