Disobedience

A. A. Milne (1882–1956) · 1924

dactylic dimeter · 61 lines · from When We Were Very Young

James JamesMorrison MorrisonWeatherby George DupreeTook greatCare of his Mother,Though he was only three.James JamesSaid to his Mother,“Mother,” he said, said he;“You must never go down to the end of the town, if you don’t go down with me.”

James JamesMorrison’s MotherPut on a golden gown,James JamesMorrison’s MotherDrove to the end of the town.James JamesMorrison’s MotherSaid to herself, said she:“I can get right down to the end of the town and be back in time for tea.”

King JohnPut up a notice,“LOST or STOLEN or STRAYED!JAMES JAMESMORRISON’S MOTHERSEEMS TO HAVE BEEN MISLAID.LAST SEENWANDERING VAGUELY:QUITE OF HER OWN ACCORD,SHE TRIED TO GET DOWN TO THE END OF THE TOWN—FORTY SHILLINGS REWARD!”

James JamesMorrison Morrison(Commonly known as Jim)Told hisOther relationsNot to go blaming him.James JamesSaid to his Mother,“Mother,” he said, said he;“You must never go down to the end of the town without consulting me.”

James JamesMorrison’s motherHasn’t been heard of since.King JohnSaid he was sorry,So did the Queen and Prince.King John(Somebody told me)Said to a man he knew:“If people go down to the end of the town, well, what can anyone do?”

(Now then, very softly)

J.J.M. M.W. G. Du P.Took greatC/o his M*****Though he was only 3.J.J.Said to his M*****“M*****,” he said, said he:“You-must-never-go-down-to-the-end-of-the-town-if-you-don’t-go-down- with ME!”

Words in this poem

drove n.
A collection of cattle driven, or cattle collected for driving; a number of animals, as oxen, sheep, or swine, driven in a body. [AS. draf, fr. drifan to drive. See Drive.]
consulting a.
That consults. Consulting physician (Med.), a physician who consults with the attending practitioner regarding any case of disease.
somebody n.
A person unknown or uncertain; a person indeterminate; some person.
anyone n.
One taken at random rather than by selection; anybody.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Disobedience is in the public domain. This text is taken from When We Were Very Young, Project Gutenberg ebook #70271; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: A. A. Milne, Disobedience, in When We Were Very Young (1924), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #70271, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/milne-when-we-were-very-young/disobedience.html, id L27189.

Form and metre

Disobedience is 61 lines in 7 stanzas. The metre is dactylic dimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%).

See other poems in dactylic dimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A-B-CBACBB jamesA · morrison · dupreeB · great · motherC · threeB · jamesA · motherC · heB · meB
  2. 2 ABCABCABDD jamesA · motherB · gownC · jamesA · motherB · townC · jamesA · motherB · sheD · teaD
  3. 3 --A--A--BB john · notice · strayedA · james · mother · mislaidA · seen · vaguely · accordB · rewardB
  4. 4 A-B--BA-CC jamesA · morrison · jimB · his · relations · himB · jamesA · mother · heC · meC
  5. 5 --AB-AB-CC james · mother · sinceA · johnB · sorry · princeA · johnB · me · knewC · doC
  6. 7 ABC-BAABCC — · mB · pC · great · mB · — · — · mB · heC · meC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against dactylic dimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
James James2··
Morrison Morrison6/˘˘/˘˘
Weatherby George Dupree6/˘˘·˘/
Took great2··
Care of his Mother,5···/˘
Though he was only three.6···/˘·
James James2··
Said to his Mother,5···/˘
“Mother,” he said, said he;6/˘····
“You must never go down to the end of the town, if you don’t go down with me.”18··/···············
James James2··
Morrison’s Mother5/˘˘/˘
Put on a golden gown,6···/˘·
James James2··
Morrison’s Mother5/˘˘/˘
Drove to the end of the town.7·······
James James2··
Morrison’s Mother5/˘˘/˘
Said to herself, said she:6··˘/··
“I can get right down to the end of the town and be back in time for tea.”18··················
King John2··
Put up a notice,5···/˘
“LOST or STOLEN or STRAYED!6··/˘··
JAMES JAMES2··
MORRISON’S MOTHER5/˘˘/˘
SEEMS TO HAVE BEEN MISLAID.6····˘/
LAST SEEN2··
WANDERING VAGUELY:5/˘˘/˘
QUITE OF HER OWN ACCORD,6····˘/
SHE TRIED TO GET DOWN TO THE END OF THE TOWN—FORTY SHILLINGS REWARD!”17···········/˘/˘˘/
James James2··
Morrison Morrison6/˘˘/˘˘
(Commonly known as Jim)6/˘˘···
Told his2··
Other relations5/˘˘/˘
Not to go blaming him.6···/˘·
James James2··
Said to his Mother,5···/˘
“Mother,” he said, said he;6/˘····
“You must never go down to the end of the town without consulting me.”17··/··········˘/˘·
James James2··
Morrison’s mother5/˘˘/˘
Hasn’t been heard of since.6/˘····
King John2··
Said he was sorry,5···/˘
So did the Queen and Prince.6······
King John2··
(Somebody told me)5/˘˘··
Said to a man he knew:6······
“If people go down to the end of the town, well, what can anyone do?”18·/˘···········/˘˘·
(Now then, very softly)6··/˘/˘
J.J.2··
M. M.2··
W. G. Du P.6/˘˘···
Took great2··
C/o his M*****4····
Though he was only 3.5···/˘
J.J.2··
Said to his M*****4····
“M*****,” he said, said he:5·····
“You-must-never-go-down-to-the-end-of-the-town-if-you-don’t-go-down- with ME!”18··/···············

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