Poem XIII
Out of the deep, my dream, out of the deep,A little child came to him in his sleepAnd led him back to what was ParadiseBefore the years had darkened in his eyes,And showed him what he ne'er could lose again--The light that once enshrined the child Etain.
Ah, was it Yrma with those radiant eyesThat came to greet and lead him through the skies;Ay; all the world was one wide rose-white flame,As down the path to meet him Yrma cameAnd caught the child up in her arms and cried,This is my child that moved in Etain's side,Thy child and Etain's: I the unknown idealAnd she the rich, the incarnate, breathing realAre one; for me thou never canst attainBut by the love I yield thee for Etain;Even as through Christ thy soul allays its dearth,Love's heaven is only compassed upon earth;And by that love, in thine own Etain's eyesThou shalt find all God's untranscended skies.
As of old, as of old, with Etain that day,Over the hills, and far away,He roamed thro' the fairy forests of fern:Two young lovers were they.
And God sighed in the sunset, and the seaGrew quieter than the hills: the mysteryOf ocean, earth and sky was like a wordUttered, but all unheard,Uttered by every wave and cloud and leafWith all the immortal glory of mortal grief;And every wave that broke its heart of goldIn music on the rainbow-dazzled shoreSeemed telling, strangely telling, evermoreA story that must still remain untold.
Oh, Once upon a time, and o'er and o'erAs aye the Happy ever after cameThe enchanted waves lavished their faery lore
And tossed a foam-bow and a rosy flameAround the whispers of the creaming foam,Till the old rapture with the new sweet nameThrough all the old romance began to roam.
Words in this poem
- incarnate a.
- Not in the flesh; spiritual. [Pref. in- not + carnate.]
- dearth n.
- Scarcity which renders dear; want; lack; specifically, lack of food on account of failure of crops; famine. [OE. derthe, fr. dere. See Dear.]
- compassed a.
- Rounded; arched.
- shalt
- 2d per. sing. of Shall.
- quieter n.
- One who, or that which, quiets.
- unheard a.
- Not heard; not perceived by the ear; as, words unheard by those present.
- broke v. i.
- To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
- strangely adv.
- As something foreign, or not one's own; in a manner adapted to something foreign and strange.
- evermore adv.
- During eternity; always; forever; for an indefinite period; at all times; -- often used substantively with for.
- untold a.
- Not told; not related; not revealed; as, untold secrets.
- enchanted a.
- Under the power of enchantment; possessed or exercised by enchanters; as, an enchanted castle.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Poem XIII is in the public domain. This text is taken from Collected Poems: Volume One, Project Gutenberg ebook #30501; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Alfred Noyes, Poem XIII, in Collected Poems, Volume One (1913), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #30501, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/noyes-collected/poem-xiii.html, id L21445.
Form and metre
Poem XIII is 41 lines in 6 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 59% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%).
See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AA--BB deepA · sleepA · paradise · eyes · againB · etainB
- 2 AABBCCDDEEFFAA eyesA · skiesA · flameB · cameB · criedC · sideC · idealD · realD · attainE · etainE · dearthF · earthF · eyesA · skiesA
- 3 AA-A dayA · awayA · fern · theyA
- 4 --AABBCDDC sea · mystery · wordA · unheardA · leafB · griefB · goldC · shoreD · evermoreD · untoldC
- 6 ABAB flameA · foamB · nameA · roamB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Out of the deep, my dream, out of the deep, | 10 | ·········· |
| A little child came to him in his sleep | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| And led him back to what was Paradise | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Before the years had darkened in his eyes, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| And showed him what he ne'er could lose again-- | 10 | ········˘/ |
| The light that once enshrined the child Etain. | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| Ah, was it Yrma with those radiant eyes | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| That came to greet and lead him through the skies; | 10 | ·········· |
| Ay; all the world was one wide rose-white flame, | 10 | ·········· |
| As down the path to meet him Yrma came | 10 | ·········· |
| And caught the child up in her arms and cried, | 10 | ·········· |
| This is my child that moved in Etain's side, | 10 | ·········· |
| Thy child and Etain's: I the unknown ideal | 11 | ·······˘/˘/ |
| And she the rich, the incarnate, breathing real | 11 | ·····˘/˘/˘· |
| Are one; for me thou never canst attain | 10 | ·····/˘·˘/ |
| But by the love I yield thee for Etain; | 10 | ·········· |
| Even as through Christ thy soul allays its dearth, | 10 | /·····˘/·· |
| Love's heaven is only compassed upon earth; | 10 | ·/·/˘/˘··· |
| And by that love, in thine own Etain's eyes | 10 | ·········· |
| Thou shalt find all God's untranscended skies. | 10 | ·········· |
| As of old, as of old, with Etain that day, | 11 | ··········· |
| Over the hills, and far away, | 8 | ······˘/ |
| He roamed thro' the fairy forests of fern: | 10 | ····/˘/˘·· |
| Two young lovers were they. | 6 | ··/˘·· |
| And God sighed in the sunset, and the sea | 10 | ·····/···· |
| Grew quieter than the hills: the mystery | 11 | ·/˘˘····/˘˘ |
| Of ocean, earth and sky was like a word | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Uttered, but all unheard, | 6 | /˘··˘/ |
| Uttered by every wave and cloud and leaf | 10 | /˘·/˘····· |
| With all the immortal glory of mortal grief; | 12 | ···˘/˘/˘·/˘· |
| And every wave that broke its heart of gold | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| In music on the rainbow-dazzled shore | 10 | ·/˘··/·/˘· |
| Seemed telling, strangely telling, evermore | 10 | ·/˘/˘/˘/˘· |
| A story that must still remain untold. | 10 | ·/˘···˘/˘/ |
| Oh, Once upon a time, and o'er and o'er | 10 | ·········· |
| As aye the Happy ever after came | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| The enchanted waves lavished their faery lore | 11 | ·˘/˘·/˘···· |
| And tossed a foam-bow and a rosy flame | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Around the whispers of the creaming foam, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Till the old rapture with the new sweet name | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Through all the old romance began to roam. | 10 | ····˘/˘/·· |
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