Fancies

L. M. Montgomery (1874–1942) · 1916

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 18 lines · from The Watchman and Other Poems

Surely the flowers of a hundred springsAre simply the souls of beautiful things!

The poppies aflame with gold and redWere the kisses of lovers in days that are fled.

The purple pansies with dew-drops pearledWere the rainbow dreams of a youngling world.

The lily, white as a star apart,Was the first pure prayer of a virgin heart.

The daisies that dance and twinkle soWere the laughter of children in long ago.

The sweetness of all true friendship yetLives in the breath of the mignonette.

To the white narcissus there must belongThe very delight of a maiden's song.

And the rose, all flowers of the earth above,Was a perfect, rapturous thought of love.

Oh! surely the blossoms of all the springsMust be the souls of beautiful things.

Words in this poem

aflame adv.
Inflames; glowing with light or passion; ablaze. G. Eliot. [Pref. a- + flame.]
youngling n.
A young person; a youth; also, any animal in its early life. [AS. geongling.]
twinkle v. i.
To open and shut the eye rapidly; to blink; to wink. [OE. twinklen, AS. twinclian; akin to OE. twinken to blink, wink, G. zwinken, zwinkern, and perhaps to E. twitch.]
mignonette n.
A plant (Reseda odorata) having greenish flowers with orange- colored stamens, and exhaling a delicious fragrance. In Africa it is a low shrub, but further north it is usually an annual herb. [F. mignonnette, dim. of mignon darling. See 2d Minion.]
narcissus n.
A genus of endogenous bulbous plants with handsome flowers, having a cup-shaped crown within the six-lobed perianth, and comprising the daffodils and jonquils of several kinds. [L. narcissus, and (personified) Narcissus, Gr. na`rkissos, Na`rkissos, fr. na`rkh torpor, in allusion to the narcotic properties of the flower. Cf. Narcotic.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Fancies is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Watchman and Other Poems (New York: Frederick A. Stokes Company, 1917; Toronto: McClelland, Goodchild and Stewart, 1916), Internet Archive; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: L. M. Montgomery, Fancies, in The Watchman and Other Poems (1916), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/montgomery-watchman/fancies.html, id L29422.

Form and metre

Fancies is 18 lines in 9 stanzas of 2 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 75%).

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA springsA · thingsA
  2. 2 AA redA · fledA
  3. 3 AA pearledA · worldA
  4. 4 AA apartA · heartA
  5. 5 AA soA · agoA
  6. 6 AA yetA · mignonetteA
  7. 7 AA belongA · songA
  8. 8 AA aboveA · loveA
  9. 9 AA springsA · thingsA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Surely the flowers of a hundred springs10/˘·/˘··/˘·
Are simply the souls of beautiful things!10·/˘···/˘˘·
The poppies aflame with gold and red9·/˘˘/····
Were the kisses of lovers in days that are fled.12··/˘·/˘·····
The purple pansies with dew-drops pearled10·/˘/˘····˘
Were the rainbow dreams of a youngling world.10··/····/˘·
The lily, white as a star apart,9·/˘····˘/
Was the first pure prayer of a virgin heart.10·······/˘·
The daisies that dance and twinkle so9·/˘···/˘·
Were the laughter of children in long ago.11··/˘·/˘··˘/
The sweetness of all true friendship yet9·/˘···/˘·
Lives in the breath of the mignonette.9·········
To the white narcissus there must belong10···˘/˘··˘/
The very delight of a maiden's song.10·/˘˘/··/˘·
And the rose, all flowers of the earth above,10····/·····
Was a perfect, rapturous thought of love.10··/·/˘˘···
Oh! surely the blossoms of all the springs10·/˘·/˘····
Must be the souls of beautiful things.9·····/˘˘·

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