The Warrior

John McCrae (1872–1918) · 1919

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from In Flanders Fields, and Other Poems

He wrought in poverty, the dull grey days,But with the night his little lamp-lit roomWas bright with battle flame, or through a hazeOf smoke that stung his eyes he heard the boomOf Bluecher's guns; he shared Almeida's scars,And from the close-packed deck, about to die,Looked up and saw the "Birkenhead"'s tall sparsWeave wavering lines across the Southern sky:

Or in the stifling 'tween decks, row on row,At Aboukir, saw how the dead men lay;Charged with the fiercest in Busaco's strife,Brave dreams are his -- the flick'ring lamp burns low --Yet couraged for the battles of the dayHe goes to stand full face to face with life.

Words in this poem

strife n.
The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Warrior is in the public domain. This text is taken from In Flanders Fields, and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #353; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: John McCrae, The Warrior, in In Flanders Fields, and Other Poems (1919), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #353, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/mccrae-flanders/the-warrior.html, id L17033.

Form and metre

The Warrior is 14 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 36% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCD daysA · roomB · hazeA · boomB · scarsC · dieD · sparsC · skyD
  2. 2 ABCABC rowA · layB · strifeC · lowA · dayB · lifeC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
He wrought in poverty, the dull grey days,10···/˘˘····
But with the night his little lamp-lit room10·····/˘···
Was bright with battle flame, or through a haze10···/˘·····
Of smoke that stung his eyes he heard the boom10··········
Of Bluecher's guns; he shared Almeida's scars,10······˘/˘·
And from the close-packed deck, about to die,10··········
Looked up and saw the "Birkenhead"'s tall spars11···········
Weave wavering lines across the Southern sky:10·/˘·˘/·/˘·
Or in the stifling 'tween decks, row on row,10···/˘·····
At Aboukir, saw how the dead men lay;10··········
Charged with the fiercest in Busaco's strife,10···/˘·····
Brave dreams are his -- the flick'ring lamp burns low --10··········
Yet couraged for the battles of the day10·/˘··/˘···
He goes to stand full face to face with life.10··········

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