A Bargain

Edwin Markham (1852–1940) · 1901

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 42 lines · from Lincoln and Other Poems

Scoffer, you cry, “Where is your ‘other world,’Your fabled heaven in far eternities?”Well said, but first, before your lip is curled,Tell (’tis a little thing) where this world is!

Wild tempest swirled on Moscow’s castled height;Wild sleet shot slanting down the wind of night;Quick snarling mouths from out the darkness sprangTo strike you in the face with tooth and fang.Javelins of ice hung on the roofs of all;

The very stones were aching in the wall,Where Ivan stood a watchman on his hour,Guarding the Kremlin by the northern tower,When, lo! a half-bare beggar tottered past,Shrunk up and stiffened in the bitter blast.A heap of misery he drifted by,And from the heap came out a broken cry.

At this the watchman straightened with a start;A tender grief was tugging at his heart,The thought of his dead father, bent and oldAnd lying lonesome in the ground so cold.Then cried the watchman starting from his post:“Little father, this is yours; you need it most!”And tearing off his hairy coat, he ranAnd wrapt it warm around the beggar man.

That night the piling snows began to fall,And the good watchman died beside the wall.But waking in the Better Land that liesBeyond the reaches of these cooping skies,Behold, the Lord came out to greet him home,Wearing the coat he gave by Moscow’s dome—Wearing the hairy heavy coat he gaveBy Moscow’s tower before he felt the grave!

And Ivan, by the old Earth-memory stirred,Cried softly with a wonder in his word:“And where, dear Lord, found you this coat of mine,A thing unfit for glory such as Thine?”Then the Lord answered with a look of light:“This coat, My son, you gave to Me last night.”

Who puts back into place a fallen bar,Or flings a rock out of a traveled road,His feet are moving toward the central star,His name is whispered in the God’s abode.

Words in this poem

castled a.
Having a castle or castles; supporting a castle; as, a castled height or crag.
sleet n.
The part of a mortar extending from the chamber to the trunnions.
fang v. t.
To catch; to seize, as with the teeth; to lay hold of; to gripe; to clutch. [OE. fangen, fongen, fon (g orig. only in p.p. and imp. tense), AS. f; akin to D. vangen, OHG. fahan, G. fahen, fangen, Isel. fa, Sw. f, f, Dan. fange, faae, Got]
aching a.
That aches; continuously painful. See Ache.
watchman n.
One set to watch; a person who keeps guard; a guard; a sentinel.
kremlin n.
The citadel of a town or city; especially, the citadel of Moscow, a large inclosure which contains imperial palaces, cathedrals, churches, an arsenal, etc. [Russ. kremle.]
lonesome a.
Secluded from society; not frequented by human beings; solitary.
abode n.
Act of waiting; delay. [OE. abad, abood, fr. abiden to abide. See Abide. For the change of vowel, cf. abode, imp. of abide.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

A Bargain is in the public domain. This text is taken from Lincoln & other poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #54527; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Edwin Markham, A Bargain, in Lincoln and Other Poems (1901), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #54527, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/markham-lincoln/a-bargain.html, id L10821.

Form and metre

A Bargain is 42 lines in 7 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 76% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 12% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB worldA · eternitiesB · curledA · isB
  2. 2 AABB- heightA · nightA · sprangB · fangB · all
  3. 3 -AABBCC wall · hourA · towerA · pastB · blastB · byC · cryC
  4. 4 AABBCCDD startA · heartA · oldB · coldB · postC · mostC · ranD · manD
  5. 5 AABBCCDD fallA · wallA · liesB · skiesB · homeC · domeC · gaveD · graveD
  6. 6 AABBCC stirredA · wordA · mineB · thineB · lightC · nightC
  7. 7 ABAB barA · roadB · starA · abodeB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Scoffer, you cry, “Where is your ‘other world,’10/˘·····/˘·
Your fabled heaven in far eternities?”11·/˘/˘··˘/˘˘
Well said, but first, before your lip is curled,10··········
Tell (’tis a little thing) where this world is!10···/˘·····
Wild tempest swirled on Moscow’s castled height;10·/˘··/˘/˘·
Wild sleet shot slanting down the wind of night;10···/˘·····
Quick snarling mouths from out the darkness sprang10·/˘····/˘·
To strike you in the face with tooth and fang.10··········
Javelins of ice hung on the roofs of all;10/˘········
The very stones were aching in the wall,10·/˘··/˘···
Where Ivan stood a watchman on his hour,11·/˘··/˘··/˘
Guarding the Kremlin by the northern tower,11/˘·/˘··/˘/˘
When, lo! a half-bare beggar tottered past,10·····/˘/˘·
Shrunk up and stiffened in the bitter blast.10···/˘··/˘·
A heap of misery he drifted by,10···/˘˘·/˘·
And from the heap came out a broken cry.10·······/˘·
At this the watchman straightened with a start;10···/˘/˘···
A tender grief was tugging at his heart,10·/˘··/˘···
The thought of his dead father, bent and old10·····/˘···
And lying lonesome in the ground so cold.10·/˘/˘·····
Then cried the watchman starting from his post:10···/˘/˘···
“Little father, this is yours; you need it most!”11/˘/˘·······
And tearing off his hairy coat, he ran10·/˘··/˘···
And wrapt it warm around the beggar man.10·······/˘·
That night the piling snows began to fall,10···/˘·˘/··
And the good watchman died beside the wall.10···/˘·˘/··
But waking in the Better Land that lies10·/˘··/˘···
Beyond the reaches of these cooping skies,10···/˘··/˘·
Behold, the Lord came out to greet him home,10˘/········
Wearing the coat he gave by Moscow’s dome—10/˘·····/··
Wearing the hairy heavy coat he gave10/˘·/˘/˘···
By Moscow’s tower before he felt the grave!10·/˘/······
And Ivan, by the old Earth-memory stirred,10·/˘····/˘·
Cried softly with a wonder in his word:10·/˘··/˘···
“And where, dear Lord, found you this coat of mine,10··········
A thing unfit for glory such as Thine?”10··˘/·/˘···
Then the Lord answered with a look of light:10···/˘·····
“This coat, My son, you gave to Me last night.”10··········
Who puts back into place a fallen bar,10·······/˘·
Or flings a rock out of a traveled road,10·······/˘·
His feet are moving toward the central star,11···/˘···/˘·
His name is whispered in the God’s abode.10···/˘···˘/

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