I and the Sun

Sándor Petőfi (1823–1849), translated by John Bowring · 1866

iambic pentameter · ABAB · 20 lines · from Translations from Alexander Petofi, the Magyar Poet

Some have imagined that human regretsMount to the moon and are petrified there;Some that the dew-drop, the flower-bud that wets,Is the rendering to earth of a heaven-dropping tear.

But my heart-soarings are not to the moon,They to the sun in its glory aspire;Thence are the songs which their music attune,Thence come love's gushes, thence extasy's fire.

I and the sun are betrothed,—his bright beamKindles a beam in my spirit as bright;All my heart's joys I contemplate in him,While my heart's mirror reflects back his light.

Yet one sad thought for the future I have,When I repose where my fathers reposed;Tho' he may rise and may sit on my grave,Rising or sitting my eyes will be closed.

Yet men have said that the ghosts have a right,For a fugitive hour from their prisons to stray:O let my prison be closed thro' the night,And let me come forth in the brightness of day!

Words in this poem

aspire v. t.
To aspire to; to long for; to try to reach; to mount to.
attune v. t.
To tune or put in tune; to make melodious; to adjust, as one sound or musical instrument to another; as, to attune the voice to a harp. [Pref. ad- + tune.]
contemplate v. t.
To look at on all sides or in all its bearings; to view or consider with continued attention; to regard with deliberate care; to meditate on; to study. [L. contemplatus, p.p. of contemplari to contemplate; con- + templum a space for observation marked out by the augur. See Temple.]
reposed a.
Composed; calm; tranquil; at rest.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

I and the Sun is in the public domain. This text is taken from Translations from Alexander Petofi, the Magyar Poet, by Sir John Bowring (London: Trübner & Co., 1866), Internet Archive, the John Bowring translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Sándor Petőfi, I and the Sun, in Translations from Alexander Petofi, the Magyar Poet (1866), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/petofi-poems-bowring/i-and-the-sun.html, id L29849.

Form and metre

I and the Sun is 20 lines in 5 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic pentameter.

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB regretsA · thereB · wetsA · tearB
  2. 2 ABAB moonA · aspireB · attuneA · fireB
  3. 3 ABAB beamA · brightB · himA · lightB
  4. 4 ABAB haveA · reposedB · graveA · closedB
  5. 5 ABAB rightA · strayB · nightA · dayB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Some have imagined that human regrets10··˘/˘·/˘˘/
Mount to the moon and are petrified there;10······/˘··
Some that the dew-drop, the flower-bud that wets,10······/···
Is the rendering to earth of a heaven-dropping tear.12··/˘····//˘·
But my heart-soarings are not to the moon,10···/˘·····
They to the sun in its glory aspire;10······/˘˘/
Thence are the songs which their music attune,10······/˘˘/
Thence come love's gushes, thence extasy's fire.11···/˘····/˘
I and the sun are betrothed,—his bright beam10··········
Kindles a beam in my spirit as bright;10/˘····/˘··
All my heart's joys I contemplate in him,10·····/˘···
While my heart's mirror reflects back his light.10···/˘˘/···
Yet one sad thought for the future I have,10······/˘··
When I repose where my fathers reposed;10··˘/··/˘/·
Tho' he may rise and may sit on my grave,10··········
Rising or sitting my eyes will be closed.10/˘·/˘·····
Yet men have said that the ghosts have a right,10··········
For a fugitive hour from their prisons to stray:11··/˘/··/˘··
O let my prison be closed thro' the night,10···/˘·····
And let me come forth in the brightness of day!11·······/˘··

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