A Love Journey—Danger in the Path—He Turns Back

Petrarch (1304–1374), translated by various hands · 1859

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 10 lines · from The Sonnets, Triumphs and Other Poems

Bright in whose face Love's conquering ensign stream'd,A foreign fair so won me, young and vain,That of her sex all others worthless seem'd:Her as I follow'd o'er the verdant plain,I heard a loud voice speaking from afar,"How lost in these lone woods his footsteps are!"Then paused I, and, beneath the tall beech shade,All wrapt in thought, around me well survey'd,Till, seeing how much danger block'd my way,Homeward I turn'd me though at noon of day.

Words in this poem

afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
lone n.
A lane. See Loanin.
homeward a.
Being in the direction of home; as, the homeward way.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

A Love Journey—Danger in the Path—He Turns Back is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Sonnets, Triumphs and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #17650, the various hands translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

A Love Journey—Danger in the Path—He Turns Back is 10 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 60% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCCDDEE stream'dA · vainB · seem'dA · plainB · afarC · areC · shadeD · survey'dD · wayE · dayE
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Bright in whose face Love's conquering ensign stream'd,10·····/˘/˘·
A foreign fair so won me, young and vain,10·/˘·······
That of her sex all others worthless seem'd:10·····/˘/˘·
Her as I follow'd o'er the verdant plain,10···/˘··/˘·
I heard a loud voice speaking from afar,10·····/˘·˘/
"How lost in these lone woods his footsteps are!"10·······/··
Then paused I, and, beneath the tall beech shade,10··········
All wrapt in thought, around me well survey'd,10········˘/
Till, seeing how much danger block'd my way,10·/˘··/˘···
Homeward I turn'd me though at noon of day.10/˘········

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