Fever Ship

John Masefield (1878–1967) · 1902

iambic heptameter · rhyming couplets · 15 lines · from Salt-Water Ballads

There’ll be no weepin’ gells ashore when our ship sails,Nor no crews cheerin’ us, standin’ at the rails,’N’ no Blue Peter a-foul the royal stay,For we’ve the Yellow Fever--Harry died to-day.--It’s cruel when a fo’c’s’le gets the fever!

’N’ Dick has got the fever-shakes, ’n’ look what I was told(I went to get a sack for him to keep him from the cold):‘Sir, can I have a sack?’ I says, ‘for Dick ’e’s fit to die.’‘Oh, sack be shot!’ the skipper says, ‘jest let the rotter lie!’--It’s cruel when a fo’c’s’le gets the fever!

It’s a cruel port is Santos, and a hungry land,With rows o’ graves already dug in yonder strip of sand,’N’ Dick is hollerin’ up the hatch, ’e says ’e’s goin’ blue,His pore teeth are chattering, ’n’ what’s a man to do?--It’s cruel when a fo’c’s’le gets the fever!

Words in this poem

harry v. i.
To make a predatory incursion; to plunder or lay waste.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
skipper n.
One who, or that which, skips.
jest n.
A deed; an action; a gest. [OE. jeste, geste, deed, action, story, tale, OF. geste, LL. gesta, orig., exploits, neut. pl. from L. gestus, p. p. of gerere to bear, carry, accomplish, perfor]
yonder adv.
At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
chattering n.
The act or habit of talking idly or rapidly, or of making inarticulate sounds; the sounds so made; noise made by the collision of the teeth; chatter.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Fever Ship is in the public domain. This text is taken from Salt-Water Ballads, Project Gutenberg ebook #52761; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: John Masefield, Fever Ship, in Salt-Water Ballads (1902), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #52761, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/masefield-salt-water/fever-ship.html, id L12648.

Form and metre

Fever Ship is 15 lines in 3 stanzas of 5 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets, 80% of the lines. The metre is iambic heptameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 12.8 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 7% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in iambic heptameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB- sailsA · railsA · stayB · dayB · fever
  2. 2 AABB- toldA · coldA · dieB · lieB · fever
  3. 3 AABB- landA · sandA · blueB · doB · fever
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic heptameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
There’ll be no weepin’ gells ashore when our ship sails,14/˘·····˘/·/˘··
Nor no crews cheerin’ us, standin’ at the rails,11······/˘···
’N’ no Blue Peter a-foul the royal stay,11···/˘···/˘·
For we’ve the Yellow Fever--Harry died to-day.--12···/˘/˘/˘···
It’s cruel when a fo’c’s’le gets the fever!11·/˘······/˘
’N’ Dick has got the fever-shakes, ’n’ look what I was told14·····/˘·······
(I went to get a sack for him to keep him from the cold):14··············
‘Sir, can I have a sack?’ I says, ‘for Dick ’e’s fit to die.’14··············
‘Oh, sack be shot!’ the skipper says, ‘jest let the rotter lie!’--14·····/˘····/˘·
It’s cruel when a fo’c’s’le gets the fever!11·/˘······/˘
It’s a cruel port is Santos, and a hungry land,13··/˘··/˘··/˘·
With rows o’ graves already dug in yonder strip of sand,14····˘/˘··/˘···
’N’ Dick is hollerin’ up the hatch, ’e says ’e’s goin’ blue,15············/˘·
His pore teeth are chattering, ’n’ what’s a man to do?--13····/˘˘······
It’s cruel when a fo’c’s’le gets the fever!11·/˘······/˘

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