Three Songs of Shattering

Edna St. Vincent Millay (1892–1950) · 1923

trochaic trimeter · ABAB · 28 lines · from Poems

The first rose on my rose-treeBudded, bloomed, and shattered,During sad days when to meNothing mattered.

Grief of grief has drained me clean;Still it seems a pityNo one saw,--it must have beenVery pretty.

Let the little birds sing;Let the little lambs play;Spring is here; and so ’tis spring;--But not in the old way!

I recall a placeWhere a plum-tree grew;There you lifted up your face,And blossoms covered you.

If the little birds sing,And the little lambs play,Spring is here; and so ’tis spring--But not in the old way!

All the dog-wood blossoms are underneath the tree!Ere spring was going--ah! spring is gone!And there comes no summer to the like of you and me,--Blossom time is early, but no fruit sets on.

All the dog-wood blossoms are underneath the tree,Browned at the edges, turned in a day;And I would with all my heart they trimmed a mound for me,And weeds were tall on all the paths that led that way!

About this text

Three Songs of Shattering is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #59167; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Edna St. Vincent Millay, Three Songs of Shattering, in Poems (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #59167, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/millay-poems/three-songs-of-shattering.html, id L24336.

Form and metre

Three Songs of Shattering is 28 lines in 7 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is trochaic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 81%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB treeA · shatteredB · meA · matteredB
  2. 2 ABAB cleanA · pityB · beenA · prettyB
  3. 3 ABAB singA · playB · springA · wayB
  4. 4 ABAB placeA · grewB · faceA · youB
  5. 5 ABAB singA · playB · springA · wayB
  6. 6 ABAB treeA · goneB · meA · onB
  7. 7 ABAB treeA · dayB · meA · wayB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The first rose on my rose-tree7·······
Budded, bloomed, and shattered,8/˘·˘·/˘˘
During sad days when to me7/˘·····
Nothing mattered.4/˘/˘
Grief of grief has drained me clean;8·····˘··
Still it seems a pity6····/˘
No one saw,--it must have been7·······
Very pretty.4/˘/˘
Let the little birds sing;6··/˘··
Let the little lambs play;6··/˘··
Spring is here; and so ’tis spring;--7·······
But not in the old way!6······
I recall a place5·/···
Where a plum-tree grew;5·····
There you lifted up your face,7··/˘···
And blossoms covered you.7·/˘/˘˘·
If the little birds sing,6··/˘··
And the little lambs play,6··/˘··
Spring is here; and so ’tis spring--7·······
But not in the old way!6······
All the dog-wood blossoms are underneath the tree!12····/˘··˘/··
Ere spring was going--ah! spring is gone!8···/····
And there comes no summer to the like of you and me,--13····/˘·······
Blossom time is early, but no fruit sets on.11/˘··/˘·····
All the dog-wood blossoms are underneath the tree,12····/˘··˘/··
Browned at the edges, turned in a day;9···/˘····
And I would with all my heart they trimmed a mound for me,13·············
And weeds were tall on all the paths that led that way!12············

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