On Eastnor Knoll

John Masefield (1878–1967) · 1902

trochaic pentameter · unrhymed · 12 lines · from Salt-Water Ballads

Silent are the woods, and the dim green boughs areHushed in the twilight: yonder, in the path throughThe apple orchard, is a tired plough-boyCalling the cows home.

A bright white star blinks, the pale moon rounds, butStill the red, lurid wreckage of the sunsetSmoulders in smoky fire, and burns onThe misty hill-tops.

Ghostly it grows, and darker, the burningFades into smoke, and now the gusty oaks areA silent army of phantoms throngingA land of shadows.

Words in this poem

yonder adv.
At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
lurid a.
Pale yellow; ghastly pale; wan; gloomy; dismal. [L. luridus.]
wreckage n.
The act of wrecking, or state of being wrecked.
ghostly a.
Relating to the soul; not carnal or secular; spiritual; as, a ghostly confessor. [OE. gastlich, gostlich, AS. gastlic. See Ghost.]
gusty a.
Subject to, or characterized by, gusts or squalls; windy; stormy; tempestuous.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

On Eastnor Knoll is in the public domain. This text is taken from Salt-Water Ballads, Project Gutenberg ebook #52761; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: John Masefield, On Eastnor Knoll, in Salt-Water Ballads (1902), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #52761, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/masefield-salt-water/on-eastnor-knoll.html, id L12685.

Form and metre

On Eastnor Knoll is 12 lines in 3 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is trochaic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 74%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.2 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 75% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Silent are the woods, and the dim green boughs are11/˘·········
Hushed in the twilight: yonder, in the path through11···/·/˘····
The apple orchard, is a tired plough-boy11·/˘/˘··/˘··
Calling the cows home.5/˘···
A bright white star blinks, the pale moon rounds, but10··········
Still the red, lurid wreckage of the sunset11···/˘/˘··/·
Smoulders in smoky fire, and burns on10···/˘/˘···
The misty hill-tops.5·/˘··
Ghostly it grows, and darker, the burning10/˘···/˘·/˘
Fades into smoke, and now the gusty oaks are11·······/˘··
A silent army of phantoms thronging10·/˘/˘·/˘/˘
A land of shadows.5···/·

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