Conscious of His Folly, He Prays God to Turn Him to a Better Life

Petrarch (1304–1374), translated by various hands · 1859

iambic pentameter · Italian sonnet · 14 lines · from The Sonnets, Triumphs and Other Poems

Father of heaven! after the days misspent,After the nights of wild tumultuous thought,In that fierce passion's strong entanglement,One, for my peace too lovely fair, had wrought;Vouchsafe that, by thy grace, my spirit bentOn nobler aims, to holier ways be brought;That so my foe, spreading with dark intentHis mortal snares, be foil'd, and held at nought.E'en now th' eleventh year its course fulfils,That I have bow'd me to the tyrannyRelentless most to fealty most tried.Have mercy, Lord! on my unworthy ills:Fix all my thoughts in contemplation high;How on the cross this day a Saviour died.

Words in this poem

vouchsafe v. t.
To condescend to grant; to concede; to bestow. [Vouch + safe, that is, to vouch or answer for safety.]
relentless a.
Unmoved by appeals for sympathy or forgiveness; insensible to the distresses of others; destitute of tenderness; unrelenting; unyielding; unpitying; as, a prey to relentless despotism.
saviour n.
One who saves, preserves, or delivers from destruction or danger. [OE. saveour, OF. salveor, F. sauveur, fr. L. salvator to save. See Save, v.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Conscious of His Folly, He Prays God to Turn Him to a Better Life is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Sonnets, Triumphs and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #17650, the various hands translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Petrarch, Conscious of His Folly, He Prays God to Turn Him to a Better Life, in The Sonnets, Triumphs and Other Poems (1859), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #17650, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/petrarch-sonnets/conscious-of-his-folly-he-prays-god-to-turn-him-to-a-better-.html, id L14557.

Form and metre

Conscious of His Folly, He Prays God to Turn Him to a Better Life is 14 lines in a single stanza. It rhymes ABBAABBACDCDCD, the pattern of the Italian sonnet. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 89% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 21% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other Italian sonnets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBAABBACDCDCD misspentA · thoughtB · entanglementB · wroughtA · bentA · broughtB · intentB · noughtA · fulfilsC · tyrannyD · triedC · illsD · highC · diedD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Father of heaven! after the days misspent,10/˘·/····˘/
After the nights of wild tumultuous thought,10·······/˘·
In that fierce passion's strong entanglement,10···/˘·˘/˘˘
One, for my peace too lovely fair, had wrought;10·····/˘···
Vouchsafe that, by thy grace, my spirit bent10˘/·····/˘·
On nobler aims, to holier ways be brought;10·/˘··/˘···
That so my foe, spreading with dark intent10····/˘··˘/
His mortal snares, be foil'd, and held at nought.10·/˘·······
E'en now th' eleventh year its course fulfils,10··˘/˘·····
That I have bow'd me to the tyranny10·······/˘˘
Relentless most to fealty most tried.10˘/˘··/˘˘··
Have mercy, Lord! on my unworthy ills:10·/˘···˘/˘·
Fix all my thoughts in contemplation high;10······˘/˘·
How on the cross this day a Saviour died.10·······/˘·

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