The Suitors

Vyasa (about 400 BC), translated by Romesh Chunder Dutt · 1899

trochaic octameter · rhyming couplets · 46 lines · from The Mahabharata (condensed)

"Brave Duryodhan and his brothers, princes of the Kuruland,Karna proud and peerless archer, sister! seek thy noble hand,

And Gandhara's warlike princes, Bhoja's monarch true and bold,And the son of mighty Drona, all bedecked in gems and gold!

King and prince from Matsya kingdom grace this noble wedding-feast,Monarchs from more distant regions north and south and west and east,

Tamralipta and Kalinga on the eastern ocean wave,Pattan's port whose hardy children western ocean's dangers brave!

From the distant land of Madra car-borne monarch Salya came,And from Dwarka's sea-girt regions Valadeva known to fame,

Valadeva and his brother Krishna sprung from Yadu's race,Of the Vrishni clan descended, soul of truth and righteous grace!

This is mighty Jayadratha come from Sindhu's sounding shore,Famed for warlike feats of valour, famed alike for sacred lore,

This is fair Kosala's monarch whose bright deeds our heralds sing,From the sturdy soil of Chedi, Sisupala peerless king,

This is mighty Jarasandha, come from far Magadha's land,These are other princely suitors, sister! eager for thy hand!

All the wide earth's warlike rulers seek to shoot the distant aim,Princess, whoso hits the target, choose as thine that prince of fame!"

Decked with jewels, young and valiant, all aflame with soft desire,Conscious of their worth and valour, all the suitors rose in ire,

Nobly born, of lofty presence, full of young unyielding pride,Like the tuskers wild and lordly on Himalay's wooded side!

Each his rival marks as foeman as in field of deadly strife,Each regards the fair Draupadi as his own his queenly wife,

On the gorgeous field they gather by a maddening passion fired,And they strive as strove the bright gods, when by Uma's love inspired!

And the gods in cloud-borne chariots came to view the scene so fair,Bright ADITYAS in their splendour, MARUTS in the moving air,

Winged suparnas, scaly nagas, deva-rishis pure and high,For their music famed, gandharvas, fair apsaras of the sky!

Valadeva armed with ploughshare, Krishna chief of righteous fame,With the other Yadu chieftains to that wondrous bridal came,

Krishna marked the sons of Pandu eager for the queenly bride,Like wild tuskers for a lotus, like the fire that ashes hide,

And he knew the warlike brothers in their holy Brahman guise,Pointed them to Valadeva, gazing with a glad surprise!

But the other chiefs and monarchs with their eyes upon the bride,Marked nor knew the sons of Pandu sitting speechless by their side,

And the long-armed sons of Pandu smitten by KANDARPA'S dart,Looked on her with longing languor and with love-impassioned heart!

Bright immortals gaily crowding viewed the scene surpassing fair,Heavenly blossoms soft descending with a perfume filled the air,

Bright celestial cars in concourse sailed upon the cloudless sky,Drum and flute and harp and tabor sounded deep and sounded high!

Words in this poem 17
princess n.
A female prince; a woman having sovereign power, or the rank of a prince. [F. princesse. See Prince, and cf. Princesse.]
whoso pron.
Whosoever. Piers Plowman.
valiant a.
Vigorous in body; strong; powerful; as, a valiant fencer. [OE. valiant, F. vaillant, OF. vaillant, valant, originally p. pr. of OF. & F. valoir to be worth, L. valere to be strong. See Wield, and cf. Avail, Convalesce, ]
aflame adv.
Inflames; glowing with light or passion; ablaze. G. Eliot. [Pref. a- + flame.]
nobly adv.
Of noble extraction; as, nobly born or descended.
foeman n.
An enemy in war. [AS. fhman.]
strife n.
The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]
queenly a.
Like, becoming, or suitable to, a queen. [AS. cwenlic feminine.]
gorgeous a.
Imposing through splendid or various colors; showy; fine; magnificent. [OF. gorgias beautiful, glorious, vain, luxurious; cf. OF. gorgias ruff, neck handkerchief, and F. gorge throat, and se pengorger to assume airs. Cf. Gorge, n.]
splendour n.
Great brightness; brilliant luster; brilliancy; as, the splendor ot the sun. B. Jonson. [L. fr. splendere to shine: cf. F. splendeur.]
deva n.
A god; a deity; a divine being; an idol; a king. [Skr. d. Cf. Deity.]
ploughshare n.
The share of a plow, or that part which cuts the slice of earth or sod at the bottom of the furrow. Plowshare bone (Anat.), the pygostyle.
wondrous adv.
In a wonderful or surprising manner or degree; wonderfully. [OE. wonders, adv. (later also adj.). See Wonder, n., and cf. -wards.]
speechless a.
Destitute or deprived of the faculty of speech.
gaily adv.
Merrily; showily. See gaily. [From Gay.]
concourse n.
A moving, flowing, or running together; confluence. [F. concours, L. concursus, fr. concurrere to run together. See Concur.]
cloudless a.
Without a cloud; clear; bright.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Suitors is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Mahabharata (condensed), Project Gutenberg ebook #19630, the Romesh Chunder Dutt translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Suitors is 46 lines in 23 stanzas of 2 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets, 96% of the lines. The metre is trochaic octameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 15.0 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending.

See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in trochaic octameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA kurulandA · handA
  2. 2 AA boldA · goldA
  3. 3 AA feastA · eastA
  4. 4 AA waveA · braveA
  5. 5 AA cameA · fameA
  6. 6 AA raceA · graceA
  7. 7 AA shoreA · loreA
  8. 8 AA singA · kingA
  9. 9 AA landA · handA
  10. 10 AA aimA · fameA
  11. 12 AA prideA · sideA
  12. 13 AA strifeA · wifeA
  13. 14 AA firedA · inspiredA
  14. 15 AA fairA · airA
  15. 16 AA highA · skyA
  16. 17 AA fameA · cameA
  17. 18 AA brideA · hideA
  18. 19 AA guiseA · surpriseA
  19. 20 AA brideA · sideA
  20. 21 AA dartA · heartA
  21. 22 AA fairA · airA
  22. 23 AA skyA · highA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic octameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
"Brave Duryodhan and his brothers, princes of the Kuruland,15······/˘/˘·····
Karna proud and peerless archer, sister! seek thy noble hand,15····/˘/˘/˘··/˘·
And Gandhara's warlike princes, Bhoja's monarch true and bold,15····/·/˘··/····
And the son of mighty Drona, all bedecked in gems and gold!15····/˘···˘/····
King and prince from Matsya kingdom grace this noble wedding-feast,15······/˘··/˘/˘·
Monarchs from more distant regions north and south and west and east,15/···/˘/˘·······
Tamralipta and Kalinga on the eastern ocean wave,15··········/˘/˘·
Pattan's port whose hardy children western ocean's dangers brave!15····/˘/˘/˘/˘/˘·
From the distant land of Madra car-borne monarch Salya came,15··/˘··/˘··/····
And from Dwarka's sea-girt regions Valadeva known to fame,15······/˘·······
Valadeva and his brother Krishna sprung from Yadu's race,15······/˘/˘·····
Of the Vrishni clan descended, soul of truth and righteous grace!15·····˘/˘····/˘·
This is mighty Jayadratha come from Sindhu's sounding shore,15··/˘········/˘·
Famed for warlike feats of valour, famed alike for sacred lore,15··/···/˘·˘/·/˘·
This is fair Kosala's monarch whose bright deeds our heralds sing,15······/····//˘·
From the sturdy soil of Chedi, Sisupala peerless king,15··/˘········/˘·
This is mighty Jarasandha, come from far Magadha's land,15··/˘···········
These are other princely suitors, sister! eager for thy hand!15··/˘/˘/˘/˘/˘···
All the wide earth's warlike rulers seek to shoot the distant aim,15····/·/˘····/˘·
Princess, whoso hits the target, choose as thine that prince of fame!"15/˘/˘··/˘·······
Decked with jewels, young and valiant, all aflame with soft desire,16··/˘··/˘·˘/··˘/˘
Conscious of their worth and valour, all the suitors rose in ire,15/˘····/˘··/˘···
Nobly born, of lofty presence, full of young unyielding pride,15/˘··/˘/˘···˘/˘·
Like the tuskers wild and lordly on Himalay's wooded side!15······/˘····/˘·
Each his rival marks as foeman as in field of deadly strife,15··/˘··/˘····/˘·
Each regards the fair Draupadi as his own his queenly wife,15·˘/·········/˘·
On the gorgeous field they gather by a maddening passion fired,15··/˘··/˘··/˘/˘/
And they strive as strove the bright gods, when by Uma's love inspired!16··········/˘·˘/˘
And the gods in cloud-borne chariots came to view the scene so fair,15······/˘·······
Bright ADITYAS in their splendour, MARUTS in the moving air,15······/˘····/˘·
Winged suparnas, scaly nagas, deva-rishis pure and high,15····/˘··/˘·····
For their music famed, gandharvas, fair apsaras of the sky!15··/˘···········
Valadeva armed with ploughshare, Krishna chief of righteous fame,15······/˘/˘··/˘·
With the other Yadu chieftains to that wondrous bridal came,15··/˘··/˘··/˘/˘·
Krishna marked the sons of Pandu eager for the queenly bride,15/˘······/˘··/˘·
Like wild tuskers for a lotus, like the fire that ashes hide,15······/˘··/·/˘·
And he knew the warlike brothers in their holy Brahman guise,15····/·/˘··/˘···
Pointed them to Valadeva, gazing with a glad surprise!15/˘······/˘···˘/
But the other chiefs and monarchs with their eyes upon the bride,15··/˘··/········
Marked nor knew the sons of Pandu sitting speechless by their side,15········/˘/˘···
And the long-armed sons of Pandu smitten by KANDARPA'S dart,15········/˘·····
Looked on her with longing languor and with love-impassioned heart!15····/˘/˘···˘/˘·
Bright immortals gaily crowding viewed the scene surpassing fair,15·˘/˘/˘/˘···˘/˘·
Heavenly blossoms soft descending with a perfume filled the air,15/˘/˘·˘/˘··˘/···
Bright celestial cars in concourse sailed upon the cloudless sky,15·˘/˘··/·····/˘·
Drum and flute and harp and tabor sounded deep and sounded high!15······/˘/˘··/˘·

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