The Persons

John Milton (1608–1674) · 1631–1645

iambic pentameter · 160 lines · from L'Allegro, Il Penseroso, Comus, and Lycidas

The ATTENDANT SPIRIT, afterwards in the habit of THYRSIS.COMUS, with his Crew.The LADY.SABRINA, the Nymph.

The Lord Brackley;Mr. Thomas Egerton, his Brother;The Lady Alice Egerton.

The first Scene discovers a wild wood.The ATTENDANT SPIRIT descends or enters.

BEFORE the starry threshold of Jove's courtMy mansion is, where those immortal shapesOf bright aerial spirits live inspheredIn regions mild of calm and serene air,Above the smoke and stir of this dim spotWhich men call Earth, and, with low-thoughted care,Confined and pestered in this pinfold here,Strive to keep up a frail and feverish being,Unmindful of the crown that Virtue gives,After this mortal change, to her true servantsAmongst the enthroned gods on sainted seats.Yet some there be that by due steps aspireTo lay their just hands on that golden keyThat opes the palace of eternity.To Such my errand is; and, but for such,I would not soil these pure ambrosial weedsWith the rank vapours of this sin-worn mould.But to my task. Neptune, besides the swayOf every salt flood and each ebbing stream,Took in by lot, 'twixt high and nether Jove,Imperial rule of all the sea-girt islesThat, like to rich and various gems, inlayThe unadorned bosom of the deep;Which he, to grace his tributary gods,By course commits to several government,And gives them leave to wear their sapphire crownsAnd wield their little tridents. But this Isle,The greatest and the best of all the main,He quarters to his blue-haired deities;And all this tract that fronts the falling sunA noble Peer of mickle trust and powerHas in his charge, with tempered awe to guideAn old and haughty nation, proud in arms:Where his fair offspring, nursed in princely lore,Are coming to attend their father's state,And new-intrusted sceptre. But their wayLies through the perplexed paths of this drear wood,The nodding horror of whose shady browsThreats the forlorn and wandering passenger;And here their tender age might suffer peril,But that, by quick command from sovran Jove,I was despatched for their defence and guard:And listen why; for I will tell you nowWhat never yet was heard in tale or song,From old or modern bard, in hall or bower.Bacchus, that first from out the purple grapeCrushed the sweet poison of misused wine,After the Tuscan mariners transformed,Coasting the Tyrrhene shore, as the winds listed,On Circe's island fell. (Who knows not Circe,The daughter of the Sun, whose charmed cupWhoever tasted lost his upright shape,And downward fell into a grovelling swine?)This Nymph, that gazed upon his clustering locks,With ivy berries wreathed, and his blithe youth,Had by him, ere he parted thence, a sonMuch like his father, but his mother more,Whom therefore she brought up, and Comus named:Who, ripe and frolic of his full-grown age,Roving the Celtic and Iberian fields,At last betakes him to this ominous wood,And, in thick shelter of black shades imbowered,Excels his mother at her mighty art;Offering to every weary travellerHis orient liquor in a crystal glass,To quench the drouth of Phoebus; which as they taste(For most do taste through fond intemperate thirst),Soon as the potion works, their human count'nance,The express resemblance of the gods, is changedInto some brutish form of wolf or bear,Or ounce or tiger, hog, or bearded goat,All other parts remaining as they were.And they, so perfect is their misery,Not once perceive their foul disfigurement,But boast themselves more comely than before,And all their friends and native home forget,To roll with pleasure in a sensual sty.Therefore, when any favoured of high JoveChances to pass through this adventurous glade,Swift as the sparkle of a glancing starI shoot from heaven, to give him safe convoy,As now I do. But first I must put offThese my sky-robes, spun out of Iris' woof,And take the weeds and likeness of a swainThat to the service of this house belongs,Who, with his soft pipe and smooth-dittied song,Well knows to still the wild winds when they roar,And hush the waving woods; nor of less faithAnd in this office of his mountain watchLikeliest, and nearest to the present aidOf this occasion. But I hear the treadOf hateful steps; I must be viewless now.

COMUS enters, with a charming-rod in one hand, his glass in theother: with him a rout of monsters, headed like sundry sorts ofwildbeasts, but otherwise like men and women, their apparelglistering.They come in making a riotous and unruly noise, with torches intheir hands.

COMUS. The star that bids the shepherd foldNow the top of heaven doth hold;And the gilded car of dayHis glowing axle doth allayIn the steep Atlantic stream;And the slope sun his upward beamShoots against the dusky pole,Pacing toward the other goalOf his chamber in the east.Meanwhile, welcome joy and feast,Midnight shout and revelry,Tipsy dance and jollity.Braid your locks with rosy twine,Dropping odours, dropping wine.Rigour now is gone to bed;And Advice with scrupulous head,Strict Age, and sour Severity,With their grave saws, in slumber lie.We, that are of purer fire,Imitate the starry quire,Who, in their nightly watchful spheres,Lead in swift round the months and years.The sounds and seas, with all their finny drove,Now to the moon in wavering morrice move;And on the tawny sands and shelvesTrip the pert fairies and the dapper elves.By dimpled brook and fountain-brim,The wood-nymphs, decked with daisies trim,Their merry wakes and pastimes keep:What hath night to do with sleep?Night hath better sweets to prove;Venus now wakes, and wakens Love.Come, let us our rights begin;'T is only daylight that makes sin,Which these dun shades will ne'er report.Hail, goddess of nocturnal sport,Dark-veiled Cotytto, to whom the secret flameOf midnight torches burns! mysterious dame,That ne'er art called but when the dragon wombOf Stygian darkness spets her thickest gloom,And makes one blot of all the air!Stay thy cloudy ebon chair,Wherein thou ridest with Hecat', and befriendUs thy vowed priests, till utmost endOf all thy dues be done, and none left out,Ere the blabbing eastern scout,The nice Morn on the Indian steep,From her cabined loop-hole peep,And to the tell-tale Sun descryOur concealed solemnity.Come, knit hands, and beat the groundIn a light fantastic round.

Words in this poem 48
starry a.
Abounding with stars; adorned with stars.
mansion n.
A dwelling place, -- whether a part or whole of a house or other shelter. [OF. mansion, F. maison, fr. L. mansio a staying, remaining, a dwelling, habitation, fr. manere, mansum, to stay, dwell; akin to Gr. Manse, Manor, Menagerie, Men]
pinfold n.
A place in which stray cattle or domestic animals are confined; a pound; a penfold. [For pindfold. See Pinder, Pound an inclosure, and Fold an inclosure.]
amongst prep.
Mixed or mingled; surrounded by. [OE. amongist, amonges, amonge, among, AS. onmang, ongemang, gemang, in a crowd or mixture. For the ending -st see Amidst. See Mingle.]
sainted a.
Consecrated; sacred; holy; pious.
aspire v. t.
To aspire to; to long for; to try to reach; to mount to.
ambrosial a.
Consisting of, or partaking of the nature of, ambrosia; delighting the taste or smell; delicious.
mould n.
Crumbling, soft, friable earth; esp., earth containing the remains or constituents of organic matter, and suited to the growth of plants; soil. [OE. molde, AS. molde; akin to D. mul, G. mull, mulm, OHG. molt, molta, Icel. mold, Dan. muld, Sw. mull, Goth. mulda, and E. meal flour. See Meal, and cf. Mole a]
nether a.
Situated down or below; lying beneath, or in the lower part; having a lower position; belonging to the region below; lower; under; -- opposed to upper. [OE. nethere, neithere, AS. ni, fr. the adv. ni downward; akin to neo below, beneath, D. neder down, G. nieder, Sw. nedre below, nether, a. & adv., and also to S]
jove n.
The chief divinity of the ancient Romans; Jupiter. [L. Jupiter, gen. Jovis, OL. Jovis, nom. & gen. for Djovis; akin to E. Tuesday. See Tuesday, and cf. Jupiter.]
girt v. t.
To gird; to encircle; to invest by means of a girdle; to measure the girth of; as, to girt a tree. [From Girt, n., cf. Girth, v.]
wield v. t.
To govern; to rule; to keep, or have in charge; also, to possess. [OE. welden to govern, to have power over, to possess, AS. geweldan, gewyldan, from wealdan; akin to OS. waldan, OFries. walda, G. walten, OHG. waltan, Icel. val]
isle v. t.
To cause to become an island, or like an island; to surround or encompass; to island.
mickle a.
Much; great. [Old Eng. & Scot.] [OE. mikel, muchel, mochel, mukel, AS. micel, mycel; akin to OS. mikil, OHG. mihil, mihhil, Icel. mikill, mykill, Goth. mikils, L. magnus, Gr. mahat. sq. root103]
haughty a.
High; lofty; bold. [OE. hautein, F. hautain, fr. haut high, OF. also halt, fr. L. altus. See Altitude.]
sceptre n.
A staff or baton borne by a sovereign, as a ceremonial badge or emblem of authority; a royal mace. [F. sceptre, L. sceptrum, from Gr. shaft. See Shaft, and cf. Scape a stem, shaft.]
drear n.
Sadness; dismalness.
forlorn a.
Deserted abandoned; lost. [OE., p.p. of forlesen to lose utterly, AS. forleósan (p.p. forloren); pref. for- + leósan (in comp.) to lose; cf. D. verliezen to lose, G. verlieren, Sw. förlor]
sovran a.
A variant of Sovereign.
defence n.
The act of defending, or the state of being defended; protection, as from violence or danger. [F. défense, OF. defense, fem., defens, masc., fr. L. defensa (cf. Fence.]
whoever pron.
Whatever person; any person who; be or she who; any one who; as, he shall be punished, whoever he may be.
blithe a.
Gay; merry; sprightly; joyous; glad; cheerful; as, a blithe spirit. [AS. bli blithe, kind; akin to Goth. blei kind, Icel. bli mild, gentle, Dan. & Sw. blid gentle, D. blijd blithe, OHG. blidi kind, blithe.]
iberian a.
Of or pertaining to Iberia.
phoebus n.
Apollo; the sun god.
brutish a.
Pertaining to, or resembling, a brute or brutes; of a cruel, gross, and stupid nature; coarse; unfeeling; unintelligent.
favoured a.
Countenanced; aided; regarded with kidness; as, a favored friend.
glade n.
An open passage through a wood; a grassy open or cleared space in a forest. [Prob. of Scand. origin, and akin to glad, a.; cf. also W. golead, goleuad, a lighting, illumination, fr. goleu light, clear, bright, goleu fwlch glade, lit., a ]
glancing a.
Shooting, as light.
convoy v. t.
To accompany for protection, either by sea or land; to attend for protection; to escort; as, a frigate convoys a merchantman. [F. convoyer, OF. conveier, convoier. See Convey.]
hateful a.
Manifesting hate or hatred; malignant; malevolent.
viewless a.
Not perceivable by the eye; invisible; unseen.
sundry a.
Several; divers; more than one or two; various. [OE. sundry, sondry, AS. syndrig, fr. sundor asunder. See Sunder, v. t.]
meanwhile n.
The intervening time; as, in the meantime (or mean time).
rigour n.
Rigidity; stiffness. [L. See Rigor., below.]
quire v. i.
To sing in concert.
nightly a.
Of or pertaining to the night, or to every night; happening or done by night, or every night; as, nightly shades; he kept nightly vigils.
finny a.
Having, or abounding in, fins, as fishes; pertaining to fishes.
drove n.
A collection of cattle driven, or cattle collected for driving; a number of animals, as oxen, sheep, or swine, driven in a body. [AS. draf, fr. drifan to drive. See Drive.]
morrice a.
Dancing the morrice; dancing.
dapper a.
Little and active; spruce; trim; smart; neat in dress or appearance; lively. [OE. daper; prob. fr. D. dapper brave, valiant; akin to G. tapfer brave, OHG. taphar heavy, weighty, OSlav. dobrû good, Russ. dobrui. Cf. Deft.]
daylight n.
The light of day as opposed to the darkness of night; the light of the sun, as opposed to that of the moon or to artificial light.
dame n.
A mistress of a family, who is a lady; a womam in authority; especially, a lady. [F. dame, LL. domna, fr. L. domina mistress, lady, fem. of dominus master, ruler, lord; akin to domare to tame, subdue. See Tame, and cf. Dam mother, Dan, Danger]
womb n.
The belly; the abdomen. [OE. wombe, wambe, AS. wamb, womb; akin to D. wam belly, OS. & OHG. wamba, G. wamme, wampe, Icel. vömb, Sw. v&mb, Dan. vom, Goth. wamba.]
stygian a.
Of or pertaining to the river Styx; hence, hellish; infernal.
ebon a.
Consisting of ebony.
befriend v. t.
To act as a friend to; to favor; to aid, benefit, or countenance.
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
descry
, Discovery or view, as of an army seen at a distance.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

The Persons is 160 lines in 6 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 83%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.4 syllables. 22 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 31% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 4 ---A-AA----------B---B---------------------------------------------------------------------- court · shapes · insphered · airA · spot · careA · hereA · being · gives · servants · seats · aspire · key · eternity · such · weeds · mould · swayB · stream · jove · isles · inlayB · deep · gods · government · crowns · isle · main · deities · sun · power · guide · arms · lore · state · way · wood · brows · passenger · peril · jove · guard · now · song · bower · grape · wine · transformed · listed · circe · cup · shape · swine · locks · youth · son · more · named · age · fields · wood · imbowered · art · traveller · glass · taste · thirst · count'nance · changed · bear · goat · were · misery · disfigurement · before · forget · sty · jove · glade · star · convoy · off · woof · swain · belongs · song · roar · faith · watch · aid · tread · now
  2. 6 AABBCCDDEE--FFGG----HH--IIJJKKLLMMNNOOPPQQRRSSTT--UU foldA · holdA · dayB · allayB · streamC · beamC · poleD · goalD · eastE · feastE · revelry · jollity · twineF · wineF · bedG · headG · severity · lie · fire · quire · spheresH · yearsH · drove · move · shelvesI · elvesI · brimJ · trimJ · keepK · sleepK · proveL · loveL · beginM · sinM · reportN · sportN · flameO · dameO · wombP · gloomP · airQ · chairQ · befriendR · endR · outS · scoutS · steepT · peepT · descry · solemnity · groundU · roundU
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The ATTENDANT SPIRIT, afterwards in the habit of THYRSIS.14·˘/˘//˘··/˘···
COMUS, with his Crew.5·····
The LADY.3·/˘
SABRINA, the Nymph.5˘/˘··
The Lord Brackley;4····
Mr. Thomas Egerton, his Brother;10/˘/˘/˘˘·/˘
The Lady Alice Egerton.8·/˘/˘/˘˘
The first Scene discovers a wild wood.9···˘/˘···
The ATTENDANT SPIRIT descends or enters.11·˘/˘/˘˘/·/˘
BEFORE the starry threshold of Jove's court10···/˘/····
My mansion is, where those immortal shapes10·/˘···˘/˘·
Of bright aerial spirits live insphered10··/˘˘/˘···
In regions mild of calm and serene air,10·/˘····˘/·
Above the smoke and stir of this dim spot10··········
Which men call Earth, and, with low-thoughted care,10·······/˘·
Confined and pestered in this pinfold here,10˘/·/˘··/˘·
Strive to keep up a frail and feverish being,10·······/˘/
Unmindful of the crown that Virtue gives,10·······/˘·
After this mortal change, to her true servants11···/˘····/˘
Amongst the enthroned gods on sainted seats.10·······/˘·
Yet some there be that by due steps aspire10········˘/
To lay their just hands on that golden key10·······/˘·
That opes the palace of eternity.10···/˘·˘/˘˘
To Such my errand is; and, but for such,10···/˘·····
I would not soil these pure ambrosial weeds10······˘/˘·
With the rank vapours of this sin-worn mould.10···/˘·····
But to my task. Neptune, besides the sway10····/˘·/··
Of every salt flood and each ebbing stream,10·/˘····/˘·
Took in by lot, 'twixt high and nether Jove,10·······/˘·
Imperial rule of all the sea-girt isles10˘/˘·······
That, like to rich and various gems, inlay10·····/˘·/·
The unadorned bosom of the deep;10··˘/˘/˘···
Which he, to grace his tributary gods,10·····/˘·˘·
By course commits to several government,10··˘/·/˘/˘˘
And gives them leave to wear their sapphire crowns10·······/˘·
And wield their little tridents. But this Isle,10···/˘/˘···
The greatest and the best of all the main,10·/˘·······
He quarters to his blue-haired deities;10·/˘····/˘˘
And all this tract that fronts the falling sun10·······/˘·
A noble Peer of mickle trust and power11·/˘··/˘··/˘
Has in his charge, with tempered awe to guide10·····/˘···
An old and haughty nation, proud in arms:10···/˘/˘···
Where his fair offspring, nursed in princely lore,10···/···/˘·
Are coming to attend their father's state,10·/˘·˘/·/˘·
And new-intrusted sceptre. But their way10·····/˘···
Lies through the perplexed paths of this drear wood,10···˘/·····
The nodding horror of whose shady brows10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Threats the forlorn and wandering passenger;11··˘/·/˘˘/˘˘
And here their tender age might suffer peril,11···/˘··/˘/˘
But that, by quick command from sovran Jove,10····˘/·/˘·
I was despatched for their defence and guard:10······˘/··
And listen why; for I will tell you now10·/˘·······
What never yet was heard in tale or song,10·/˘·······
From old or modern bard, in hall or bower.11···/˘····/˘
Bacchus, that first from out the purple grape10/˘·····/˘·
Crushed the sweet poison of misused wine,10·˘··/˘·˘/·
After the Tuscan mariners transformed,10···/˘/˘˘˘/
Coasting the Tyrrhene shore, as the winds listed,11/˘·······/˘
On Circe's island fell. (Who knows not Circe,10···/˘·····
The daughter of the Sun, whose charmed cup10·/˘·····˘·
Whoever tasted lost his upright shape,10˘/˘/˘··/··
And downward fell into a grovelling swine?)10·/····/˘˘·
This Nymph, that gazed upon his clustering locks,10·······/˘·
With ivy berries wreathed, and his blithe youth,10·/˘/˘·····
Had by him, ere he parted thence, a son10·····/˘···
Much like his father, but his mother more,10···/˘··/˘·
Whom therefore she brought up, and Comus named:10··········
Who, ripe and frolic of his full-grown age,10···/˘·····
Roving the Celtic and Iberian fields,10/˘·/˘·˘/˘·
At last betakes him to this ominous wood,10··˘/···/˘·
And, in thick shelter of black shades imbowered,11···/˘······
Excels his mother at her mighty art;10˘/·/˘··/˘·
Offering to every weary traveller11/˘˘·/˘/˘/˘˘
His orient liquor in a crystal glass,11·/˘·/˘··/˘·
To quench the drouth of Phoebus; which as they taste11·····/˘····
(For most do taste through fond intemperate thirst),10······˘/˘·
Soon as the potion works, their human count'nance,11···/˘··/˘··
The express resemblance of the gods, is changed11·˘/˘/˘·····
Into some brutish form of wolf or bear,10···/˘·····
Or ounce or tiger, hog, or bearded goat,10···/˘··/˘·
All other parts remaining as they were.10·/˘·˘/˘···
And they, so perfect is their misery,10···/···/˘˘
Not once perceive their foul disfigurement,10··˘/··˘/˘˘
But boast themselves more comely than before,10··˘/·/˘···
And all their friends and native home forget,10·····/˘·˘/
To roll with pleasure in a sensual sty.10···/˘··/˘·
Therefore, when any favoured of high Jove10···/˘/˘···
Chances to pass through this adventurous glade,10/˘····˘/˘·
Swift as the sparkle of a glancing star10···/˘··/˘·
I shoot from heaven, to give him safe convoy,10···/····/·
As now I do. But first I must put off10··········
These my sky-robes, spun out of Iris' woof,10·······/˘·
And take the weeds and likeness of a swain10·····/˘···
That to the service of this house belongs,10···/˘···˘/
Who, with his soft pipe and smooth-dittied song,10·······/˘·
Well knows to still the wild winds when they roar,10··········
And hush the waving woods; nor of less faith10···/˘·····
And in this office of his mountain watch10···/˘··/˘·
Likeliest, and nearest to the present aid10/˘·/˘··/˘·
Of this occasion. But I hear the tread10··˘/˘·····
Of hateful steps; I must be viewless now.10·/˘····/˘·
COMUS enters, with a charming-rod in one hand, his glass in the16··/˘··/˘········
other: with him a rout of monsters, headed like sundry sorts of16/˘·····/˘/˘·/˘··
wild1·
beasts, but otherwise like men and women, their apparel14··/˘····/˘·˘/˘
glistering.3···
They come in making a riotous and unruly noise, with torches in17···/˘·/˘·˘/˘··/˘·
their hands.2··
COMUS. The star that bids the shepherd fold10·······/˘·
Now the top of heaven doth hold;8····/˘··
And the gilded car of day7··/˘···
His glowing axle doth allay8·/˘/˘·˘/
In the steep Atlantic stream;7···˘/˘·
And the slope sun his upward beam8·····/˘·
Shoots against the dusky pole,7····/˘·
Pacing toward the other goal8/˘···/˘·
Of his chamber in the east.7··/˘···
Meanwhile, welcome joy and feast,7/·/˘···
Midnight shout and revelry,7/···/˘˘
Tipsy dance and jollity.7/˘··/˘˘
Braid your locks with rosy twine,7····/˘·
Dropping odours, dropping wine.7/˘/˘/˘·
Rigour now is gone to bed;7/˘·····
And Advice with scrupulous head,8·˘/·/˘˘·
Strict Age, and sour Severity,9···/˘˘/˘˘
With their grave saws, in slumber lie.8·····/˘·
We, that are of purer fire,8····/˘/˘
Imitate the starry quire,7/˘··/˘·
Who, in their nightly watchful spheres,8···/˘/˘·
Lead in swift round the months and years.8········
The sounds and seas, with all their finny drove,10·······/˘·
Now to the moon in wavering morrice move;10·····/˘/˘·
And on the tawny sands and shelves8···/˘···
Trip the pert fairies and the dapper elves.10···/˘··/˘·
By dimpled brook and fountain-brim,9·/˘˘··/˘·
The wood-nymphs, decked with daisies trim,9····˘·/˘·
Their merry wakes and pastimes keep:8·/˘··/··
What hath night to do with sleep?7·······
Night hath better sweets to prove;7··/˘···
Venus now wakes, and wakens Love.8/˘···/˘·
Come, let us our rights begin;8···/˘·˘/
'T is only daylight that makes sin,9··/˘/····
Which these dun shades will ne'er report.8······˘/
Hail, goddess of nocturnal sport,8·/˘·˘/˘·
Dark-veiled Cotytto, to whom the secret flame11········/˘·
Of midnight torches burns! mysterious dame,10·/·/˘·˘/˘·
That ne'er art called but when the dragon womb10·······/˘·
Of Stygian darkness spets her thickest gloom,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
And makes one blot of all the air!8········
Stay thy cloudy ebon chair,7··/˘/˘·
Wherein thou ridest with Hecat', and befriend11·········˘/
Us thy vowed priests, till utmost end9···˘··/··
Of all thy dues be done, and none left out,10··········
Ere the blabbing eastern scout,7····/˘·
The nice Morn on the Indian steep,9·····/˘˘·
From her cabined loop-hole peep,7··/˘···
And to the tell-tale Sun descry8······˘/
Our concealed solemnity.9/˘˘/˘˘/˘˘
Come, knit hands, and beat the ground7·······
In a light fantastic round.7···˘/˘·

On this poem

From Thurber’s introduction to Comus. During the reigns of Elizabeth, James I., and Charles I., the mask was one of the most popular forms of dramatic entertainment. Having a function and a character peculiar to itself, it flourished side by side with the regular plays of the theatrical stage, and gave large scope to the genius of poets, composers, and scenic artists. The mask was usually designed to grace some important occasion, in which members of the upper classes of society, or even royal personages, were concerned. When the mask was purely a private one, like Arcades and Comus, it was all the fashion for the gentle youths and maidens, for gentlemen and ladies of the highest rank, to take upon themselves the parts of the drama, to rehearse them assiduously, and finally to enact them on the private stage or on the lawn in the presence of a select audience. Such was the origin of the poem which Milton, in all the editions published during his lifetime, entitled simply “A Maske presented at Ludlow Castle, 1634,” but which editors since his day have agreed to name Comus. The occasion of the poem was the coming of the Earl of Bridgewater to Ludlow Castle, to enter upon his official residence there as Lord President of Wales. For his plot, the poet feigned that the young children of the earl, two sons and a daughter, in coming to Ludlow, had to pass unattended through a forest, in which the boys became separated from the girl and she fell into the hands of the enchanter Comus. The Attendant Spirit appears to the youths with his magic herb, and with the further assistance of the water-nymph Sabrina, at last makes all right, and the children are restored to their parents in the midst of festive rejoicing.
Notes from the edition 118

Notes by William Bell, Comus (1890; Project Gutenberg #19819). Introductory essay on the mask and on Comus by Samuel Thurber, Milton's Minor Poems (1901; Project Gutenberg #31706).

  1. Stanza 4, line 1 starry threshold, etc. Comp. Virgil: "The sire of gods and monarch of men summons a council to the starry chamber" (sideream in sedem), Aen. x. 2.
  2. Stanza 4, line 2 mansion, abode. Trench points out that this word denotes strictly "a place of tarrying," which might be for a longer or a shorter time: hence 'a resting-place.' Comp. John, xiv. 2, "In my Father's house are many mansions"; and Il Pens. 93, "Her mansion in this fleshly nook." The word has now lost the notion of tarrying, and is applied to a large and important dwelling-house. where, in which: the antecedent is separated from the relative, a frequent construction in Milton (comp. lines 66, 821, etc.). So in Latin, where the grammatical connection would generally be sufficiently indicated by the inflection. shapes ... spirits. An instance of the manner in which Milton endows spiritual beings with personality without making them too distinct. "Of all the poets who have introduced into their works the agency of supernatural beings Milton has succeeded best" (Macaulay). We see this in Par. Lost (e.g. ii. 666). Compare the use of the word 'shape' (Lat. umbra) in l. 207: also L'Alleg. 4, "horrid shapes and shrieks"; and Il Pens. 6, "fancies fond with gaudy shapes possess." Milton's use of the demonstrative those in this line is noteworthy; comp. "that last infirmity of noble mind," Lyc. 71: it implies that the reference is to something well known, and that further particularisation is needless.
  3. Stanza 4, line 3 insphered. 'Sphere,' with its derivatives 'sphery,' 'insphere,' and 'unsphere' (Il Pens. 88), is used by Milton with a literal reference to the cosmical framework as a whole (see Hymn Nat. 48) or to some portion of it. In Shakespeare 'sphere' occurs in the wider sense of 'the path in which anything moves,' and it is to this metaphorical use of the word that we owe such phrases as 'a person's sphere of life,' 'sphere of action,' etc. See also Comus, 112-4, 241-3, 1021; Arc. 62-7; Par. Lost, v. 618; where there are references to the music of the spheres.
  4. Stanza 4, line 4 mild: an attributive of the whole clause, 'regions of calm and serene air.' calm and serene. These are not mere synonyms: the Lat. serenus = bright or unclouded, so that the two epithets are to be respectively contrasted with 'smoke' and 'stir' (line 5); 'calm' being opposed to 'stir' and 'serene' to 'smoke.' Compare Homer's description of the seat of the gods: "Not by wind is it shaken, nor ever wet with rain, nor doth the snow come nigh thereto, but most clear air is spread about it cloudless, and the white light floats over it," Odyssey, vi.: comp. note, l. 977.
  5. Stanza 4, line 5 this dim spot. The Spirit describes the Earth as it appears to those immortal shapes whose presence he has just quitted.
  6. Stanza 4, line 6 There are here two attributive clauses: "which men call Earth" and "(in which) men strive," etc. low-thoughted care; narrow-minded anxiety, care about earthly things. Comp. the form of the adjective 'low-browed,' L'Alleg. 8: both epithets are borrowed by Pope in his Eloisa.
  7. Stanza 4, line 7 This line is attributive to 'men.' pestered ... pinfold, crowded together in this cramped space, the Earth. Pester, which has no connection with pest, is a shortened form of impester, Fr. empêtrer, to shackle a horse by the foot when it is at pasture. The radical sense is that of clogging (comp. Son. xii. 1); hence of crowding; and finally of annoyance or encumbrance of any kind. 'Pinfold' is strictly an enclosure in which stray cattle are pounded or shut up: etymologically, the word = pind-fold, a corruption of pound-fold. Comp. impound, sheep-fold, etc.
  8. Stanza 4, line 8 frail and feverish. Comp. "life's fitful fever" (Macbeth, iii. 2. 23). This line, like several of the adjacent ones, is alliterative.
  9. Stanza 4, line 9 crown that Virtue gives. This is Scriptural language: comp. Rev. iv. 4; 2 Tim. iv. 8, "Henceforth there is laid up for me the crown of righteousness."
  10. Stanza 4, line 10 this mortal change. In Milton's MS. line 7 was followed by the words, 'beyond the written date of mortal change,' i.e. beyond, or after, man's appointed time to die. These words were struck out, but we may suppose that the words 'mortal change' in line 10 have a similar meaning. Milton frequently uses 'mortal' in the sense of 'liable to death,' and hence 'human' as opposed to 'divine': the mortal change is therefore 'the change which occurs to all human beings.' Comp. Job, xiv. 14: "all the days of my appointed time will I wait, till my change come": see also line 841. Prof. Masson takes it to mean 'this mortal state of life,' as distinguished from a future state of immortality. The Spirit uses 'this' as in line 8, in contrast with 'those,' line 2.
  11. Stanza 4, line 11 enthroned gods, etc. In allusion to Rev. iv. 4, "And upon the thrones I saw four and twenty elders sitting, arrayed in white garments; and on their heads crowns of gold." Milton frequently speaks of the inhabitants of heaven as enthroned. The accent here falls on the first syllable of the word.
  12. Stanza 4, line 12 Yet some there be, etc.: 'Although men are generally so exclusively occupied with the cares of this life, there are nevertheless a few who aspire,' etc. Be is here purely indicative. This usage is frequent in Elizabethan English, and still survives in parts of England. Comp. Lines on Univ. Carrier, ii. 25, where it occurs in a similar phrase, "there be that say 't": also lines 519, 668. It is employed to refer to a number of persons or things, regarded as a class. by due steps, i.e. by the steps that are due or appointed: comp. 'due feet,' Il Pens. 155. Due, duty, and debt are all from Lat. debitus, owed.
  13. Stanza 4, line 13 their just hands. 'Just' belongs to the predicate: 'to lay their just hands' = to lay their hands with justice. golden key. Comp. Matt. xvi. 19, "I will give unto thee the keys of the kingdom of heaven"; also Lyc. 111: "Two massy keys he bore of metals twain (The golden opes, the iron shuts amain)."
  14. Stanza 4, line 15 errand: comp. Par. Lost, iii. 652, "One of the seven Who in God's presence, nearest to his throne, Stand ready at command, and are his eyes That run through all the Heavens, or down to the Earth Bear his swift errands": also vii. 579. but for such, i.e. unless it were for such.
  15. Stanza 4, line 16 'I would not sully the purity of my heavenly garments with the noisome vapour of this sin-corrupted earth.' ambrosial, heavenly; also used by Milton in the sense of 'conferring immortality': comp. l. 840; Par. Lost, ii. 245; iv. 219, "blooming ambrosial fruit." 'Ambrosial,' like 'amaranthus' (Lyc. 149), is cognate with the Sanskrit amríta, undying; and is applied by Homer to the hair of the gods: similarly in Tennyson's Oenone, 174: see also In Memoriam, lxxxvi. Ben Jonson (Neptune's Triumph) has 'ambrosian hands,' i.e. hands fit for a deity. Ambrosia was the food of the gods. weeds: now used chiefly in the phrase "widow's weeds," i.e. mourning garment. Milton and Shakespeare use it in the general sense of garment or covering: in the lines On the Death of a Fair Infant, it is applied to the human body itself; comp. also M. N. D. ii. 1. 255, "Weed wide enough to wrap a fairy in." See also Comus, 189, 390.
  16. Stanza 4, line 18 But to my task, i.e. but I must proceed to my task: see l. 1012.
  17. Stanza 4, line 19 every ... each. It is usual to write every ... every, or each ... each, but Milton occasionally uses 'every' and 'each' together: comp. l. 311 and Lyc. 93, "every gust ... off each beaked promontory." Every denotes each without exception, and can now only be used with reference to more than two objects; each may refer to two or more.
  18. Stanza 4, line 20 by lot, etc. When Saturn (Kronos) was dethroned, his empire of the universe was distributed amongst his three sons, Jupiter ('high' Jove), Neptune (the god of the Sea), and Pluto ('nether' or Stygian Jove). In Iliad xv. Neptune (Poseidon) says: "For three brethren are we, and sons of Kronos, whom Rhea bare ... And in three lots are all things divided, and each drew a domain of his own, and to me fell the hoary sea, to be my habitation for ever, when we shook the lots." nether, lower: comp. the phrase 'the upper and the nether lip,' and the name Netherlands. Hell, the abode of Pluto, is called by Milton 'the nether empire' (Par. Lost, ii. 295). The form nethermost (Par. Lost, ii. 955) is, like aftermost and foremost, a double superlative.
  19. Stanza 4, line 21 sea-girt isles. Ben Jonson calls Britain a 'sea-girt isle': comp. l. 27. Isle is the M.E. ile, in which form the s has been dropped: it is from O.F. isle, Lat. insula. It is therefore distinct from island, where an s has, by confusion, been inserted. Island = M.E. iland, A.S. igland (ig = island: land = land). In line 50 Milton wrote 'iland.'
  20. Stanza 4, line 22 like to rich and various gems, etc. Shakespeare describes England as a 'precious stone set in the silver sea,' Richard II. ii. 1. 46: he also speaks of Heaven as being inlayed with stars, Cym. v. 5. 352; M. of V. v. 1. 59, "Look how the floor of heaven Is thick inlaid with patines of bright gold." Compare also Par. Lost, iv. 700, where Milton refers to the ground as having a rich inlay of flowers. But for its inlay of islands the sea would be bare or unadorned. like: here followed by the preposition to, and having its proper force as an adjective: comp. Il Pens. 9. Whether like is used as an adjective or an adverb, the preposition is now usually omitted: comp. l. 57.
  21. Stanza 4, line 24 to grace, i.e. to show favour to: a clause of purpose.
  22. Stanza 4, line 25 By course commits, etc., i.e. "In regular distribution he commits to each his distinct government." several: separate or distinct. Radically several is from the verb sever: it is now used only with plural nouns.
  23. Stanza 4, line 26 sapphire. This colour is again associated with the sea in line 29: see note there.
  24. Stanza 4, line 27 little tridents, in contrast with that of Neptune, who, "with his trident touched the stars" (Neptune's Triumph, Proteus' Song, Ben Jonson).
  25. Stanza 4, line 28 greatest and the best. Comp. Shakespeare's eulogy in Rich. II. ii. 1: also Ben Jonson's "Albion, Prince of all his Isles," Neptune's Triumph, Apollo's Song.
  26. Stanza 4, line 29 quarters, divides into distinct regions. Comp. Dryden, Georg. I. 208: "Sailors quarter'd Heaven, and found a name For every fixt and ev'ry wandering star." Some would take the word as strictly denoting division into four parts: "at that time the island was actually divided into four separate governments: for besides those at London and Edinburgh, there were Lords President of the North and of Wales." (Keightley). blue-haired deities. These must be distinct from the tributary gods who wield their little tridents (line 27), otherwise the thought would ill accord with the complimentary nature of lines 30-36. Regarding the epithet 'blue-haired' Masson asks: "Can there be a recollection of blue as the British colour, inherited from the old times of blue-stained Britons who fought with Caesar? Green-haired is the usual epithet for Neptune and his subordinates": in Spenser, for example, the sea-nymphs have long green hair. But Ovid expressly calls the sea-deities caerulei dii, and Neptune caeruleus deus, thus associating blue with the sea.
  27. Stanza 4, line 30 'And all this region that looks towards the West (i.e. Wales) is entrusted to a noble peer of great integrity and power.' The peer referred to is the Earl of Bridgewater. As Lord President he was entrusted with the civil and military administration of Wales and the four English counties of Gloucester, Worcester, Hereford, and Shropshire. That he was a nobleman of high character is shown by the fact that from 1617, when he was nominated one of "his Majestie's Counsellors," he had continued to serve in various important public and private offices. On his monument there is the following: "He was a profound Scholar, an able Statesman, and a good Christian: he was a dutiful Son to his Mother the Church of England in her persecution, as well as in her great splendour; a loyal Subject to his Sovereign in those worst of times, when it was accounted treason not to be a traitor. As he lived 70 years a pattern of virtue, so he died an example of patience and piety." falling sun: Lat. sol occidens. Orient and occident (lit. 'rising' and 'falling') are frequently used to denote the East and the West.
  28. Stanza 4, line 31 mickle (A.S. micel) great. From this word comes much. 'Mickle' and 'muckle' are current in Scotland in the sense of great. Comp. Rom. and Jul. ii. 3. 15, "O, mickle is the powerful grace that lies In herbs," etc.
  29. Stanza 4, line 33 An old and haughty nation. The Welsh are Kelts, an Aryan people who probably first entered Britain about B.C. 500: they are therefore rightly spoken of as an old nation. Compare Ben Jonson's piece For the Honour of Wales: "I is not come here to taulk of Brut, From whence the Welse does take his root," etc. That they were haughty and 'proud in arms' the Romans found, and after them the Saxons: the latter never really held more than the counties of Monmouth and Hereford. In the reign of Edward I. attempts were made by that king to induce the Welsh to come to terms, but the answer of the Barons was: "We dare not submit to Edward, nor will we suffer our prince to do so, nor do homage to strangers, whose tongue, ways and laws we know not of: we have only raised war in defence of our lands, laws and rights." By a statute of Henry VIII. this 'haughty' people were put in possession of the same rights and liberties as the English. proud in arms: this is Virgil's belloque superbum, Aen. i. 21 (Warton).
  30. Stanza 4, line 34 nursed in princely lore, brought up in a manner worthy of their high position. It is to be noted that the Bridgewater family was by birth distantly connected with the royal family. Milton may allude merely to their connection with the court. Lore is cognate with learn.
  31. Stanza 4, line 35 their father's state. This probably refers to the actual ceremonies connected with the installation of the Earl as Lord President. The old sense of 'state' is 'chair of state': comp. Arc. 81, and Jonson's Hymenaei, "And see where Juno ... Displays her glittering state and chair."
  32. Stanza 4, line 36 new-intrusted, an adjective compounded of a participle and a simple adverb, new being = newly; comp. 'smooth-dittied,' l. 86. Contrast the form of the epithet "blue-haired," where the compound adjective is formed as if from a noun, "blue-hair": comp. "rushy-fringed," l. 890. Strictly speaking, the Earl's power was not 'new-intrusted,' though it was newly assumed. See Introduction.
  33. Stanza 4, line 37 perplexed, interwoven, entangled (Lat. plecto, to plait or twist). The word is here used literally and is therefore applicable to inanimate objects. The accent is on the first syllable.
  34. Stanza 4, line 38 horror. This word is meant not merely to indicate terror, but also to describe the appearance of the paths. Horror is from Lat. horrere, to bristle, and may be rendered 'shagginess' or 'ruggedness,' just as horrid, l. 429, means bristling or rugged. Comp. Par. Lost, i. 563, "a horrid front Of dreadful length, and dazzling arms." shady brows: this may refer to the trees and bushes overhanging the paths, as the brow overhangs the eyes.
  35. Stanza 4, line 39 Threats: not current as a verb. forlorn, now used only as an adjective, is the past participle of the old verb forleosen, to lose utterly: the prefix for has an intensive force, as in forswear; but in the latter word the sense of from is more fully preserved in the prefix. See note, l. 234.
  36. Stanza 4, line 40 tender age. Lady Alice Egerton was about fourteen years of age; the two brothers were younger than she.
  37. Stanza 4, line 41 But that, etc. Grammatically, but may be regarded as a subordinative conjunction = 'unless (it had happened) that I was despatched': or, taking it in its original prepositional sense, we may regard it as governing the substantive clause, 'that ... guard.' quick command: the adjective has the force of an adverb, quick commands being commands that are to be carried quickly. sovran, supreme. This is Milton's spelling of the modern word sovereign, in which the g is due to the mistaken notion that the last syllable of the word is cognate with reign. The word is from Lat. superanum = chief: comp. l. 639.
  38. Stanza 4, line 43 And listen why; sc. 'I was despatched.' The language of lines 43, 44 is suggested by Horace's Odes, iii. 1, 2: "Favete linguis; carmina non prius Audita ... canto." The poet implies that the plot of his mask is original: it is not (he says) to be found in any ancient or modern song or tale that was ever recited either in the 'hall' (= banqueting-hall) or in the 'bower' (= private chamber). Or 'hall' and 'bower' may denote respectively the room of the lord and that of his lady.
  39. Stanza 4, line 46 Milton in his usual significant manner (comp. L'Allegro and Il Penseroso), proceeds to invent a genealogy for Comus. The mask is designed to celebrate the victory of Purity and Reason over Desire and Enchantment. Comus, who represents the latter, must therefore spring from parents representing the pleasure of man's lower nature and the misuse of man's higher powers on behalf of falsehood and impurity. These parents are the wine-god Bacchus and the sorceress Circe. The former, mated with Love, is the father of Mirth (see L'Allegro); but, mated with the cunning Circe, his offspring is a voluptuary whose gay exterior and flattering speech hide his dangerously seductive and magical powers. He bears no resemblance, therefore, to Comus as represented in Ben Jonson's Pleasure reconciled to Virtue, in which mask "Comus" and "The Belly" are throughout synonymous. In the Agamemnon of Aeschylus, Comus is a "drinker of human blood"; in Philostratus, he is a rose-crowned wine-bibber; in Dekker he is "the clerk of gluttony's kitchen"; in Massinger he is "the god of pleasure"; and in the work of Erycius Puteanus he is a graceful reveller, the genius of love and cheerfulness. Prof. Masson says, "Milton's Comus is a creation of his own, for which he was as little indebted intrinsically to Puteanus as to Ben Jonson. For the purpose of his masque at Ludlow Castle he was bold enough to add a brand-new god, no less, to the classic Pantheon, and to import him into Britain." Bacchus, the god who taught men the preparation of wine. He is the Greek Dionysus, who, on one of his voyages, hired a vessel belonging to some Tyrrhenian pirates: these men resolved to sell him as a slave. Thereupon, he changed the mast and oars of the ship into serpents and the sailors into dolphins. The meeting of Bacchus with Circe is Milton's own invention; in the Odyssey it is Ulysses who lights upon her island: "And we came to the isle Ææan, where dwelt Circe of the braided tresses, an awful goddess of mortal speech, own sister to the wizard Æetes," Odys. x. from out, etc. Comp. Par. Lost, v. 345. 'From out' has the same force as the more common 'out from.'
  40. Stanza 4, line 47 misusèd, abused. The prefix mis- was very generally used by Milton; e.g. mislike, misdeem, miscreated, misthought (all obsolete).
  41. Stanza 4, line 48 After the Tuscan mariners transformed, i.e. after the transformation of the Tuscan mariners (see Ovid, Met. iii.). They are called Tuscan, because Tyrrhenia in Central Italy was named Etruria or Tuscia by the Romans: Etruria includes modern Tuscany. This grammatical construction is common in Latin; a passive participle combined with a substantive answering to an English verbal or abstract noun connected with another noun by the preposition of, and used to denote a fact in the past; e.g. "since created man" (P. L. i. 573) = since the creation of man: "this loss recovered" (P. L. ii. 21) = the recovery of this loss.
  42. Stanza 4, line 49 as the winds listed; at the pleasure of the winds: comp. John, iii. 8, "the wind bloweth where it listeth"; Lyc. 123. The verb list is, in older English, generally used impersonally, and in Chaucer we find 'if thee lust' or 'if thee list' = if it please thee. The word survives in the adjective listless of which the older form was lustless: the noun lust has lost its original and wider sense (which it still has in German), and now signifies 'longing desire.'
  43. Stanza 4, line 50 On Circe's island fell. Circe's island = Aeaea, off the coast of Latium. Circe was the daughter of Helios (the Sun) by the ocean-nymph Perse. On 'island,' see note, l. 21; and with this use of the verb fall comp. the Latin incidere in. The sudden introduction of the interrogative clause in this line is an example of the figure of speech called anadiplosis.
  44. Stanza 4, line 51 charmèd cup, i.e. liquor that has been charmed or rendered magical. Charms are incantations or magic verses (Lat. carmina): comp. lines 526 and 817. Grammatically, 'cup' is the object of 'tasted.'
  45. Stanza 4, line 52 Whoever tasted lost, i.e. who tasted (he) lost. In this construction whoever must precede both verbs; Shakespeare frequently uses who in this sense, and Milton occasionally: comp. Son. xii. 12, "who loves that must first be wise and good." See Abbott, § 251. lost his upright shape. In Odyssey x. we read: "So Circe led them (followers of Ulysses) in and set them upon chairs and high seats, and made them a mess of cheese and barley-meal and yellow honey with Pramnian wine, and mixed harmful drugs with the food to make them utterly forget their own country. Now when she had given them the cup and they had drunk it off, presently she smote them with a wand, and in the styes of the swine she penned them. So they had the head and voice, the bristles and the shape of swine, but their mind abode even as of old. Thus were they penned there weeping, and Circe flung them acorns and mast and fruit of the cornel tree to eat, whereon wallowing swine do always batten." (Butcher and Lang's translation.)
  46. Stanza 4, line 54 clustering locks: comp. l. 608. Milton here pictures the Theban Bacchus, a type of manly beauty, having his head crowned with a wreath of vine and ivy: both of these plants were sacred to the god. Comp. L'Alleg. 16, "ivy-crowned Bacchus"; Par. Lost, iv. 303; Sams. Agon. 569.
  47. Stanza 4, line 55 his blithe youth, i.e. his fresh young figure.
  48. Stanza 4, line 57 'A son much like his father, but more like his mother.' This may indicate that it is upon Comus's character as a sorcerer rather than as a reveller that the story of the mask depends. Comp. Masque of Hymen: "Much of the father's face, More of the mother's grace."
  49. Stanza 4, line 58 Comus: see note, l. 46. The Greek word +kômos+ denoted a revel or merry-making; afterwards it came to mean the personification of riotous mirth, the god of Revel. Hence also the word comedy. In classical mythology the individuality of Comus is not well defined: this enabled Milton more readily to endow him with entirely new characteristics.
  50. Stanza 4, line 59 frolic: an instance of the original use of the word as an adjective; comp. L'Alleg. 18, "frolic wind"; Tennyson's Ulysses, "a frolic welcome." It is now chiefly used as a noun or a verb, and a new adjective, frolicsome, has taken its place; from this, again, comes the noun frolicsomeness. Frolic is from the Dutch, and cognate with German fröhlich, so that lic in 'frolic' corresponds to ly in such words as cleanly, godly, etc. of: this use of the preposition may be compared with the Latin genitive in such phrases as æger animi = sick of soul; of = 'because of' or 'in respect of.'
  51. Stanza 4, line 60 Roving the Celtic and Iberian fields, i.e. roving through Gaul and Spain. 'Rove' here governs an accusative: comp. Lyc. 173, "walked the waves"; Par. Lost, i. 521, "roamed the utmost Isles."
  52. Stanza 4, line 61 betakes him. The pronoun has here a reflective force: in Elizabethan English, and still more often in Early English, this use of the simple pronouns is common (see Abbott, § 223). Compare l. 163. ominous; literally = full of omens or portents: comp. 'monstrous' = full of monsters (Lyc. 158); also l. 79. 'Ominous' has now acquired the sense of 'ill-omened'; compare the acquired sense of 'hapless,' 'unfortunate,' etc.
  53. Stanza 4, line 65 orient, bright. The Lat. oriens = rising; hence (from being applied to the sun) = eastern (l. 30); and hence generally 'bright' or 'shining': comp. Par. Lost, i. 546, "With orient colours waving."
  54. Stanza 4, line 66 drouth of Phoebus, i.e. thirst caused by the heat of the sun. Phoebus is Apollo, the Sun-god. Compare l. 928, where 'drouth' = want of rain; the more usual spelling is drought. which: see note, l. 2. 'Which' is here object of 'taste,' and refers to 'liquor.'
  55. Stanza 4, line 67 fond, foolish (its primary sense). Fonned was the participle of an old verb fonnen, to be foolish. The word is now used to express great liking or affection: the idea of folly being almost entirely lost. Chaucer has fonne, a fool: comp. Il Pens. 6, "fancies fond"; Lyc. 56, "I fondly dream"; Sams. Agon. 1682, "So fond are mortal men."
  56. Stanza 4, line 68 Soon as, etc., i.e. as soon as the magical draught produces its effect. In line 66 as is temporal. potion. Radically, potion = a drink, but it is generally used in the sense of a medicated or poisonous draught. Poison is the same word through the French.
  57. Stanza 4, line 69 Express resemblance of the gods. Comp. Shakespeare: "What a piece of work is man! ... in action how like an angel, in apprehension, how like a god!" See also Par. Lost, iii. 44, "human face divine."
  58. Stanza 4, line 71 ounce. This is the Felis uncia, allied to the panther and the cheetah. Some connect it with the Persian yúz, panther.
  59. Stanza 4, line 72 All other parts, etc. In the Odyssey (see note on l. 52) the bodies of those transformed by Circe were entirely changed; here only the head. As one editor observes, this suited the convenience of the performers who were to appear on the stage in masks (see Stage direction, l. 92-3). Grammatically, line 72 is an example of the absolute construction, common in Latin. The noun ('parts') is neither the subject nor the object of a verb, but is used along with some attributive adjunct--generally a participle ('remaining')--to serve the purpose of an adverb or adverbial clause. The noun (or pronoun) is usually said to be the nominative absolute; but, in the case of pronouns, Milton uses the nominative and the objective indifferently. In Old English the dative was used.
  60. Stanza 4, line 73 perfect, complete (Lat. perfectus, done thoroughly).
  61. Stanza 4, line 74 Not once perceive, etc. This was not the case with the followers of Ulysses: see note, l. 52.
  62. Stanza 4, line 76 friends and native home forgot. Circe's cup has here the effect ascribed to the lotus in Odyssey ix. "Now whosoever of them did eat the honey-sweet fruit of the lotus had no more wish to bring tidings nor to come back, but there he chose to abide with the lotus-eating men, ever feeding on the lotus and forgetful of his homeward way." In Tennyson's Lotos-Eaters there is no forgetfulness of friends and home: "Sweet it was to dream of Fatherland, Of child, and wife and slave." Masson also refers to Plato's ethical application of the story (Rep. viii.); "Plato speaks of the moral lotophagus, or youth steeped in sensuality, as accounting his very viciousness a developed manhood, and the so-called virtues but signs of rusticity." Compare also Spenser, F. Q. ii. 12. 86, "One above the rest in speciall, That had an hog been late, ... did him miscall, That had from hoggish form him brought to natural."
  63. Stanza 4, line 77 sensual sty: see note on l. 52. To those who, "with low-thoughted care," are "unmindful of the crown that Virtue gives," the world becomes little better than a sensual sty. This line is adverbial to forget.
  64. Stanza 4, line 78 favoured: compare Lat. gratus = favoured (adj.).
  65. Stanza 4, line 79 adventurous, full of risks. The current sense of 'adventurous,' applied only to persons, is "enterprising." See l. 61, 609. glade: strictly, an open space in a wood, and hence applied (as here) to the wood itself. It is cognate with glow and glitter, and its fundamental sense is 'a passage for light' (Skeat).
  66. Stanza 4, line 80 glancing star, a shooting star. Comp. Par. Lost, iv. 556: "Swift as a shooting star In autumn thwarts the night." The rhythm of the line and the prevalence of sibilants suit the sense.
  67. Stanza 4, line 81 convoy: comp. Par. Lost, vi. 752, "convoyed By four cherubic shapes." It is another form of convey (Lat. con = together, via = a way).
  68. Stanza 4, line 83 sky-robes: the "ambrosial weeds" of line 16. Iris' woof, material dyed in rainbow colours. The goddess Iris was a personification of the rainbow: comp. l. 992 and Par. Lost, xi. 244, "Iris had dipped the woof." Etymologically, woof is connected with web and weave: it is short for on-wef = on-web, i.e. the cross threads laid on the warp of a loom.
  69. Stanza 4, line 84 weeds: see note, l. 16.
  70. Stanza 4, line 85 That to the service, etc. The part of the Spirit was acted by Lawes, first in "sky-robes," then in shepherd dress. In the dedication of Comus by Lawes to Lord Brackley (anonymous edition of 1637), he alludes to the favours that had been shown him by the Bridgewater family. In the above lines Milton compliments Lawes and enables Lawes to compliment the Earl (see Introduction).
  71. Stanza 4, line 86 smooth-dittied: sweetly-worded. 'Ditty' (Lat. dictatum) strictly denotes the words of a song as distinct from the musical accompaniment; it is now applied to any little piece intended to be sung: comp. Lyc. 32. For a similar panegyric on Lawes' musical genius compare Son. xiii. The musical alliteration in lines 86-88 should be noted.
  72. Stanza 4, line 87 knows to still, etc.: comp. Lyc. 10, "he knew Himself to sing."
  73. Stanza 4, line 88 nor of less faith, etc.; i.e. he is not less faithful than he is skilful in music; and from the nature of his occupation he is most likely to be at hand should any emergency arise.
  74. Stanza 4, line 92 viewless, invisible: comp. The Passion, 50, "viewless wing"; Par. Lost, iii. 518. Masson calls this a peculiarly Shakespearian word: see M. for M. iii. 1. 124, "To be imprisoned in the viewless winds." The word is obsolete, but poets use great liberty in the formation of adjectives in -less: comp. Shelley's Sensitive Plant, 'windless clouds.' See note, l. 574. charming-rod: see note, l. 52: also l. 653. rout, a disorderly crowd. The word is also used in the sense of 'defeat,' and is cognate with route, rote, and rut. All come from Lat. ruptus, broken: a 'rout' is the breaking up of a crowd, or a crowd broken up; a 'route' is a way broken through a forest; 'rote' is a beaten track; and a 'rut' is a track left by a wheel. See Lyc. 61, "by the rout that made the hideous roar."
  75. Stanza 6, line 1 star ... fold, the evening star, Hesperus, an appellation of the planet Venus: comp. Lyc. 30. As the morning star (called by Shakespeare the 'unfolding star'), it is called Phosphorus or Lucifer, the light-bringer. Hence Tennyson's allusion: "Bright Phosphor, fresher for the night,... Sweet Hesper-Phosphor, double name."-- In Memoriam, cxxi. Lines 93-144 are in rhymed couplets, and consist for the most part of eight syllables each. The prevailing accentuation is iambic.
  76. Stanza 6, line 2 top of heaven, etc., i.e. is far above the horizon. So in Lyc. 31, it is said to slope "toward heaven's descent," i.e. to sink towards the horizon. Comp. Virgil, Aen. ii. 250, "Round rolls the sky, and on comes Night from the ocean."
  77. Stanza 6, line 3 gilded car: Apollo, as the god of the Sun, rode in a golden chariot. Comp. Chaucer, Test. of Creseide, 208, "Phoebus' golden cart"; and "Phoebus' wain," line 190.
  78. Stanza 6, line 4 his glowing axle doth allay. In the Hymn of the Nativity Milton alludes to the "burning axle-tree" of the sun: comp. Aen. iv. 482, "Atlas Axem umero torquet." There is here an allusion to the opinion of the ancients that the setting of the sun in the Atlantic Ocean was accompanied with a noise, as of the sea hissing (Todd). 'Allay' would thus denote 'quench' or 'cool.' His, in this line, = its. Its occurs only three times in Milton's poems, Od. Nat. 106; Par. Lost, i. 254; Par. Lost, iv. 813: the word is found also in Lawes' dedication of Comus. The word does not occur in English at all until the end of the sixteenth century, the possessive case of the neuter pronoun it and of the masculine he being his. This gave rise to confusion when the old gender system decayed, and the form its gradually came into use, until, by the end of the seventeenth century, it was in general use. Milton, however, scarcely recognised it, its place in his involved syntax being taken by the relative pronouns and other connectives, or by his, her, thereof, etc.
  79. Stanza 6, line 5 steep Atlantic stream. To the ancients the Ocean was the great stream that encompassed the earth: Iliad, xiv., "the deep-flowing Okeanos (+bathyrroos+)." With this use of 'steep' compare the phrase 'the high seas.'
  80. Stanza 6, line 6 slope sun, sun sunk beneath the horizon, so that the only rays visible shoot up into the sky. Slope = sloped; also used by Milton as an adverb = aslope (Par. Lost, iv. 591), and as a verb (Lyc. 31).
  81. Stanza 6, line 7 dusky. Milton first wrote 'northern.'
  82. Stanza 6, line 8 Pacing toward the other goal, etc. Comp. Psalm xix. 5: "The sun as a bridegroom cometh out of his chamber, and rejoiceth as a strong man to run a race."
  83. Stanza 6, line 10 The spirit of lines 102-144 may be contrasted with that of L'Allegro, 25-40. Both pieces are calls upon Mirth and Pleasure, and both are therefore suitably expressed in the same tripping measure and with many similarities of language. But the pleasures of L'Allegro begin with the sun-rise and yet are "unreproved"; those of Comus and his crew begin with the darkness and are "unreproved" only if "these dun shades will ne'er report" them. The "light fantastic toe" of the one is not the "tipsy dance" of the other; and the laughter and liberty that betoken the absence of "wrinkled Care" have nothing in common with the "midnight shout and revelry" that can be enjoyed only when Rigour, Advice, strict Age, and sour Severity have "gone to bed." The "quips and cranks" of L'Allegro have given way to the magic rites of Comus, and the wreathed smiles and dimples that adorn the face of innocent Mirth are ill replaced by the wine-dropping "rosy twine" of revelry.
  84. Stanza 6, line 12 jollity: has here its modern sense of boisterous mirth. In Milton occasionally the adjective 'jolly' (Fr. joli, pretty) has its primary sense of pleasing or festive.
  85. Stanza 6, line 13 Braid your locks with rosy twine; 'entwine your hair with wreaths of roses.'
  86. Stanza 6, line 14 dropping odours: comp. l. 862-3.
  87. Stanza 6, line 16 Advice ... scrupulous head. 'Advice,' now used chiefly to signify counsel given by another, was formerly used also of self-counsel or deliberation. See Chaucer, Prologue, 786, "granted him without more advice"; and comp. Shakespeare, M. of V. iv. 2. 6, "Bassanio upon more advice, Hath sent you here this ring"; also Par. Lost, ii. 376, "Advise, if this be worth Attempting," where 'advise' = consider. See also l. 755, note. Scrupulous = full of scruples, conscientious.
  88. Stanza 6, line 18 saws, sayings, maxims. Saw, say, and saga (a Norwegian legend) are cognate.
  89. Stanza 6, line 19 of purer fire, i.e. having a higher or diviner nature. (Or, as there is really no question of degree, we may render the phrase as = divine.) Compare the Platonic doctrine that each element had living creatures belonging to it, those of fire being the gods; similarly the Stoics held that whatever consisted of pure fire was divine, e.g. the stars: hence the additional significance of line 112.
  90. Stanza 6, line 20 the starry quire: an allusion to the music of the spheres; see lines 3, 1021. Pythagoras supposed that the planets emitted sounds proportional to their distances from the earth and formed a celestial concert too melodious to affect the "gross unpurgèd ear" of mankind: comp. l. 458 and Arc. 63-73. Shakespeare (M. of V. v. 1. 61) alludes to the music of the spheres: "There's not the smallest orb which thou behold'st But in his motion like an angel sings, Still quiring to the young-eyed cherubins," etc. Quire is a form of choir (Lat. chorus, a band of singers); in Greek tragedy the chorus was supposed to represent the sentiments of the audience. Quire (of paper) is a totally different word, probably derived from Lat. quatuor, four.
  91. Stanza 6, line 21 nightly watchful spheres. Milton elsewhere alludes to the stars keeping watch: "And all the spangled host keep watch in order bright," Hymn Nat. 21. 'Nightly,' used as an adjective in the sense of 'nocturnal': comp. Il Pens. 84, "To bless the doors from nightly harm"; Arc. 48, "nightly ill"; and Wordsworth's line: "The nightly hunter lifting up his eyes." Its ordinary sense is "night by night."
  92. Stanza 6, line 22 Lead in swift round. Comp. Arc. 71: "And the low world in measured motion draw, After the heavenly tune."
  93. Stanza 6, line 23 sounds, straits: A.S. sund, a strait of the sea, so called because it could be swum across. See Skeat, Etym. Dict. s.v.
  94. Stanza 6, line 24 to the moon, i.e. as affected by the moon. For similar uses of 'to,' comp. Lyc. 33, "tempered to the oaten flute"; Lyc. 44, "fanning their joyous leaves to thy soft lays." morrice. The waters quiver in the moonlight as if dancing. The morrice = a morris or Moorish dance, brought into Spain by the Moors, and thence introduced into England by John of Gaunt. We read also of a "morris-pike"--a weapon used by the Moors in Spain.
  95. Stanza 6, line 25 shelves, flat ledges of rock.
  96. Stanza 6, line 26 pert, lively. Here used in its radical sense (being a form of perk, smart): its modern sense is 'forward' or 'impertinent.' Skeat points out that perk and pert were both used as verbs; e.g. "perked up in a glistering grief," Henry VIII. ii. 3. 21: "how it (a child) speaks, and looks, and perts up the head," Beaumont and Fletcher's Knight of the Burning Pestle, i. 1. A similar change of k into t is seen in E. mate from M.E. make. dapper, quick (Du. dapper, Ger. tapfer, brave, quick). It is usual in the sense of 'neat.'
  97. Stanza 6, line 27 dimple. Dimple is a diminutive of dip, and cognate with dingle and dapple.
  98. Stanza 6, line 28 daisies trim: comp. L'Alleg. 75, "Meadows trim, with daisies pied"; Il Pens. 50, "trim gardens."
  99. Stanza 6, line 29 wakes, night-watches (A.S. niht-wacu, a night wake). The adjective wakeful (A.S. wacol) is the exact cognate of the Latin vigil. The word was applied to the vigil kept at the dedication of a church, then to the feast connected therewith, and finally to an evening merry-making. prove, test, judge of (Lat. probare). This is its sense in older writers and in the much-misunderstood phrase--"the exception proves the rule," which means that the exception is a test of the rule.
  100. Stanza 6, line 32 Venus now wakes, etc. Spenser, Brit. Ida, ii. 3, has "Night is Love's holyday." In this line wakens is used transitively, its object being 'Love.'
  101. Stanza 6, line 33 rights. Here used, as sometimes by Spenser, where modern usage requires rites (Lat. ritus, a custom): see l. 535.
  102. Stanza 6, line 34 daylight ... sin. Daylight makes sin by revealing it. Contrast the sentiment of Comus with that of Milton in Par. Lost, i. 500, "When night Darkens the streets, then wander forth the sons Of Belial."
  103. Stanza 6, line 35 dun shades: evidently suggested by Fairfax's Tasso, ix. 62, "The horrid darkness, and the shadows dun." 'Dun' is A.S. dunn, dark.
  104. Stanza 6, line 37 Cotytto, the goddess of Licentiousness: here called 'dark-veiled' because her midnight orgies were veiled in darkness. She was a Thracian divinity, and her worshippers were called Baptae ('sprinkled'), because the ceremony of initiation involved the sprinkling of warm water.
  105. Stanza 6, line 39 called, invoked. dragon-womb Of Stygian darkness. The Styx (= 'the abhorred') was the chief river in the lower world. Milton here speaks of darkness as something positive, ejected from the womb of Night, Night being represented as a monster of the lower regions: comp. Par. Lost, i. 63. The pronoun 'her' shows that 'womb' is here used in its strict sense, but in Par. Lost, i. 673, "in his womb was hid metallic ore," it has the more general sense of "interior": comp. the use of Lat. uterus, Aen. ii. 258, vii. 499. dragon: Shakespeare refers to the dragons or 'dragon car' of night, Cym. ii. 2. 48, "Swift, swift, you dragons of the night"; Tro. and Cress. v. 8. 17, "The dragon wing of night o'erspreads the earth"; see also Il Pens. 59, "Cynthia checks her dragon yoke."
  106. Stanza 6, line 40 spets, a form of spits (as spettle for spittle).
  107. Stanza 6, line 41 one blot, i.e. a universal blot: comp. Macbeth, ii. 2. 63. Milton first wrote, "And makes a blot of nature."
  108. Stanza 6, line 42 Stay, here used causally = check. The radical sense of the word is 'to support,' as in the substantive stay and its plural stays. ebon, black as ebony. Ebony is so called because it is hard as a stone (Heb. eben, a stone); and the wood being of a dark colour, the name has become a synonym both for hardness and for blackness.
  109. Stanza 6, line 43 Hecat', i.e. Hecatè (as in line 535): a mysterious Thracian divinity, afterwards regarded as the goddess of witchcraft: for these reasons a fit companion for Cotytto and a fit patroness of Comus. Jonson calls her "the mistress of witches." She was supposed to send forth at night all kinds of demons and phantoms, and to wander about with the souls of the dead and amidst the howling of dogs.
  110. Stanza 6, line 44 utmost end, full completion. Compare L'Alleg. 109, "the corn That ten day-labourers could not end," where 'end' = 'complete.'
  111. Stanza 6, line 45 dues: see note, l. 12.
  112. Stanza 6, line 46 blabbing eastern scout, i.e. the tale-telling spy that comes from the East, viz. Morning.
  113. Stanza 6, line 47 nice; hard to please, fastidious: "a finely chosen epithet, expressing at once curious and squeamish" (Hurd). It is used by Comus in contempt: comp. ii. Henry IV. iv. 1, "Hence, therefore, thou nice crutch"; and see the index to the Globe Shakespeare. the Indian steep. In his Elegia Tertia Milton represents the sun as the "light-bringing king" whose home is on the shores of the Ganges (i.e. in the far East): comp. "the Indian mount," Par. Lost, i. 781, and Tennyson's In Memoriam, xxvi., "ere yet the morn Breaks hither over Indian seas."
  114. Stanza 6, line 48 cabined loop-hole: an allusion to the first glimpse of dawn, i.e. the peep of day. Comp. "Out of her window close she blushing peeps," said of the morning (P. Fletcher's Eclogues), as if the first rays of the sun struggled through some small aperture. 'Cabined,' literally 'belonging to a cabin,' and therefore small.
  115. Stanza 6, line 49 tell-tale Sun. Compare Spenser, Brit. Ida, ii. 3, "The thick-locked boughs shut out the tell-tale sun, For Venus hated his all-blabbing light." Shakespeare refers to "the tell-tale day" (R. of L. 806). In Odyssey, viii., we read how Helios (the sun) kept watch and informed Vulcan of Venus's love for Mars. descry, etc., i.e. make known our hidden rites. 'Descry' is here used in its primary sense = describe: both words are from Lat. describere, to write fully. In Milton and Shakespeare 'descry' also occurs in the sense of 'to reconnoitre.'
  116. Stanza 6, line 50 solemnity, ceremony, rite. The word is from Lat. sollus, complete, and annus, a year; 'solemn' = solennis = sollennis. Hence the changes of meaning: (1) recurring at the end of a completed year; (2) usual; (3) religious, for sacred festivals recur at stated intervals; (4) that which is not to be lightly undertaken, i.e. serious or important.
  117. Stanza 6, line 51 knit hands, etc. Comp. Masque of Hymen: "Now, now begin to set Your spirits in active heat; And, since your hands are met, Instruct your nimble feet, In motions swift and meet, The happy ground to beat."
  118. Stanza 6, line 52 light fantastic round: comp. L'Alleg. 34, "Come, and trip it, as you go, On the light fantastic toe." A round is a dance or 'measure' in which the dancers join hands, 'Fantastic' = full of fancy, unrestrained. So Shakespeare uses it of that which has merely been imagined, and has not yet happened. It is now used in the sense of grotesque. Fancy is a form of fantasy (Greek phantasia). At this point in the mask Comus and his rout dance a measure, after which he again speaks, but in a different strain. The change is marked by a return to blank verse: the previous lines are mostly in octosyllabic couplets.

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