In Time of War I

Alfred Noyes (1880–1958) · 1913

iambic pentameter · ABAB · 28 lines · from Collected Poems, Volume One

To-night o'er Bagshot heath the purple heatherRolls like dumb thunder to the splendid West;And mighty ragged clouds are massed togetherAbove the scarred old common's broken breast;And there are hints of blood between the boulders,Red glints of fiercer blossom, bright and bold;And round the shaggy mounds and sullen shouldersThe gorse repays the sun with savage gold.

And now, as in the West the light grows holy,And all the hollows of the heath grow dim,Far off, a sulky rumble rolls up slowlyWhere guns at practice growl their evening hymn.

And here and there in bare clean yellow spacesThe print of horse-hoofs like an answering cryStrikes strangely on the sense from lonely placesWhere there is nought but empty heath and sky.

The print of warlike hoofs, where now no figureOf horse or man along the sky's red rimBreaks on the low horizon's rough black rigourTo make the gorgeous waste less wild and grim;

Strangely the hoof-prints strike, a Crusoe's wonder,Framed with sharp furze amongst the footless fells,A menace and a mystery, rapt asunder,As if the whole wide world contained nought else,--

Nought but the grand despair of desolationBetween us and that wild, how far, how near,Where, clothed with thunder, nation grapples nation,And Slaughter grips the clay-cold hand of Fear.

Words in this poem

sullen a.
Lonely; solitary; desolate. Wyclif (Job iii. 14). [OE. solein, solain, lonely, sullen; through Old French fr. (assumed) LL. solanus solitary, fr. L. solus alone. See Sole, a.]
gorse n.
Furze. See Furze. [OE. & AS. gorst; perh. akin to E. grow, grass.]
strangely adv.
As something foreign, or not one's own; in a manner adapted to something foreign and strange.
rigour n.
Rigidity; stiffness. [L. See Rigor., below.]
gorgeous a.
Imposing through splendid or various colors; showy; fine; magnificent. [OF. gorgias beautiful, glorious, vain, luxurious; cf. OF. gorgias ruff, neck handkerchief, and F. gorge throat, and se pengorger to assume airs. Cf. Gorge, n.]
amongst prep.
Mixed or mingled; surrounded by. [OE. amongist, amonges, amonge, among, AS. onmang, ongemang, gemang, in a crowd or mixture. For the ending -st see Amidst. See Mingle.]
rapt n.
An ecstasy; a trance. Bp. Morton. [From F. rapt abduction, rape, L. raptus, fr. rapere to seize and carry off, to transport; or fr. E. rapt, a. See Rapt, a., and Rapid.]
desolation n.
The act of desolating or laying waste; destruction of inhabitants; depopulation. [F. désolation, L. desolatio.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

In Time of War I is 28 lines in 6 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 3 of its 6 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCD heatherA · westB · togetherA · breastB · bouldersC · boldD · shouldersC · goldD
  2. 2 ABAB holyA · dimB · slowlyA · hymnB
  3. 3 ABAB spacesA · cryB · placesA · skyB
  4. 4 -A-A figure · rimA · rigour · grimA
  5. 5 A-A- wonderA · fells · asunderA · else
  6. 6 ABAB desolationA · nearB · nationA · fearB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
To-night o'er Bagshot heath the purple heather11·······/˘/˘
Rolls like dumb thunder to the splendid West;10···/˘··/˘·
And mighty ragged clouds are massed together11·/˘/˘···˘/˘
Above the scarred old common's broken breast;10·····/˘/˘·
And there are hints of blood between the boulders,11·········/˘
Red glints of fiercer blossom, bright and bold;10···/˘/˘···
And round the shaggy mounds and sullen shoulders11···/˘··/˘/˘
The gorse repays the sun with savage gold.10···/···/˘·
And now, as in the West the light grows holy,11·········/˘
And all the hollows of the heath grow dim,10···/˘·····
Far off, a sulky rumble rolls up slowly11···/˘/˘··/˘
Where guns at practice growl their evening hymn.10···/˘··/˘·
And here and there in bare clean yellow spaces11·······/˘/˘
The print of horse-hoofs like an answering cry10·······/˘·
Strikes strangely on the sense from lonely places11·/˘····/˘/˘
Where there is nought but empty heath and sky.10·····/˘···
The print of warlike hoofs, where now no figure11···/·····/˘
Of horse or man along the sky's red rim10····˘/····
Breaks on the low horizon's rough black rigour11····˘/˘··/˘
To make the gorgeous waste less wild and grim;10···/˘·····
Strangely the hoof-prints strike, a Crusoe's wonder,11/˘·····/˘/˘
Framed with sharp furze amongst the footless fells,10·······/˘·
A menace and a mystery, rapt asunder,11·/˘··/˘·˘/˘
As if the whole wide world contained nought else,--10······˘/··
Nought but the grand despair of desolation11····˘/··˘/˘
Between us and that wild, how far, how near,10··········
Where, clothed with thunder, nation grapples nation,11···/˘/˘/˘/˘
And Slaughter grips the clay-cold hand of Fear.10·/˘·······

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