Celestial Love

Michelangelo Buonarroti (1475–1564), translated by John Addington Symonds · 1878

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from Sonnets

I saw no mortal beauty with these eyesWhen perfect peace in thy fair eyes I found;But far within, where all is holy ground,My soul felt Love, her comrade of the skies:For she was born with God in Paradise;Else should we still to transient loves be bound;But, finding these so false, we pass beyondUnto the Love of Loves that never dies.Nay, things that die, cannot assuage the thirstOf souls undying; nor EternityServes Time, where all must fade that flourisheth.Sense is not love, but lawlessness accurst:This kills the soul; while our love lifts on highOur friends on earth--higher in heaven through death.

Words in this poem

undying a.
Not dying; imperishable; unending; immortal; as, the undying souls of men.
accurst p. p.
Doomed to destruction or misery; cursed; hence, bad enough to be under the curse; execrable; detestable; exceedingly hateful; -- as, an accursed deed.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Celestial Love is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sonnets, Project Gutenberg ebook #10314, the John Addington Symonds translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Michelangelo Buonarroti, Celestial Love, in Sonnets (1878), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #10314, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/michelangelo-sonnets/celestial-love.html, id L15194.

Form and metre

Celestial Love is 14 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 36% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBA-B-AC-DC-D eyesA · foundB · groundB · skiesA · paradise · boundB · beyond · diesA · thirstC · eternity · flourishethD · accurstC · high · deathD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I saw no mortal beauty with these eyes10···/˘/˘···
When perfect peace in thy fair eyes I found;10·˘/·······
But far within, where all is holy ground,10·······/˘·
My soul felt Love, her comrade of the skies:10·····/····
For she was born with God in Paradise;10·······/˘·
Else should we still to transient loves be bound;10·····/˘···
But, finding these so false, we pass beyond10·/˘·······
Unto the Love of Loves that never dies.10·······/˘·
Nay, things that die, cannot assuage the thirst10····˘/˘/··
Of souls undying; nor Eternity10··˘/˘·˘/˘˘
Serves Time, where all must fade that flourisheth.10·······/˘˘
Sense is not love, but lawlessness accurst:10·····/˘˘··
This kills the soul; while our love lifts on high10·····/····
Our friends on earth--higher in heaven through death.10/···/·/˘··

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